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Originally posted by: ayesha_80
After reading ur update...I went n watched the b'day epi...and i don't kno why but I feel that in that particular episode, V was stealing glances at D and there was something "different" in those glancess...in the way he was looking at her (ofcourse, before Sabina aunty makes her entry).we all were hankering on the same thing tht there was something different in those glances.. and we all built some rather lofty hopes but all came crashing down in the sordid gola love saga..Now, when i re-read this update of ur's after watching...it really makes a perfect flow from there...esp if I talk abt VD...the last scene part of the update, D sleeping with the card and V acknowledging her significance in making his life easy...Hats off to u, gal!i wont take credit of this.. there is actually a scene on August 11 end and august 15 begining.. if u care to go catch up.. Sabina reading Ds card (I was so pissed with tht.. trespassing completely) but anyhow what D wrote in it was beautiful.. and she then dreams of V reading it.. and their confrontation.. thts whr I picked up.. and just did a deviation.. in fact it will make more sense.. if u watch it..still I havent blatantly copied it yet..😆 just given it a twistComing to the VS parts...a very realistic follow-up to how the things could have (or should've) proceeded from the party. I really loved the interaction b/w V-S here...both were "in character" and the convo between them is superbly writen...nothing indirect, nothing implied...simple, plain facts!hmmm interesting.. well there were few btw the lines bits.. esp in what Sabina says.. or so I felt.. she knew somewhr tht V knowing his love wasnt one sided wld help him.. n V reconciled tht w/e it was she CARED.. cared ENOUGH at the end of their whole rendezvous and he was at peace with it.. so there were some implied bits I purposely threw in..😉 you see the different between VD and VS.. VD had transparency. VS had this mystery.. which I kept alive.. somethings are more attractive left out..😆Great job, Sona...u really have a way wid words...and I'm SOOO looking fwd to this SS. So, update FAST, madam!Thanks ashu.. being rather kind eh😆And yeah...if possible..send me the link of ur other SS...would love to read it. Take care and all the best!its funny coz I first wrote coz Dia insisted.. and I wrote for her blog.. and it was funny coz our styles are just so different.. she is more of a descriptive narrator.. whereas I take pleasure in crypticism😆 esp the first SS.. wld mess a reader up so much in how round n round I went with a simple narration.. Dia was head banging every time she read a part and wanted the next one pronto.. but if I mail it to you now.. you wld have the adv of the whole thing in your platter.. but it was sadistic pleasure on my part..nagging dia for making me write.. 😆😆 I think Kavs managed to read thro it too😆-Edit-😲 I din't kno that u had updated the second part also...Read Binish's comment and was wondering why haven't I read a few things she has mentioned...so, checked the first post again and saw the second part. Bata toh deti that u've updated...i've been waiting for it like a loser. Anyway...my comments above are for the first part...will try n write abt the second part at the earliest possible. As of now, *runs to read*hey bhaggu.. i updated late last nite.. and only pmed a few on my friend list who commented.. now tht u r pulling a tantrum wld include you in the list too.. touche
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