KR SS:Luv Accepted*part 5 finally updated*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guyzz dis d frst tym I m writing...i m really abd at dis bt i had dis stry in mie mind after Friday's episode n i wanted to share it with all kriyaansh n d3 fans...plz bear it with me

in my SS everything is d same..kria is being deported to new yrk..bt guyz ignore d precap..

Here it goes-

At d airport-

A grl was waiting fr her flight...it is delayed by an hr due to d harsh weather conditions. the grl is siting n crying silently
G: Y universe ji, y(yess it none other dan our kria ghai) y always me????pehle mujhe apne frnds aur REY ko chod na pada den maa mujhe ke chod ke chali gyi n ab mujhe phirse aapne frnds ko,REY ko chodke jana padh rha hai. Itne tym baad mujhe ek chance mila tha ki aapne frnda ka trust dobara jeet sakun aur unko khush kar sakun bt aapne mujhse vo chance bhi cheen kar lia😭😭. Aap hi k meri help karni hogi.
As soon she said dis her phone rang. Seeing d caller id a small smile crept on her face(no guyzz it nt our rey).She picked up d call n a boy spoke frm d other side.

B: hey sexy(guyz plz dont hate me..d boy is a really imp. character in my KR luv story) India chali gyi toh mujhe bhul gyi..huph..he gave a sad sigh n said...sexy ke universe ji yeh din dekhane ke lie hi mujhe zinda rakha tha na...he said trying to cry
K:(smiling)Rohan...i m srry..
Bt she was cut in b/w
B:"woah woah..yeh rohan kaun hai..main kisi rohan ko nhi janta...aap jante ho sexy ke universe ji aur aap 'meri'( frndly wala meri) sexy ko rula kyun rhe ho..(he realized dat kria ws cryng after listening to her voice
K:"Rohan"
Ro:"sexy"
K:" acha baba..hawty i'm srry maine call nhi kia
R:"dats lyk a gud grl..actually no nt a gud grl."
K:"kyun"
R:"kyunki..tu ro rhi thi aur mujhe bataya bhi nhi kya hua..acha hua maine call kar lia...ab bata kya hua"
K:"Actually..." n she narrated d whole story while crying in between
hai"
Ro:"Iss wrld mein meri sexy ke face se koi bhi smile nhi cheen sakta jab tak main hun n waise esse bade bade deshon mein essi choti choti baatein hoti rehti haišŸ˜‰"he said dis flirting
K:laughing..."hawty how do u always manage to lighten mie mood????"she said innocently.
Ro:"coz tera hawty hun na n now dont cry, y fear wen ur hawty is here.Meri baat wahan ke head se kara"
K:(confused)"kyun"
Ro:"tujhe apni gang ke pass wapas jana hai na toh kara."
k:(again confused)"haan, bt.."
she was cut in b/w by rohan
Ro:"bt vut kuch nhi bas baat kara."
She went n handed her to d head sayng dat sum1 want to talk to him.
d one sided convo-
H:"hello..kaun hai".. he said vry arrogantly.
H:"I'm srry sir."
H:"yes sir."
H:"ok sir."
H:"sir ho jayega sir."
saying dis he went away leaving a confused kria n telling her to wait dere.Kria took d phone.
K:"hawty..yeh head tujhe sir kyun bola rha tha aur yeh kya hua abhi."
Ro:" mujhe nhi dad ko bol rha tha..dad is d ambassador posted here n he talked to d head...u r visa has been extended so now call n tell swayum(yes he knew swayam n nt
only swayam bt every1..kria had shared everything with him) to pick u up.. dont u dare take a cab its too late n i dont want u to wait n search fr a can n yaa dere is suprise fr u..open gate of d guest house at 10 am tmrw..u ll get ur suprise."
All dis tym kria ws just listening to him with a shocked expression n her mouth wide open. Finally she spoke.
K:"y didnt u tell me dat u r dad is d ambassador...tu(kria saying tu n not aap..haha😃😃)toh mujhe aapna bestie bolta hai ja mujhe baat nhi karni."
Ro:"coz main aapne frnds aapni personality se banana chatha hun na ki aapne dad ki power se."
K:"tujhe toh swayam ka bhai hona chaiye tha(she sais dis laughing at her own joke)..bt joke's apart thnq hawty."
Ro:"hey sexy ke universe ji main deaf kyun nhi ho gya yeh sune se pehle..thnq..tune mujhe paraya kar diya aaj...jaa mujhe tujhse baat nhi karni(he said dramatically faking anger)
K:"acha bas kar nautanki...kal baat karte hai"
Ro:"hmm...chalo phir se dob jata hun teri yaadon mein."
K:"ek no. ka flirt hai
..chal byee"
Ro:"byee sexy...luv u(frnd wala luv u..kriyaansh vala luv u nhi)
K:"byee".
Kria called swayam n briefed him abt wat happened..he was overwhelmed(he knew abt rohan n kria strong bond of frnd ship as accordng to d show dey wre in

