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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: MSluvsSI


Thank You G ! Your comment is encouraging n paying back for penning down it.. 😆 Humsafar something i would cherish always coz Kisher !!😳 Thank you <3

we all miss the little Part Humsafer and Asher-Khirad played in our lives... they were adorable!
still cant get over their charm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaneWhispers

we all miss the little Part Humsafer and Asher-Khirad played in our lives... they were adorable!
still cant get over their charm!


Yeah They were Epic n had created history !! Can Neve ignore humsafar madness when it was on air😳Wish to see FK once again on screen
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well finally coming to chapter 4...
Good as always... charming, filled with love, bliss and melancholy at the same time! well done!
their intense love for each other will eventually make them fall for one another again... the web of love is where they are stuck for sure!
and the precap? a cliffhanger...not fair! update soon! i just hope the shock aint anything terrible!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part Five
"Yeh khali ghar mjhey kha jaye ga...kuin meri har baat Ashar sy hi shuru ho rahi hai aur usi pe khatam? kia ho gya hai mujhey ? hareem ko awaz deni hoti hai ashar mun sy nikalta hai..khana hareem ki pasand ka banwana tha banwa ashar ki pasand ka lia hai...kaprey hareem key tekh karwaney the..wardrobe ashar ki tekh kar bethi hon.. jab sy gaye hain khaney ko kia hasney ko bhi dil ni kar raha...ashar ko bhi kai zarorat thi janey ki ? sahi sey baat bhi ni kar key gaye wo mujhsy..
Khirad kia ho gaya hai tmhey ? Yeh tumhi thi jo ashar ko itney arsey sy ignore kar rahi thi..unki har koshish ko...aur ab...
ashar ko phir sey paney sy hichkicha rahi thi mein...aur aj? unkey zara sy door janey par mein unhey khoney sey darney lagi hon ? kia mein galat thi ki wo kirad ab mar gaye hai jo ashar par kudh ko nichawar karti thi ?
Ni wo tou hmesha k trah yahen hai..
Ashar...unsey jitni mein ney muhabbat ki thi..utni nafrat bhi...lakin shahid nafrat tou mein kbhi kar hi ni saki thi bas muhbbat karna chodh di thi...aur aj mjhey ehsas ho raha hai..
Ashar ki zindagi mein phir sey shamil honey sey hi tou mein kudh sey dubara mil sakein hon...
unsey muhbbat na karna tou merey bass mein hi nahn hai.. jab unki har khushi har baat har lafz mujhsey shuru ho kar mujh par khatam hota hai tou mein kasey unko na chahon ? jab wo meri parwa kartey hain tou mein kasey unki parwa na karon...
jab us kudha ney mujhey unhey sonpa hai tu mein kasey unki qadar ni karon ?
Mein ne jab unhey maff kar dia hai har galti k lea jis mein galti tou bas itni hai na ankhon dekhey pe yakeen kar lena...yeh glati tou mujhsey bhi ho sakti thi ?
bewafa tou wo kbhi na the na...halaat ney sab kuch dhundla kar dia.
Unkey begair phir sey jeney ka tasavur bhi merey rongathey kharey kar deta hai...
Door reh kar bhi jab wo merey itney karreb rehtey hain ..tu kasey kasey...Ashar ki Khirad unsey muhbbat ni karti ho gi ? unki chahat k lea ni tarapti ho gi ? unkey ehsas...unkey lams..ko yaad ni karti ?
Unki khirad unsey door kasey reh sakti hai ? Unki khirad ko tou apney Ashar ki adat hai...!!
Khirad Ko Ashar sey Muhbbat hai!! Azal sey ...Abad tak...Khirad ashar ki thi hai..aur unhi ki rahey gi..!!
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Khirad tekh ho gi na ? hareem ? oh god mein kuin chodh k aya ? pata ni wo dono akeli kia kar rahi hon gi ? unhey kuch chahiye huwa tou ? driver tou aya ho ga na ? khirad ko kisi chez ki zarorat na pad jaye wo tou kuch bataye gi bhi ni kudh sy ? mjhey unsy pochna chahye na...phone karta hon..
As he decided he looked above and saw everyone else staring at him..they were in meeting..and everyone was waiting for him to speak up about presentation...he felt embarssed and at same time was extremely disturbed..
"i m soory please excuse me.."
He got up n left the place...everyone looked at each other..Ashar's friend apologiesd n excused himself to get ashar..
"Ashar kia kar rahey ho tm ? khahn hai tmhara dehyann?"
"Imran please can i just leave for karachi ?"
"what ? ashar yeh sirf last metting hai tm ney raat ki flight sy jana hai ..?"
"Imran i just can't concentrate i don't know..i shouldn't have come here.. I don't know hareem aur khirad...tekh hon gey bhi k nahn ?"
