Friends,enna nyabagam iruka?...I am Shiny...titlea paartha udana therinchurukum ungalauku ennada oru puthu storynu...YES...ithu ennoda first FF...etho try panniruken...ungaluku pidikunu nambaren
Part 1
It was a busy Morning time...All people were deeply involved in their daily chores..There was a very huge house in Madhavnagar,which was well-known for its reputation..There,in his beautiful room,he was getting ready by setting his golden watch on his wrist...He was dressed in a blue striped shirt with black pant..Even he looked a little dark,he was so beautiful,especially with his smile..But he rarely smiles as He was a angry young-man with strict n stylish nature...He is the HERO of this story..His name is Karthikeyan..
K:Mom,en braceleta partheengala?...
K's Mom:adada...enga potta...neethan ellathayaum correcta vechurupeye...appuram engapa pochu bracelet?
K:naan braceleta en dressing table mela than vechen...aana illaima.
K's mom:appana,angaye nalla thedi paarenda kanna...enaku velai irukupa..
K:.pls neenga vanthu thedi kodunga...enaku officeku time aachu...
K's Mom:ada rama...rama...adupula sambar aagikittu iruku..nee vera ippadi pada padatharaye..iru varen..
K's mom came to his room . Mom n Son searched the room fully for that bracelet...
K's Mom:kanna...inga iruku paaru..un bed mela...
K:ada..inga iruka??...eppadi inga vanthathu??...oruvela ithu maala velaiya irukumo...avathana ennoda thingslam pottu nondra...chidish girl...aal valarnthurukara alavuku moolai valarala..iniku iruku avaluku adi en kaiyala...engama ava.?
K's Mom:theriyalayeda..ava enga oru eduthula iruka...roomku room kurangu maathiri thaavikitte iruka..
K:hmm...enaku theriyum ava enga irukanu...anyway romba thanksma...braceleta kandupidichu kudathathuku..
K's Mom:chee asadu,ammata poi thankslam sollikittu...poda kanna poi ready aagu...naan samayal pannathum koopidren..
Having said so,K's mom went to the kitchen...But karthik decided to found that girl ,named maala n went to the upstairs...there were so many rooms..some rooms would be allotted to guests n some rooms for the relatives..but in their absence...those rooms would be used by that girl,maala,a room in a day..
K:iru varen...nee enga olinchukittu irupanu enaku theriyum...iniku nee vasama maatikite enta..
Having said,K proceeded towards the room which stands the very first..He didnt even knocked the door...he just pushed the door n went inside..nobody was there...He searched that room every nook n corner...finally he found that girl who was hid under the bedstead covering her face with her hands..
K:Hey...come out,maala..naan unna kandu pidichuten...
Maala:ada paavi..kandupidichutaya...eppadida.,enna udane udane kandu pidikara...naanum neraya rommsla poi olinchakaren..aana nee correcta kandupidichara..
K:athan Karthik..
Maala:romba perumaithan...
K:seri,nee mothalla enkitta va...seekaram...
Maala:vara maaten...nee enna adipa..poda..
K:vara poraiya.illaiya...illati naane vanthu unaku adi kodupen..
Maala:vena..vena...naane vanthu tholaikaren...
Having said,maala comes near K...K stared at her angrily...
K:ethuku en thingsalam eduthu anga inga podra...unaku ethana vaati solliruken...en thingsalam thodathanu...mollai illai??haan??
Maala:athu vanthu...un roomku vantena...un braceleta parthen...eduthu paarthukitte irunthapa...nee vanthuta bathroomla irunthu...athan takunu bed pola pottu oodi vanthuten..
K:manners illai...ippadiya seiva?
Maala:aama...annanoda thingsa thangachi thoda kudatha??
K:thodalam..aana avankitta kettu thodanum...understand?
Maala:purinchuthu enaku...inime naan thodave maten unnata ketkama..I swear,My brother..
K:aama..perusa sathiyatha kaapathara maathiri...nalla ketuko...ithuthan unaku last warning...inime en thingsalam thotta,en vaai pesathu..en kaithan pesum,purinchutha??
Maala silently shook his head by looking down...there arrived K's mom..
K's Mom:enda...ippadi miratra avala...ava un thangachida...nyabagathula vechuka...athuvum chinna ponnu...
K:chinna ponnu?...Oh..God...+2 padikarala...appuram enna chinna ponnu??.
Maala shows her tongue to him..K become furious
K's mom:endi...avana imsai pannama iruka mataya...poi padipo...study holidays padikarathukuthan koduthurukaanga...vilayada illai...mothalla annan ta sorry kelu..
Maala:.serima..ketkaren...sorry na...inime naan unna imsai padutha maaten...
K:hmm...namba mudiyalaye...haha...maala...sorrylam venam...po..poi padi..
Maala:en anna sirichutana?...iniku mazhzi varapothu...amma iniku thooniyalam kaaya podhatha ma..gana mazhai peiya pothu...seriya?...
K:iru..unna...
Karthik trying to catch her...but she nicely escaped from him by running fast...
K's mom:nalla annan thangachiga...
After 15 mins...Karthik came downstairs...
K:mom,saapadu kattiyacha...time aachuma...
K's mom:ellam ready...itho vanthuten..inthada kanna...micham vaikama saapitru...
K:kandipama...aama appa engama?
K's mom:ingathana irunthar...ennaga...vaanga seekaram...pillai koopidran..
K's dad:itho vanthuten...
He speedily came near them from his room
K:amma,appa...naan solli irunthenla...iniku naan PM a porupu ethuka poren...so,pls,bless ur child...
Karthik bents n touched his parents feet...
K's parents in chorus.:entha problemum illama unaku melum melum vetri undagaumda kanna...nee santhosama irupa...