touch).evrey1 was very happy n eager to meet.Swayam drpped her home. Every1 slept peacefully dat nyt except 1..our vry own THE REYAANSH SINGHANIA
At rey's house-
R:"Yeh kaunsa dost hai kria ka mujhe to kabhi nhi bataya iske baare mein...kahin yeh vo hi dost to nhi kiska msg padhke kria uss din itna khush ho rhi thi(yaad hai na kaunsa din..yes jis din krisha were checking rey's feelings towards kria)..huuh..mujhe bataya nhi nhi..aur swayam kyun call kara mujhe bhi o kar sakti thi na..lekin mujhe kyun karegi uske toh bas 2 hi frnd hai na swayam n dat idiot patanhi kahan se aa gya...dude yeh tu kya bol rha..kria sab ki frnd hai kisi ko bhi call kar sakti hai..exactly kisko ko bhi kar sakti hai mujhe bhi kar sakti thi..dude phir se...just me hapy dat u can see her again..WAT no..b happy dat u can rehearse with HER again..WAt no no...b happy coz we can hv reherasals again n get d affiliation..yes bhi happy fr dis...bechara humara rey puri nyt khudko samjhta rhe yeh bt khud nhi
samjhna chata ki kitna luv karta kai kria se.

nxt day
Guest house-
kria woke up n saw d tym..2 mins to 10..remembering her hawty's wrd she immediately rushed to d door n opened it..n was shocked n overwhelmed with joy seeing d
sight in front f her
K:"hawty...u actually here in India..i cant believe it.."
Ro:"yes sexy..tere lie aa gya"
K:"sachi sachi bat kyun aaya hai."
Ro:"tere lie n also coz dean sir bhejha hai to look after ur rehearsals n everythingšŸ˜‰"(rohan was d most responsible student of d academy n manages evrthing n he came frhelping kria with d rehearsal on dean's order)
guyzz i m cutting all d part wen rohan meets VP n kria tells VP evrything.Now rohan will b joining dem in classes n rehearsals n yaa kria has called ever1 in d atrium to introduce rohan to dem n vice versa
in Atrium-
sh:"hey kria kahan reh gayi"
R:(murmurs)aapne dost se baat kar rhi hogi"😔
sh:"rey kuch kahan tumne???"
R:"ab..ab..nhi kuch nhi"
just den kria entered with rohan..every grl was drooling over rohan(imagine karan wahi as rohan) n boyz were jealous of him
K:"guyzz meet rohan..my frnd..iski vajah se i m back here."
rohan cums foward putting his hand around kria's waist n saying
Ro:"guyz essa kuch nhi hai..sexy mujhe zyada hi credit deti hai bdw i m rohan."
evry1 introduced demselves
rinni:"yeh sexy kaun hai."
Ro:(eyening towards his sexy)hey hain na"
rey was fuming with anger n jealousy
R:(in mind)how dare he call her sexy...aur kabse hath kria ki waist par rakha hua hai...kria ko nickname dena ka ryt sirf mujhe hai..aur nickname rakha to kya SEXY...i m
gonna kill him aagar issne dobara meri baatcutter ko sexy bula to..WAT MERI BAATCUTTER...wat r u thinking rey..vo uska frnd hai...haan frnd tabhi to bol rha hun dhur
rhe frnd hai bf nhi aur yeh kria bi kitne comfortably khadi hai
all dis while swayam was enjoyng rey's expressionšŸ˜†
Simmi:"kria sexy n all haan."
K:"guyzz aisa kuch nhi hai..yeh mujhe sexy bula tha aur main esse hawty."
R:"WAT??"
k:"kya hua rey"
R:(realizing he ws too loud)...ab..ab vo kuch nhi vo..vo..main..er..main..vo swayam ki baat sunne ke essa bol rha tha...haan..haan...swayam said sumthng to me...hain na swayam eyeing n silently
pleading him for help."
sw:(understanding his expression)"haan haan he is ryt maine kuch kaha tha."
K:"kya?"
sw n rey lukng at each other tryng to find a excuse bt unknowingly vicky hepled dem
v:"vo sab chodo kria...chalo canteen chaltein i m really hungry."
Nil:"tujhe kitni bhook lati hai..chalo guyzz chalte hai"
every1 agreed n dey went to d canteen...evey1 was njyng except one kria's linecutter.
