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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Super awesome update..Loved it to the bits..You are such a gifted writer,I could well imagine Ashar,Khirad n Hareem in my mind..And what a captivating precap..Waiting eagerly for ur next update.Plz do update soon.And thanks a lot for the PM..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sonu-monu

dear you written style its so beautiful me loving this update i feel in love with Asher/Khirad once again :D

story is very strong & am happy you moving them in so flow :D

waiting for next part :)


i am really glad on reading such encouraging comments.. Thank you so much for loving it... Writing humsafar is never so easy coz it was near perfection...😳 I am happy that m able to create ashar khirad magic n not ruining it lol..

Thank you for ur valueable comment .!! Hopefully next update will turn out gud too !!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bonibright

Super awesome update..Loved it to the bits..You are such a gifted writer,I could well imagine Ashar,Khirad n Hareem in my mind..And what a captivating precap..Waiting eagerly for ur next update.Plz do update soon.And thanks a lot for the PM..😊


Hey dear thanks a ton.. m really amazed at @bold part..its one of biggest compliment i ever heard ...
Thank you so much for finding this SS worth of reading n commenting..U made me smile widely indeed after all the effort it took writing this SS ..actually didnt went in vain😳Thank you so much!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Aw! Cute Update! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Loved it! I'm in love with Asher and Khirad all over again!
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
hareem is a non glam doll 😳awwwful
loved this update
update next part soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: HSFA

Hey MY Sweetheart 🤗

Ur update was a killer darling 😆🤪 It brought the magic of our Ashar and Khirad back. I was sooo lost in the update. It seemed as if I was watching a new version of Humsafar. The writer of Humsafar before making the second season should take adive from u and I mean it.😳 Hareem is so innocent and sweet. The most loving daughter. Ashar and Khirad love her so dearly.
The way Asher said:" Tumhein phir se khoney se darta hun" Hayeee. Asahr is really in pain and guilt can't see him like this but enjoyed tnhe eyelock. Hareem ki entry thori late nahi kar sakti thi kya?😆 Asey hi bechari ko kabab mein hadi banati ho.😉
The scene when Khirad was in front of the mirror. Awww. U made Humsafar come to life.
The heart wala scene sooo cute.😳 The dinner part awesome 👏 Loved the way Khirad told her desire of wanting a strwaberry icecram and yeah it made me remember the scene when Ashar and Khirad was coming back from a dinner and Ashar had coffee and she icecream. But thankfully u did not ruin that part s great.😆👍🏼
But the last part Awww again pain and hurt 😭
Want another update soon now.😆
Can't wait yaar. 😉
Precap is sooo interesting.
I also want a reply to this comment. Abhi!😆
Love
Urz Angel. 😳


Hey My Angel🤗Seeing you wonderful comment made me smiles widelyy...Ur comment is killer too Jaan..awwie... lol dy wil make beter humsafar 2 too just like 1 wala😳btw hugsss...ur comment really means a lot to me... m not sure how m gona show their guilty sweping away by their love but hoping i wil ruin it hehe..lol story barhaney k lea usko kbab mein hadi tu banana he parey ga Na LOL
Mirror wala scene skip kar rahe the but fir likh he dala Hehehe..
I had actually loved their first date a lot as in black they were dam gorgeous couple
seeing ashar khirad sperate is painful inded <3 Hopefully wil update soon n update wil be gud too
Love n Hugs
Urs Sweetheart <3
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#38
great update
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: Barbie3143

update update update soon


parh lia??😲
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Part Four
"Papa mama bed pe breakfast dekh k bohat kush hon gi na ?"

Hareem and Ashar were in kitchen preparing breakfast..

"umm..yes Mama bohat kush hon gi..kuin key unki inti pyari si princess jo unkey lea breakfast bana rahi hai"

Ashar smiles as hareem handled him plate to take out the toasts...

"Nai mama islea bhi kush hon gi k ap breakfast bana rahey ho"

Ashar smiles as listen to his princess turned to her n asked...

