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hii muskaan..rd da 3 parts in one go
its touchng my heart...aftr rd it hv a feel dat
may b dis scn can b shwn on da serial too..if sana wnt quit
trulyy if it ws shwn it wl b a perfct treat 4 any arjunian
well dat wl nvr happn
bt your stry is too intense da way u portray arjun s inner turmoil regardng roshni and riya and riya z selfless n helpless love toward him(bng rejectd allws) ..intense...write 4m da core
den on da 2nd part
due 2 her kidnappng..finalyy arjun hv 2 break his shield pour his heart 2 wake riya up
den rathore part ...how he tries 2 brng back his old n best frnd
his lines r realyy works as pathfinder 4 da broken heart
den at da end
2 parts r realy touchn 4 me is arjuns imagination of 3 of dem
i feel like i hv visualize his imagntn too
den at da very end through smilling as his dream shows its perfct...more dan perfct its beutifull
da best thing u hv wrote in it is da end as begnng
aftr a longgg time rd sucha beutifull intense ariya
lvd it heartlyyy
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