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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys...I'm here with a short OS. I had written this two days back but didn't feel like posting as I'm unsure about. I felt it's nothing but a piece of crap. Do leave your honest reviews. And pardon me for the title, couldn't think anything else than this.



*-*-* Young Love *-*-*


She was sulking in one of the chairs in the library from the past one hour. And the sole reason behind this bad mood of hers ishim, her oh-so-cool-and-popular-boyfriend. It has been two days he met her and that's the reason she is in a bad mood. He is the captain of the college football team and recently they have won the national football tournament, yet again for the third time in a row. He was so busy in celebrating this that he almost forgot that he has a girlfriend who is waiting for him to meet her so that she can congratulate him, but no he has the guts to go on her veins and get the hell out of her. It's not that she didn't try to meet him. Of course she did but each of her attempts went in vain. Well somewhere even she is responsible for all this. Her boyfriend is none other than Reyansh Singhaniya, the Mr. popular guy of the college, thecharmerindeed. It was her wish to let their relationship be a secret and just because of this wish of hers she couldn't even claim him, hers in the public. Having no other option she had to bear those bimbos sticking onto him and burn with jealousy.



"Kriya what's wrong with you girl? Are you even going to speak up?" One of her friends asked.



"Can't you see I'm in a bad frame of mind and am not at all interested to talk to anyone of you?" She said furiously. Thankfully they are in a corner of the library away from the eyes of the librarian who would have pushed her out of the library for breaking the silence' rule.



"You have fun with this bad mood of yours, we're leaving." Saying this, her friends got up and left leaving her alone.



"Great! Nothing can be much better than this." She threw sarcasm at herself and sulked even deeper. A pair of eyes had been watching her from a distance and on finding her alone they approached her. Suddenly she felt someone's eyes on her. Looking around, she finally spotted him leaning against one of the cook shelves giving his appealing smile. Usually this smile of his made her shudder with nervousness but today it played the role of a fuel in her anger. His smile irritated her. She turned around towards this other side and picked up a book at pretended to read it. But all her concentration was on him. From the corner of her eyes she observed all his actions. He still stared at her leaning against that book shelf, until a girl walked up to him. She couldn't hear what they were speaking but the way that girl was speaking, it seemed as if she was congratulating him. Her jaws opened wide, as she saw her kissing his cheek and he did nothing but just smile.



That poor book had to suffer the pain as she crushed it as hard as possible. This wasn't the way she behaved. Never had she felt jealous of such things but today she did. She wasn't jealous actually but just aggravated. She wanted to be with him and spend time with him. She saw that girl leaving and he continued his business of staring at her. After a while he walked towards the table where she was sitting and sat exactly facing her. His constant gaze made her shift uncomfortably in her seat. No matter how her mood was, his intense gaze had the audacity to make her go all weak.



He moved closer to her, making her eyes wide. Taking the book from her hands he turned it upside down and placed it back in her hands. "I never knew you could read books in an upside down condition." He said with a chuckle, settling back in his seat. That's when she realized that the book was in the opposite direction when she pretended to read it. This made her feel embarrassed.



She got up and proceeded towards a book shelf pretending to search for a book. But the reality was that she was trying to calm down her senses which had gone haywire. Suddenly she felt his presence near her. As she turned around, he caged her between him and the shelf. Her eyes widened at this. They were in a public place and what was he upto, she wondered. He did nothing but stare at her intensely. Her eyes wandered everywhere else but not at him. Her anger seemed to be lost somewhere and nervousness replaced it.



"Look at me." He said. Slowly lifting her eyes she looked at him.



"Will you not congratulate me?" He questioned.



"So you remember that my wishes are pending. Good to know that." She said slow tone taunting him. He chuckled at this.



"I love it when your nose gets flared up." He said pecking the tip of her nose.



"Rey...we're in the library." She reminded him.



"I don't care where we are. All that matters is we're together." He replied huskily.



He bent down till her shoulder level and dug his head in the crook of her neck. Inhaling in her fragnance he said "only I know how much I missed you." He planted a long kiss on her collarbone. Her breaths hitched up and down. Thoygh she was partially in her senses, she checked and fortunately there was no one around. His hand entered underneath her shirt caressing her skin and making random designs over there. Her hand accidentally hit a few books as she tried to be normal. As a result few books fell down bringing the librarian's attention there. Just before the librarian arrived they yanked apart and bent down to pick up the books. The librarian seriously glared at them and left.



As the librarian left Rey pushed her to the shelf and thrashed his lips on hers covering their faces with a book. This was so sudden that it took her time to register things. Her hands clutched his shirt as she responded equally to the kiss. Their lips meshed in perfect syncronization. He sucked over her lower lip as she nibbled his uper lip. Their tongues fought for dominance. After a long and wild kiss they pulled back.



"You have no idea how much I missed this dessert of mine." He said with a mischevious glint in his eyes. She blushed at this.



"I love you." She said slowly.



"I love you too." He replied pecking her lips.



How's it? All your tomatoes, jootas and critisicms are welcomed. Sorry for the errors, if any. I haven't proofread it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res... Yay me.
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This was so good I loved the way Rey had that effect on Kriya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it!!
Jealousy. Passion. Intensity. Romance.
It had all the elements...loved the way rey kissed her nose!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dat was so cute...
Secret relationship..jealousy...beautiful..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dii plsss continue karooo
i loved tis os
isme sab kuch hai love jealousy passion intensity romance
plsss na continue karoo
ek aur part likho plsss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guess what happened? I was reading your old OSs since earlier, I never got a chance to read them. And in the midst of it, I got your PM of another OS. such an awesome feeling that is. Like some special treat is going on, just for me. 😆
Anyways, back to the point. 😛
How could you be so unsure abt this re Manu? You know I just LOVE these kind of OS. they project the KR I am obsessed with and addicte to. <3 The OS was so damn awesome. I love Reyaansh. I just ent down the memory lane. Reyaansh always knew how affected Baatcuttr always was by his presence. <3 And Kriya, the very old Kriya. Always upset, angry and sometimes sarcastic, but can never hold her feelings for him for long. The power of their LOBB. :D The OS was really perectoo. Me loved it to the core. Do write more such as these.

-Ashy. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the OS ..!
Amazingly written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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library romance
i just loved it
awsome os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os...
Looveddd it... ❤️
Ohh godd romance in library...
BT amazing update
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nice os ... as always...👏😛

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