Originally posted by: SaneWhispers
What e prologue!
i loved the dialogues they could be felt...good going and if you do continue please put up an index...!
Res:P (read but will comment later)
Originally posted by: SaneWhispers
i remember reading them in the novel now... thanks for reminding!
reading the next few parts now!the first chap...awesome love how they are getting back to their lost relation ship! Khirad being all caring and Asher being all guilty! nicely done! this could be Humsafer part 2!and caming to chap 2... i love you for adding that pool scene...so emotional at the same time cherish-able!will comment after reading the next chaps...thanks for writing this i really appreciate it!
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