"Acha aesa hai apko kasey pata Mam.Hareem Hussain"

"Mama Apsey bohat pyaar karti hai na jasey wo mujhsey karti hain..aur jab koi unka khayal rakhta hai tu wo kush hoti hain jasey hareem kush hoti hai.."

Ashar smiles widely listening his princess..she was no less..

"Hmm yeh tou ap ney sahi kha ab nani ama wali baatein khatam ho gaein hareem tou apki mama ka breakfast ley k chalein ?"

Hareem make a face but doesn't drag it as ashar kissed his cheek..

"Ji Ji ..chalein..mein mama sey apki shikyt bhi lagaon gi ap hareem ko tang kartey ho.."

"Nai ji hm hareem sey bohat pyaar kartey hain.."

Ashar hareem smiled to each other as they get in room n saw khirad who had just woke up..

"Good Morning Mama"

"Good Morning Meri jaan..yeh subha subha uth k ap kia kar rahi hain apney papa k sath mil kar ?"

Khirad hugged hareem..

"Mama papa ney hmarey lea breakfast banaya hai na.."

Khirad looked at the breakfast n then ashar who smiles at her..

"Acha g aur yeh kis ney kha tha ? papa ko unki holiday waley din bhi jaldi jaga di hareem bohat galat baat hai "

Khirad scold hareem lightly ..she doesn't want ashar to stressed out himself for them ...

"Harem ney ni jagaya mein pehely hi jaag gya tha office ka kuch kaam tha islea..ab madam ap uthein aur jaldi sey fresh ho k aein takey hum nashta kar lein.."

Ashar made her stand up from bed...she blushed lightly ..as she gazed at him...he was so handsome...she thought.but her thought distracted when he saw a cut on his finger..

"Ashar yeh kia huwa hai ?"

She worriedly held his hand to see the wound n looked at him..ashar seeing her concern feared a bit..as he knew what's on way..

"Wo kuch ni zara sa cut lag gya tha ...cut kartey huwey ..."

"Kitni martaba kha hai k fazool key kaam mat kia karein..utha dena tha na mujhey na ..uth k bana deti.."

Khirad was now genuinely upset from them

"Mama.."

Khirad stopped hareem at once from saying anything..n asher pleaded hareem to just listen up her...

"Ap bilkul kamosh rahein hareem yeh sab apki zid puri karney k lea ashar ney kia ho ga..aenda mein ap dono ko kitchen mein na dekhon..jo chahye mjhey bolein gey..smjh gaye ap dono..."

Ashar n hareem replied in union.

"Yes Mama"

"Had kartey hain Ashar ap.."

Khirad glared him..

"Soory"

Ashar make a soory face..while hareem was stopping her giggle seeing him

"Soory ka koi jawaz banta hai kia ? cut tou apko laga na..dard huwa ho ga..khoon nikla tha kia ? zyada tou ni dard.."

Khirad asked him with all concern.

"Khirad khirad relax its nothing mamoli sa hai...tekh ho jaye ga thodi dair tak.."

Ashar held her from shoulders..tried to pacify her but she was no where near to it..

"Apko tou har chez hi mamoli lagti hai..office sey late aon tou koi problem..ni over work karo ..rest na karo ..so na..apko tou sab hi mamoli lagta hai..koi fark ni parta kudh ko bas nazar andaz kartey rehtey hain..."

Ashar sighed..she was impossible when it comes to him..she can't stop herself from getting worried..she was so wrong about herself being for him..she was his..like always..she is his..even today...she can't help but care for him..Ashar looked over at hareem requesting her to calm down her mother..

"Hareem Mama sey khao please apna gusa chorein nashta thanda ho raha hai.."

"Mama Papa tekh keh rahe hain abhi k lea itni dant kafi hai na pleasee..."

Hareem put arm around her shoulder while standing on bed..between ashar n khirad

"Ap dono ka kuch nai ho sakta.."

Khirad sighed ..and giving them both look left to get fresh and enjoy breakfast made by her husband n daughter..
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"Hareem chalein bas papa ney apko story suna di na ap so jaein unhey office ka kaam hai tekh hai.."

Khirad was trying to make hareem sleep in her room but she was waiting up for ashar who was busy in study room..

"Par.."