R:(in mind)kria isse hawty kaise bula sakti hai..yeh toh hot bhi nhi hain main zyada hawt hun...n har baat pe hawty bolna zaruri hai kya...huph...mujhe to sabke samne
baatcutter nhi bolne nhi deti..he out of his thoughts on hearing d nicky brothers talking...all d boys ecxpt rohan can hear d convo coz he was sitting beside grls
v:"yaar mujhe lagta hai ki kria aur ro ke beech mein kuch toh hai dekh kaise chipke baatein kar rhe hain
rey saw both of dem...dey were really vry close to each other n ro's hand was tightly holding kria's hand
nil:" yaa ryt..itne dino se kria kitne tensed mood mein thi bt now kitni khush hai iske aate hi aur yeh log sath mein kitne ache lagte hain"
rey could nt hear n see all dis he immediately stood up n said
R:"guyz mujhe kuch imp. kaam hai... i ll meet u in class"
Ro:"guyzz i also hv to go,VP sir se kuch baat karni hai..byee guyzz,byee sexy"
saying dis he gave small peck on kria's cheek n went away
every1:"ohooo"
nicKy bros n amar n bharat:(in dere style)"C-H-E-M-I-S-T-R-Y"
K:"stop it guyz..he is mie frnd"
sh:"vo to hum bhi hain bt hum to essa nhi karte"
k:"guyz plz yaar"(vry embrassed)
Rey was buring with jealousy n stormed away frm dere obviously towards Fire escape
In F.E.
R:(thinking)samjhta kya hai yeh rohan khudh ko..pehle waist pe haath rakha den sexy sen itna chipkar flirt kar rha tha den kiss...o God..n kria koi prob nhi hai...how could she matlab vo bhi..vo tho kabhi essi nhi thi..mere sah to ladti rehti hain n usse ke sath..."



guyzz bas itna hi i m really tired...
Srry fr any errors n mistakes
Precap-rey thoughts continued..kriyaansh scenes n while walking to class kria abt to fall bt ro catching her..every1 teasing n rey fuming with jealousy n swayam talking to rey..


i hope u lyk it...all critism welcomed
do comment after reading


Part 2: pg 3
Part 3: pg 5
Part 4: pg 7
Part 5: pg 10
Edited by luvuKR - 11 years ago

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ramya.reddy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowiee awesome updatešŸ‘
jaldii update karoo
mujhe bhii pm karooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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supab yaar
love it
rey kitna jealous ho gaya tha
n kria ws really comfy with ro
update soon
n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was fabulous ad great well written... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superbe ...!
amazingly written ...!
love it rey is jealous ...!
please PM me when you continue , would love to read further on, thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guyzz thanks a lot...i m really on 7th cloud
it really feels grt to b appreciated...thnq thnq thnq thnq😊
n yaa i ll pm all of u as i ll update..thnq
Edited by luvuKR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww...enjoyed it thoroughly..
jelous rey is always fun to watch..
i always wanted this to happen in d3..
hope we get a 3rd angle in kriyaansh to jelous rey..
loved this part..
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept
something different
loving d jealous rey
update soon d next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sooo good
Simple funny i especially loved the 'J' factor
Kriya Rohan Reyaansh are soooper
CHEMISTRY timing was awesome
I am totally loving this
Update soon
And pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi... Awesome start... Loved the update... It was simply superb...:/ continue soon n pm me plz ! :-)

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