Ariya SS:-' NRI Munda 'Update 4 pg - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
nice prologue..

Plz continue soon..

Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
awesome concept
seems interesting
bt yeh ariya ka hi haina???????????
agar hoga then i will surely read this
thanx 4 pm
cont soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Thanx 4 liking and commenting

sangeethbala, purnima209, krutishah, cutiepieShreya, cute_ariya, Godly_Affection, rinku95, subhakmhl, abjeya, Pisces_Gurl, sdutta, Aabish_02, skrafty, zubiya92, GOLD.A, Live-life, rizwanaa, M.V.Kohli007, pink1, pinkerbell, chand91, zebbie0504, _Nikita_, Aks13, khemanisarita, ll_megha_ll,

Love u all

Kal update nahi ker pae us k lea sorry 😛 Nw enjoy part one ...second part will post soon but it will depend on ur response 😉 U want it or not

Will pm send to who r buddy on mine pm list !who r not in it then mention in ur comment I will send u
Love
Mish
Edited by Mishti_k5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part -1
One girl in her room just write her dairy

Hey diary
Aaj Mai sachi Pagal ho javage (today I'm going to be mad) Saray dey upper ik boot sawar ho Gaya hai vo or koe nahi,"NRI" hai ... Jo mujhay Dekhnay k lea aa rha hai... Suna hai vo new York Mai doctor hai ...hoga waha ka hoga ...Mai apny seher(city) ki mutiyar ho ...sabhi mujhay keh Rhay ,"riya vo Karo...kaprhay(dress) thodhe bhari pehno... And so on

Kya dairy yeh sab itnay hyper kyu hai ... Mai Jaise ho vaise he thik ho... Bejee kehte hai," pyar vo Ehsaas Jo dil sai hotta hai...apki atma (soul) sai hotta hai ...na ki apki dress. sai ,,,,,na he apki uper wali sundreta sai... Sirf beejee hai Jo meray ankahay bato k jawab detti hai...I love mine bejee...

You knw diary ..,.uff mai buddho ho ...,tumay bataya bhe nahi ...or soch rhe ho tumay pata ho...(she hit her forehead playfully) beejee kehti ,""hai jab un honay baujii... Dekha tha na unk dil Mai alag se feeling honay lag gae the ...jis ko hum mehsoos to ker saktay Hai... But sabdo (words) Mai beyan(express) nahi ker saktay... Mai soch rhe ho yeh feeling mujhay kab mehsoos hoge...

Chalo yeh mere roj ki batay hai...by take care ...

She closed her dairy she remember something and again she open diary and write something That are

" diary ik baat to Mai bhul gae kehni ...vo longoor kal aa rha hai ...koe janwar ki baat nahi ker rhe ...us NRI ki baat ker rhe ho ...kal hoga uska riya Honda k sath samna ...

But one voice came :- riya

Riya turn to voice and closed her diary and ans her voice

Riya :- ji ma

Her mom:- riya kitna time ho Gaya hai...abhi tak soye nahi ...huh? Ager ankho nichay dark circle ho Gay to ...abhi so jaa... Or haa bejee... Ko Mai dood( milk ) dey dette ho

Riya :- nahi maa,,,,,,Mai bejee k pass jatte ho...

Her mom :- tum mere baat Sunti kyu nahi...aab apni addat mat dal humay

Her mom eyes filled with tears and riya also sad to heard that

Riya with watery eyes:- maa ... Aaj sai praya ker doge ...

Her mom came close to her and and hide her embarrassed anne that hug show lot of care ,love ,affection of mother to her child


Riya's mom :- yeh reet hai riya...jisko her bete k maa- baap ko nibani hotte hai...

Riya tight her hug on her mother ...one tears drop from her eyes...

Riya :- maa ...Aisa nahi ho sakta aap koe gher jawae dhund lo...

Her mom hit her with playfully ...