"No par war ..good night my baby.."

Khirad kissed her forehead..

"Good night mama..papa ko meri traf sey ap good night bola dena tekh hai.."

"Ji tekh hai aein gey apky papa tou mein bol don ge chalein"

"Mama ap papa k room mein so gi na ? "

Khirad looked at hareem who had head in her lap..

"mama hareem k sath ni so saktien kia ?"

"Ni so saktein hai par phir papa akeley ho jaein gey na apney room mein"

"Aur hareem akeli ni ho gi usko dar ni lagey ga ?"

"Ni hareem ab bari girl ho gai hai wo papa ki brave beti hai..han usko agar dar lagey ga tou wo apney mama papa key room mein bhaag jaye gi.."

"Acha ji hareem bohat bari ho gai hai..par uski mama ko tou ab bhi hareem k sath sona hai"

"Par mama ap yahan tang ho jati ho na ..wahan papa ka bed itnaa baraa saraa hai ap wahan arram sy so jao gi..phir apko back mein pain pe ni ho ga.."

"Apko kasey pata merey back mein pain tha?"

"Ap afsheen aunti sy baat kar rahi the na tab suna tha...Mama ap apna bilkul khayal ni rakhti mein papa sey apki shakiyt karon gi.."

"Acha meri mama ..mein apna khayal rakho gi ab ap apney papa sey kuch ni khaein gi tekh hai na.."

Hareem was so like ashar in her matter..for being caring for her..and protective..loving her...Khirad moved away her thoughts..as hareem kissed her cheek while hugging her ...

"Tekh hai mama hareem kuch ni khaye gi..ab hareem nend a rahi hai"

"tekh hai ap so jao phir mein light off kar key chali jao gi tekh hai?"

"I love you mama"

"I love you too meri Jaan..."
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Khirad came in room..It was the room..she had come along Ashar after one month of his mother's death..he had gave her two bangles as wedding gift..how much she had felt humiliation that day for being forced into his life from no where... then after a couple of months or weeks she was dragged in that room by Ashar n he presented her the gift he had bought as gift for her after coming back from his business trip...the room had all their secrets..had their love talks during night..had memories of their cute arguments..his flirt-ness ..her shyness ...his teasing..her blush..their tears..their pain..their moments..most beautiful part of their lives lied there...she looked at bed.where she had spent nights along him..talking to him..feeling him beside her..caring for him...waiting for him..teasing him..she sighed...why she couldn't forget the dark part ? when now its all over? she so wanted to be with him..she wanted him in her life...she wished it was so easy..but it was not..everytym she thinks to move on..every single moment she had spent in those 4 and half years come by n stands there ranting about his betrayal...but the good times along him..stands opposite to it..making her all confused...leaving all heart broken..

She quickly wiped her eyes..as heard ashar coming in room..Ashar for a second stopped as came in room there..it was hard to believe she was there..he didnt say anything beside he put off his watch n mobile on side table..he doesn't want to make her feel awkward or hurt..or anything..he just doesn't wish that they hurt each other any more...it was enough what they had did...he sighed...as saw her sitting on other side...

Khirad:Hareem ney gud nyt kehney k lea behja tha...[Khirad doesn't know why she was telling lie when she herself had come in room after making hareem sleep to take step towards life...towards him...]

Ashar:Acha kia jo tm a gae...[Khirad looked at him..ashar continued moving away his gaze]..Mujhey tmhey kuch batana tha khirad..

Khirad looked at him..what was the news ?

Khirad:Kia?

Ashar: Mujhey parso Islamabad jana parey ga..[Ashar looked at khirad who was now panicked listening the news]

Khirad: Kiya ?Kuin ?

Khirad 's eyes widened ..she was shocked..she felt he will be away once again from her..

Ashar:Office ka work hai khirad..Mujhey hi jana parey ga...

Khirad: par hareem ...[She so wanted him to tell that it wil be her the most who will be alone n sad without him..she doesn't want him to go..]

Ashar got up and went to her..she was looking at him on edge of crying..he held her hands..