K:thanks parents...
K's mom:hmm...ithalam thevaiya...nammalta illatha businessa...appavoda bussiness ethaavthu onna nee paarthale pothume..ethuku mathavangalta poi kai katti velai paarthukittu..
K:mom...ethana thadava sollirken...ithapathi pesathanu...enaku sontha kaalula nikkanumma...appathan perumai enakum,ungalukum...
K's mom:(turning to her hubby)paartheengala...ippadi solli solliye en vaya adachudran...
K's dad smiles...K too
K:serima...naan kilambaren...appdiye kovilku poitu poren...okva?
K's mom:en raasa...evalavu kovam irunthalum,intha vishayatha correcta pannira...
K smiles..
K:haan..solla maranthutenma...vishnuvum en kodathan varan...kovila vanthu join pannikarana..avanum iniku Assitant PM a porupu ethuka poranma...unga blessings venumnu sonnan..
K'dad:adade...appadiya..Assistant PM...super po..
K:aamampa...entaye vanthu otikaran...en keezhathan velai parpanam...en pecha ketathana...
K's mom:hahaha...romba santhosam...neenga rendu perum kadaisee varaikum ippadi nalla nanbargala irukanum...athan engaloda aasai...
K:kandipama..avanum enna piriya maatan...avana vittu naanum piriya maaten..okthana?
K's mom:ithuthan venaum enaku...appuram engaloda blessings eppayum irukum avanuku...poi sollupa.
K:Serima..appo kilambaren...ippa kilambinathan seriya irukum...bye ma..bye pa..bye kutty pisasu...
Maala:Bye injithinna korangu...
K:naan unna vanthu parthukaren...
Karthik starts his bike n ready to drove...
All the three bid goodbye to him..
K drove in a medium speed..within 5 mins,he reached the subramaniya swami temple..He parked his bike at the sideways n moved towards the temple..In the meanwhile,A Girl with file bag came to that temple...He leaved his slippers at the slipper counter...That girl too follows that...then she bought some flowers for The Lord...He kept his right leg for entering the temple..simultaneoulsy,that girl too kept her right leg...both placed their legs correctly n too unitedly...Suddenly Temple bell rang...Then he alone advanced towards the Lord...there,He folded his hands n began to pray..
K:Muruga.inilenthu oru periya porupu thara poranga enaku...neethan enn koda irunthu vazhi nadanthanumpa...
At that moment..one voice called his name "Karthikeya"...Karthik didnt react as he was well immersed in his prayer..Again,that voice called"Karthikeya...ippadi unna kupidalamla"..this time karthik disturbed a little,but he didnt open his eyes..Once again that voice called"karthikeya..unaku kaathu ketkutha illaiya??"
this time karthik opened his eyes n turned to his right irritatingly by thinking"yaaru athu ippadi pesarathu enta"..There stands that girl with folded hands, her eyes closed...she called the Lord Muruga by that name...bu karthik misunderstood it..That girl looked very beautiful with her tying hair n attractive face...she was clothed in a pink color chudithar whcih adds more beauty to her..That girl name is Rajalaxmi,The HEROINE of this story..
Raji : karthiheya...naan pesarathu unaku ketkudhula..athuthan enaku venum...unaku theriyathathu illai..intha oor enaku puthusu...velaikaga aasai pattu appaoda sandai pottu inga vanthuruken..aana enaku romba bayama iruku intha oora paartha..athannalathan busla irunthu erangi mothalla unta oodi vanthen..naan iniku puthusa join panren oru companyla...anga enaku neethampa thunaiya irukanum...naan nalla velai seiyanumpa.nalla peru vaanganumpa...pls...enaku help pannupa...unkau naan 3 thengai udaikaren...un annan Ganeshtta naan appave intha koorikaya vechuten...ippa unta vaikaren...paarthukaraya enna..
K's mv:enna ponnu iva...ipadiya ellorukum ketkara maathiri saamita vendikarathu...silly girl..ooruku puthusunu vera solra.aana ivalavu vai pesara..innocenta irukarathu thappu illai...aana ivalavu innocenta iruntha easiya emmanthiruvaanga ivala,ellorum. Ithukumela karthikeya nu kootu,kaatu kathu kathi nimathiya enna saami sevikakoda vidala..irritating girl..
But Raji didnt opened her eyes n prayed sincerely...They was only a 4 inch distance between them..There came the priest with aarathi plate n showed that to them saying"aarathi eduthukongo"
Both of them raised their right hands for taking aarathi...suddenly,Karthik's bracelet struck with Raji's chudithar...their hands seemed to be tied with one other..Their eyes met each other...Temple Bell rang three times..All incidents happened continuously..KR became dumbstruck...they tried their best to release from this joint..,but they cant...At last,karthik forcely pulled his hand...now their hands got seperated...They took the aarathi n once again looked at eachother...Next moment,Raji walked fast from there as she felt her heartbeat beating quickly..She leaned over the pillar n thinks..
R's mv:karthikeya...ooruku vantha mothal naale ippadi nadakanuma...enaku nenjalam patharuthupa...pesama kovilpatike poidava...aana appa munnadi avamanama poidume...enna panrathu...ore kulapama iruke...
K:cha...konjam methuvathan kaiya thookiruka kudathu nee..ithula avalum munthirikotta maathiri kaiya ore samayathula kondu vanthu tension padithita enna...periya postla join panra mothal naale ippadiya...sutham...Karthik...nee mothalla seekaram kilambu...aduthu iva enna pannuvalonu theriyathu..hmm seekaram..
Having said K goes outside n waits for his friend Vishnu..
To be contd...
Note:Freinds,enaku therincha office related mattersa solliruken..innamum sollven...thappa iruntha ,pls forgive me
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