"Relax ashar yeh pani peo..calm down.. khirad aur hareem tmharey ghar mein hai ab aur tm ney tu har trah sy assure kar k aye ho na sab kuch hai unkey pass wo tekh hain.. even tm khirad ki dost ko bhi bol k aye the unkey pass rehney k lea ? tm ney driver ko har servant ko ghar pe rehney ki aur unka khayal rakhney ka bola tha na ? ..."
"Imran nahn..tm nahn smjho gey.. jantey ho meri aik glati ki waja sey mein ney khirad k zindagi barbad kar di thi..hareem sey har khushi cheen li thi.. khirad ko merey saharey..meri zarorat hai ..usey kisi bhi chez sey koi fark ni padta ..usey sirf mjhsy farq padta hai..merey na honey ka ehsas usey kasey kha raha tha..uski ankhon mein chupi iltaja ...nahn imran mein already yahan a key mistake kar chuka hon..mjhey abhi jaan hai please kasey bhi kar key is metting ko smbhal ley..postponed kar dy kuch bhi please.."
"U just relax n go ... tm log already bohat kuch suffer kar chukey ho.. mein kuch bhi kar k is metting ko dubara karachi mein arrange karwa leta hon.."
"I owe you this Imran Thanks "
"Just be happy..bye take care.."
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Ashar smiles as soon as he landed on karachi airport..he just thanked God..he had got time to shop for khirad n hareem from isl airport..he had got the seat on time.. and now he had to just wait few hour more to see his life...
He entered in home with a red boquet..and his other stuff...he was silent ...he wanted to give them surprise..he look around for them..in kitchen..in harem's room..they were not there..he was bit puzzled now..he opened door of their room..n become shocked..as saw afsheen n harem there while khirad was lying on bed...
He literally felt his leg shake..no more providing him any suport..where the boquet and shoping bags slipped from his hands..as he took step towards them..
"Papa..ap a gaye? Mama meri bilkul baat ni manti ..ap dantein mama ko.."
Ashar embraced her in his arms..as she quickly rushed towards him while complaining about khirad..who had open eyes..n looked at him...he looked at her...there was no expression on his face...while khirad moved away her gaze as realized she hurt him..
"Ashar bhai...acha kiya ap aj hi aa gaye...Pareshani ki baat ni hai bas khirad ko thodi weakness ho gai thi...islea...khirad ney mana kia tha islea apko bata ni saki..."
Afsheen got up to give him space to go near khirad...tried to give him an explanation...but he was still there staring at her..she seemed so pale n weak ...in worst condition... he had seen her ever before..
Ashar gave afsheen a lil smile to be thankful for her favour...he looked at harem n glared him a bit as saw tears..
"Ap asey apney papa ka welcome karein gi hareem ?"
"Soory papa..par ap meri trah mama sy ni bolein gy..unho ney mujhey bohat tang kia hai..kuch nahn khaya..aur mujhey apko phone bhi ni karney dia..aur faint ho key tou hareem ko rulaya.. mama ney hareem ko bohat tang kia hai.. hareem sy bhi zyada..islea hum mama sy ni bolein gy.."
Ashar glanced at khirad who had felt so weak to smile even on hearing her childish talks..Ashar tried to gave her a smile as wipe away her tears..
"Hareem ki complains khatm ho gaein ho tou ab hareem afsheen auntie sy pochein k woh dinner mein kiya khaein gi ?"
"Nahn ashar bhai mein ab chalon gi.."
Afsheen smiled at them..and looked at khirad who thanked her friend ...
"Par..."
"Phir kisi aur din sahi..ap khirad ka khayal rakhey ga...bye hareem beta.."
Afsheen smiled at them as gathered her stuff to leave..
"hareem beta afsheen auntie ko bahir tak chodh k aein.."
"ji papa.."
Hareem walked out along afsheen and afsheen smiled at hareem...
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Ashar looked at khirad who moves away her gaze feeling embarrassed ...he walked upto her...and sat on bed beside her..as she tried to get up...he stoped her at once..
"Leti raho..khabar dar jo uthney ka socha bhi.."
"ashar.."
She whispered slowly..ashar make a face..he just can't be upset with her..no matter what ...he slowly creased her hairs..staring at her...
"mein ne kbhi wapis ni ana tha kiya ?"
"ap asi baat tou na khahein..."
khirad replied feeling extremly bad seeing him hurt n sad ...
"aur tm ? dekha hai kudh ko ? acha bhala chodh k gya tha tou dino mein kia haal kar lia hai ... itni si shakal nikal aye hai.."
Khirad made a face as heard him scolding her like a kid..
"Soory.."
Ashar sighed as heard soory from her...he cupped her cheeks..wiping away the escaping tear...
"Soory? Tum ne meri Jaan nikal di thi..agar mein sab kuch chodh key jaldi na ata..."
Kirad stared at him..feeling bad...
"kiya??"