Ashar:Khirad tm ho gi na hareem k pass...Hareem aur apna khayal rakho gi na ? [Ashar asked her with hope..he doesn't want to go away from him..to make her all sad n alone once again..]

Khirad: mein...[She looked at him..was she able to do?]

Ashar: Merey lea?

Khirad looked at him..his eyes were telling genuinely he cared for them..

Khirad: Han...Ap kab aein gy ?

She nodded while asking impatiently..

Ashar:I promise mein wapis jaldi a jaon ga...do din mein balkey us sey bhi jaldi...tm ro gi tou ni na ?

Ashar cupped her face..wiping away her tear which escaped her eyes. even she had struggled not to shed them in front of him...

Khirad:nai..

Khirad lower her gaze stopping herself from crying..She doesn't want to be alone once again..

Ashar: Thank you..so jao ab subha jagna hai na jaldi..

Ashar tried to smile at her..as he got up ...

Khirad: ji...

Khirad controlled her tears..and turned to leave..she wanted to cry aloud n she knew she can't if she stays there...

Ashar:Khirad...

Ashar stopped her as he knew she is going to leave the room..she stopped n looked at him while her heart had started beating fast..

Ashar:yahen ruk jao Please..

Khirad looked at him..his eyes were pleading to her..she nodded as moved to her side silently..

Ashar tried to smile but it was so hurting him that he had to be away from her..he deosn't know why he had stopped her from going..it was just he want to stare at her look at her to memorize her ...as long as he was there before leaving...

He couldn't sleep..the thought of leaving them ..it was killing him..the promise he had made to her..he will never leave her alone again..he doesn't wish to go..he wanted to take them with him..but he was unable as he knew khirad will never allow to skip hareem's school..already she had lost a lot because of her disease n treatment..now she want her to concentrate on her studies..He wanted to assure khirad he wil come back as soon as possible..he doesn't want her to think she is alone again...He gathered his courage n turned to see her back..He was able to hear her sobs which she was trying hard to stop..He took a deep breath..pushing away all thoughts..he just moved near to her...he looked at her..as soon as she had felt him she had closed eyes..even had held her breaths..as his finger creased away her hairs from her face...she slowly open eyes..slowing down her breaths...she looked at him..his eyes had same pain..She was unable to keep her pain to herself..she so wanted his shoulder to cry over...his arms around her..to make her feel protective..his hug to make her feel he is always with her..she turned as he put arm under her head..n she quickly hugged him ..hiding her face in his chest..as his arm embraced her...he let her cry...slowly creasing her hairs..he let himself to believe that she was in his arms..he is not going to lose her again..he kissed her hairs..as creased her hairs..whispering slowly..letting her know..he is with her..always..there is no reason anymore to shed tears...he will be always there for her...Slowly khirad broke hug as realized she is hugging him n crying...Ashar looked down at her inocent face...he slowly dried her tears...he kissed her forehead...assuring her..he will come back soon enough...she sighed..as placed head on his chest...as he held her close to himself in his arms...n they closed their eyes...knowing that they were together..n that's all matters..

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"hareem papa sey bilkul baat ni kar rahi mama bata dein ap papa ko.."

Khisher had just broke the news to her..n she was sitting on their bed..making a sad upset face ...hugging her cute bear..while ashar sitting next to her..where khirad was packing his stuff..at last khirad smiles little coz of hareem's cute face...she hadn't smile since he had told her..

"par harem key papa tou apni princess sey bohat sari battein karna chahtey hain na janey sey pehley"

Ashar tried to hug their princess but she clearly was not in mood ...

"Nahn hareem gusa hai apsey ap usko chodh key phir sey ja rahe hain.."

"Nahn meri jaan mein paka promise jaldi sey kaam khatam kar k wapis hareem k pass a jaon ga..Hareem ki koi farmaish hai apney papa sey koi gifts ? chocolates ? dolls ?"

Ashar had shifted her in his arms..trying to make her trust him..he looked at khirad who were looking at them too..she assure him from eyes as spoke.

"Han hareem apkey papa apkey lea dheer sarey presents laein gey.."

"Hareem ko kuch ni chahye..hareem ko sirf uskey mama papa chahye hain bas.."