Her mother:- hat pagali...asha or mat rola... Or apnay asu ko bacha ley bedae k waqt kam ayegay...verna ajkal ki to ladhika to roti nahi... Hai...pata nahi kya ho Gaya hai...jab mere shadi Huye the na...tab Mai itna ruye the ...

Before she complete her sentence

Voice:- ki hmray biyas(that is river in punjab) Mai sunami aa gae the...

Both ladies turn to owner of voice and saw one boy who has stunning personality he is near about 26 years

Riya's mother :- Sam

Sam came to them and her mother hold his ear sam pretend that he has pain

Sam:- maa...dard ho rha hai chodho na...

She left his ear and hug her both children

Mother :- mery bachay...

Voice :- Tery nahi mery hai...kulwinder...

Both riya and sam :- not again ...

Kulwinder :- kya hai ji...jab yeh sharat kery to merey ...jab na kery to aap k ha...

Before he reply ...riya interrupt him

Riya :- papa hum aap dono k ashay bachay hai...aab to Tera mera mat Karo...

He came and hug her that person is her dad .they did group hug .

Her mother :- aab Chalo sabhi so jaooo...riya Raat ko cold cream lagana...

Father :- sir ko tel ki Malidh dena ...

Sam and riya rolled their eyes ...this instruction is not new 4 them Becoz their parents always use to this lines since childhood

Both child :- ok baujii...

They did what their parents instructed them ...

In the morning

Riya slept peacefully ...one girl came and shake her

Girl:- riya ...riya... Utho ...

But our riya want to sleep more and just hide her ear with pillow .girl pick one pillow and hit riya with riya.riya jerked from this fighting and get up and see her

Riya :- tere to...

Girl:- gali nahi riya...

Riya with anger :- Mai gali nahi dey rhe ho...but tujhay Mai chodoge nahi...Ayesha

Ayesha :- Mai konsa keh rhe ho mujhay chod...ik minute tunay mujhay pakad liya to to us NRI ko kaisay pakadge...

Riya with more anger run behind her ...Ayesha just want to escap from riya ...with the hurry ness she bang to someone ...with sudden reaction she unbalanced and going to fall but some strong hand save her from falling ...she tightly closed her eyes from fear ...but later she find that she hang on air...and open her eyes and found her love ...

Ayesha :- Sam... (blushing face)

Sam wink on her and saw his effect on her ...he help her to stand properly

Sam :- Ayesha dhyan sai... Kahe gir jatte to...

Riya ans his question

Riya :- Bhae aap k hottay Aisa kaisay hotta ...

Both r embarressed and Ayesha glare on her with fake anger and in hide ," she enjoy (dil Mai laddooo fotta...)

Precap :- NRI ki entry ...

Excuse for any error
Me did not read to prove ...

Love

Mish


Edited by Mishti_k5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super Duper awesome start dr...!!!!!

The diary entry part was superb...!!!!!
Her convo with her mom was quite emotional...!!!!!
Loved their family moment... thy were so sweet...!!!!!
Riyasha's antics were really cute...!!!!!
Samsha's moment was adorable...!!!! loved how he saved her from falling...!!!!!
The way Riya teased thm both was so cute...!!!!!
Loved it...!!!!! 🤗for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!
Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Agyee mam... kahan gayab thi kal...???????
mishree thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aks13

Agyee mam... kahan gayab thi kal...???????


Yepiii aa gae 😛😉

Kal gayab Shayar the ...feel not gud ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Great update
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
awesome update
Riya penning down her feelings in her diary was nice
Riya n here mom convo was nice as well as heart touching
Aisha n Riya teasing n chasing each other was nice
Aisha n Sameer moment was lovely!!
eagerly waiting for NRI or Riya's langoor's entry😆
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Loved it Mish Awesome
Beautiful update
loved riya convo with her mom n
relation she shared with BIJi 😊
Nice update
waiting for NRI Entry 😆😆
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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