Dark Love! by Piyu(Priyal) (Rishbala Fanfiction) Chapter 11 [30/08]

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Hi guys,

I'm Priyal You can call me Piyu 😃 & I'm new to the forum. 😊 This is my first writing about Rishbala 😳 Hope you will like it 😊 I wish to continue if I get a good response 😊

Dark Love !

She felt dizzy and her head was getting heavier with each passing second. Everything started spinning around in front of her eyes and before she knew it knew it she collapsed...

After a few hours


She woke up with a splitting headache.


She tried opening her eyes but was not able to.


Man was I blindfolded?? She thought as she tried moving her hands when the realization struck her hard.

Her hands had been tied behind her back and her legs were tied together too.

She rubbed her back to whatever she was tied to in a desperate movement to know where exactly she was; she was tied to a pillar it seemed.

Fear gripped her hard as her heart struggled against the obvious.

HAD EVERYTHING COME TO AN END???

Her thoughts were broken by the sounds of footsteps getting louder and louder. Someone held her head up by holding her chin and then again pushed it down.

"Madhubala Ahaannn...Don't ever raise your head in front of me. From now on you are my slave till the day you die. Otherwise I know what tooo..." She could not hear the rest as she passed out again as the reality had hit her hard; how much ever she wanted to deny the fact she couldn't.


SHE HAD BEEN KIDNAPPED!



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How was it guys??? Please forgive me if you don't like it It's my first writing!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! Interesting plot Piyu!! Liked it... Seems promising!!
Continue soon dear!! PM me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations on your story Piyu 🤗 Lovely prologue ❤️ Looking forward to read more 😳 Continue soon. PM me 😳
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im in Piyu...welcome to the forum...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting do cont na pm me plz
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wonderful start
i am curious
please continue
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thats interesting priyal...
would luv to read more of it...
pm me when u update...
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Interesting plot Liked it !Continue soon dear!! PM me.
and happy navratri
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hi piyu...its a wonderful prologue...plz continue soon & pm me
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Love the concept! Please pm me the next update.

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