"Chup chap leti koi aur baat nahn..mein tmharey lea kuch khaney k lea lata hon.."
Ashar mentally smacked himself for stating ..
"par..."
Just before khirad could inquire..hareem walks in...
"Hareem ap apni mom ko bata dein apkey papa unsey bohat naraz hain is lea ab wo chup chap unki baat manein sirf.."
Khirad sighed as listened her husband... n complained sweetly..
"Mein maan tou rahi hon.."
"hareem ap mama k pass bethein mein dinner le k ata hon tekh hai ?"
Ashar smiled a bit a khirad's innocent face...
"Okay papa tab tak hareem mama ka khayal rakhey gi.."
"Good girl..Mrs.Khirad Hussain apki beti apsey bohat achi hain"
Ashar glares khirad lightly to let her know he is not going to let go so easily..
"Akhir beti kis ki hai.."
Khirad replied back with smile...as she knew it would never took long now to make up with him...
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"Ashar bas..mujhsy aur nai khaya ja raha.."
Khirad literally stopped him from making him eat more..as she looked at hareem n ashar who exchanged glances clearly showing they are not going to hear her...
"Mama mun kholein apko khana hai..apko weakness hai..aur ap weak raho gi tou hareem ka khayal kon rakhey ga.."
This time harem insisted..n khirad was feeling going crazy..as she forcefully was made to eat two days meals in one shift.
"Bilkul tekh kha apney hareem .. apki mom ko bas na hmarey sy khidmat karney ka shoq hai.."
Khirad frowned as listened ashar who was making now hareem eat..
"Mujhey koi shoq ni hai..wasey bhi jo huwa hai apki waja sey huwa...ap na jatey akela chodh k agar itni hi parwa thi.."
Ashar looked at khirad n then hareem with widened eyes..after really reallly really long time he felt that khirad is back ..not only in his life..but in real she is back ...
"Soory"
Khirad surprisingly looked at Ashar who was holding ears...Khirad perplexed and felt her eyes moist..as quickly held his hands..
"Ashar kia kar rahe hain mein mazak kar rahi thi..."
Ashar looked at hareem who winked at him which made Kisher laugh..n hareem moves in khirad's lap ..n as creased her hairs..khirad looked at ashar..who smiled at her...n khirad smiled back...as ashar wrapped arms around khirad , hareem hugged ashar while having hands in khirad's palm...and ashar kissed hareem's forehead n then plant an affectionate kiss on khirad's hair as made her hug him...
She closed eyes to live the beauitful reality...
To feel his protective arms once again..with all love n trust...the feeling to be away from every odds n pains of life..in a heaven...blessfully...she let her head place on his strong arm..while her arm encircled his waist..all comfortable and happy...
To feel her trust n love once again...the feeling to be with your love...life free from remorse n pains...feeling to be blessed with most innocent wife...placing arm around her wishing for her every comfort...the feeling to be trust , cared n loved by her...feeling blessed and happy...
Hareem in embarce of her parents feel loved,cared,blessed and protected from all odds n pains of life..
She looked above at him n he stared down at her..as conveyed thank you to each other..n a smile to let each other know ..now it is going to be fine always..
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Is this end of this Story?
Drop few coments to let me know about update thank you for you patience !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
aww that was so cute <3 Ashar and Khirad are loveee 😳 you write some really innocent romantic scenes. Great job!
Edited by BlackStar. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
SUPER DUPER BRILLIANT SS!!!! ❤️

Read it all in a go! I was thinking of writing on the same lines, but since you have written thinking of dropping the idea! 🤔

I'll stick to ZaShaf now! 😉

But... This was an awesome way to show a continuation from the last episode! ❤️ Loved it to the core! 👏

Please continue... Don't end it there! 🤗 And do PM me when you update! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesome work on khisher. like it.

suri...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
do u plan to write more on khisher?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

do u plan to write more on khisher?


not for a time being ..not getting gud ideas.. n more busy in uni so unable to concentrate on every FF Soory😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
This FF is amazng,,,have read it 5 times plzzz update soon plzzz u write amazingly plzzz😊
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