Khisher smiles lightly as harreem hugged asher tightly..

"Hareem k papa mama uskey sath hain hmesha..ab jaldi sey good girl k trah rona band karein aur papa ki baat sunein.."

Ashar broke hug wipping away her tiny tears..She looked all sad..

"Kia?"

"papa sey aik promise karey gi hareem?"

"Kaisa promise?"

"Yeh promise k wo papa k janey k baad mama ko tang ni karye gi unki sari battein maney gi school jaye gi jaldi soye gi mama ko bilkul tang ni karye gi...aur apna aur mama ka bohat dheer sara khayal rakhey gi..agar hareem aesa karey ge tou..."

Khirad looked at both of them...she was blessed to have them..if she Ashar or hareem was not in her life she would have die long time before..

"tou?""

"tou harem k papa us sey promise kartey hain k hareem ki vacations hotey hi usey papa disney land ley k jaein gey"

"disney land? promise? ap wapis ao gey na jaldi ?"

Khirad herself felt it so difficult..it had been months with ashar now n again suddenly she doesn't want to be away from him...even when they had nothing between each other..still her heart was aching..due to pain...aroused after his announcement...

"Han aon ga bohat jaldi yahan meri jaan hai tu kuin ni wapis aon ga? apkey papa ka bas chaley tou wo jaein hi na "

"Tou phr mat jaein na..hareem aur mama apkey bina Udass ho jaein gy.."

"Papa bhi tou udas hon gey na hareem..par kaam hai na jana parey ga..."

"Ap hmey yaad karein gey dheer sara ?"

As khirad head she so wish to know the answer..would he miss her too ? is his heart is acing badly in same way ? was only she who is going through this ?

"ab itni pyari princess ho usko kon ni yaad karye ga?"

"Tekh hai agar ap promise karo k ap hareem aur mama ko yaad karo gey aur unkey lea jaldi wapis ao gey tou hareem papa ki jagah mama aur hareem ka khyal rakhey gi par wapis a key apko hi mama aur hareem ka khayal rakhna ho ga promise ?"

"promise..I love you meri Pyarii si princes Papa ki jaan..":

"I love you too Papa..ap bohat achey ho bohat achey ho..."

Both of them had always made her smile..she was done with packing..and after getting free she was next to hareem ..joined in their conversation..

"acha aur mama achi ni hain?"

"Meri Mama tou hain hi best haina papa ?"

"Han apki mama best hain..sab sey best..."

Khirad looked above...his eyes was gazing at her..she could feel his warmth..his love..her cheeks hadn't forget to reflect dark red shade...She lowered gaze..as she addressed hareem..

"Chalo hareem ab sona ni hai?"

Ashar nodded head in negative shifting hareem in his lap..

"Ni aj hareem hmarey sath hi soye gi kuin hareem? "

"han aj hareem papa k sath hi soye gi.."

Khirad smiles widely later as she witnessed the duo teasing each other..laughing...fighting...making up...and as they involved her too in their antics..she couldn't help but laugh heartily and enjoy...Kisher were staring at their princess who had just fallen sleep after tiring up thrice...she was patting her back..lost in thoughts..it felt like she was alive after years..along them...their presence was her breaths..she felt her self pulling out of thoughts..when he held her palm..she looked at him..it made her pulse rate raised...as he kissed her hand..and whisper..."bohat yaad ao gi..."...She felt her eyes teary as the realization of his leaving stuck her...she so wanted her to stop him but she knew he have to go...her tears..just conveyed to him how much she is goona miss him in those days..
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As soon as he waved to them to leave..hareem ran to him n hugged his legs..he looked at her sadly he is going to miss his princess without her he can't even do anything now..he cupped her face..wiping away her tears..he comforted her..n just then he looked above n find khirad who were equally sad ..he just look at her as..khirad held harem who cried hugging her mother..khirad stares at him..who had nothing to say..except..he kissed her forehead..n heard her whisper.."Apna khayal rakhey ga"...He smiles with tears as she lowers her eyes to hide her tears...And he turned to leave before he feel more weak to leave..
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Precape:

Ashar back n get a shock !!
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