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Posted: 13 years ago

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Oh and a BIG ditto to what Chanda(I love your id it gives this beautiful imagery)
I could so imagine the V and Charu scene by the same pool and also you already know how much I love Manjusha😆 I can not wait for CP's entry too!

And most definitely a BIG thank you to Sonali for doing this

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khamosshhh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

OK let's agree 2 disagree...I'll stick 2 my Daina end 4 S.😉

Sonali towards d end all d chars were butchered nd d last nail of butchering was hammered on IMV whn dey showed him in his pristine white clothings heading 4, of all places Mangrol! nd it all happened during V's b'day track nd S's entry...Baa going totally gaga over S, Charu becoming uncharacteristically quite nd not pulling up V 4 his obsessive S pursue, S nd D trying 2 occupy d mahanta chair in their mahanta musical chair game...so I feel it's unfair just targeting V nd S...so I too take off frm V's b'day nd dat's how my story heads.😉

So S attains d final mahanta.

IMV hearing of V's death is totally devastated as all others are. As usaul for IMV to loose sum1 he loves leads 2 his unable to accept his fate nd finding others to blame. His first blast of hatred is directed as S, as he holds her responsibe for V's death, but coz she's dead too, he cannot find an outlet, so he targets d second person whom he holds responsible for V's death nd dat is D.

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-Faith-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ssshhh
OK let's agree 2 disagree...I'll stick 2 my Daina end 4 S.😉

Sonali towards d end all d chars were butchered nd d last nail of butchering was hammered on IMV whn dey showed him in his pristine white clothings heading 4, of all places Mangrol! nd it all happened during V's b'day track nd S's entry...Baa going totally gaga over S, Charu becoming uncharacteristically quite nd not pulling up V 4 his obsessive S pursue, S nd D trying 2 occupy d mahanta chair in their mahanta musical chair game...so I feel it's unfair just targeting V nd S...so I too take off frm V's b'day nd dat's how my story heads.😉

So S attains d final mahanta.

IMV hearing of V's death is totally devastated as all others are. As usaul for IMV to loose sum1 he loves leads 2 his unable to accept his fate nd finding others to blame. His first blast of hatred is directed as S, as he holds her responsibe for V's death, but coz she's dead too, he cannot find an outlet, so he targets d second person whom he holds responsible for V's death nd dat is D.

Oh ya I was also saying the same post the birthday shoot out ..V kya koi bhi equation ya koi bhi character woh nahi raha tha jo woh tha.. Essence tou gayi thi... Butcher tou in totality sab hi huwa tha... Baa, Charu and ofcourse IMV in the Mangrol dress the final nail in the coffin😆 And even Devki in her S ko Virani bahu manwa kar chodo mission.. D was not exactly super intelligent either... but still relatively dignified I would say

And though I would not want a glorified Diana end for S but I would still have wanted a dignified closure without ruining that character either

Oooh but your angle/story sounds interesting... Different from what I had in mind but interesting nonetheless... So you are saying after S attains final and fultoo mahanta... Its IMV vs D... tou phir aap kay scenario may redemption/reconciliation kaisey ho gi.. CP angle?

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Ozymandias

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Waahhh, u do know how to write. lol. Not letting u off this time... I wanna read ur first SS. Send me that file!

These 2 parts, knew I'd love it even before reading. We both loved the same guy, the one who valued his work and family the most. Kahan gaya woh VV... sigh. THIS is that VV! LOVED LOVED his scenes with Charu and IMV. Staying true to the beautiful relationship he had with his parents. Loving every little detail u're including, like looking up at their bedroom before leaving, knowing she'd be awake. Can picture it all. His reaction to the card was cute. The only surprising bit I'd say, but cute. Sabina.. if they showed her in such a dignified way, I would've never hated her... well done there. U included Manjusha? Haha that was funny. I see she's quite popular around here though lol.

Update quickly.. can't wait to read more. Would've commented before but wanted to post a long reply, to ur surprise lol. But not getting the time... to abhi ke liye isi chote post se kaam chalao. Reserving the 'criticism' for the next post. lol.

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khamosshhh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: -Faith-

Oh ya I was also saying the same post the birthday shoot out ..V kya koi bhi equation ya koi bhi character woh nahi raha tha jo woh tha.. Essence tou gayi thi... Butcher tou in totality sab hi huwa tha... Baa, Charu and ofcourse IMV in the Mangrol dress the final nail in the coffin😆 And even Devki in her S ko Virani bahu manwa kar chodo mission.. D was not exactly super intelligent either... but still relatively dignified I would say

And though I would not want a glorified Diana end for S but I would still have wanted a dignified closure without ruining that character either

Oooh but your angle/story sounds interesting... Different from what I had in mind but interesting nonetheless... So you are saying after S attains final and fultoo mahanta... Its IMV vs D... tou phir aap kay scenario may redemption/reconciliation kaisey ho gi.. CP angle?

U know Zainab, dat's how d promos 4 MB were...IMV vs D, but unfortunately tht angle was never developed nd brought to its potential conclusion. Whnever it was IMV vs D, D ended up looking foolish nd IMV got d better of her! Now I would hv D as a worthy oponent to IMV. She finds out dat IMV has always been responsible 4 all her failed ventures nd has a confrontation wid IMV, who ends up blasting her to smithereens holding her responsible 4 V's death nd declaring an outright war on D, telling her he'll never let her succeed.

D initially feeling guilty too, but then wid the help of Charu, able to forgo her guilt ns depression. concentrating nd gving all her energies to CP enterprise...thn some classical confrontations between IMV nd D. D finding out d truth abt IMV nd CP nd discovering CP 2 b alive. Thn CP-D encounter nd D finally understanding IMV completely nd being d one to make IMV realise the futility of his vengence. The last scene would b vety much d one shown, of IMV acknowledging D as his guru nd d tossing of coin to D sans d white attire nd IMV heading for Mangrol.

Tht's my story.😉

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

First of all, sorry for being late in commenting here...but i hope i'm forgiven. You kno my daily routine very well..I wanted to write a long comment here, but that doesn't seem possible as of now...so, just writing briefly. 😳

Luckily, i talked to u soon after I read the first part of the SS, so, u basically kno wat i feel abt it. All i'd say is...wat a brilliant start you have given to this SS...its wonderful, Sona...and i really MEAN IT. The way u've narrated the whole thing...and the way it flows..its truly AMAZING.

I watched MB till the epi when everyone comes back from the picnic...and that was the time when the equation b/w VD was somewat changing...won't say abt VV..but D was defo soo in love wid the guy. Fortunately, at that time, VV's character wasn't ruined...which sadly was later...but since I didn' watch it...so, in my mind the same old picture of VV persists...and ur SS gives me a perfect way to continue the story from almost where I left. I couldn't have asked n wished for anything better than this (in terms of the show).

After reading ur update...I went n watched the b'day epi...and i don't kno why but I feel that in that particular episode, V was stealing glances at D and there was something "different" in those glancess...in the way he was looking at her (ofcourse, before Sabina aunty makes her entry).

Now, when i re-read this update of ur's after watching...it really makes a perfect flow from there...esp if I talk abt VD...the last scene part of the update, D sleeping with the card and V acknowledging her significance in making his life easy...Hats off to u, gal!

Coming to the VS parts...a very realistic follow-up to how the things could have (or should've) proceeded from the party. I really loved the interaction b/w V-S here...both were "in character" and the convo between them is superbly writen...nothing indirect, nothing implied...simple, plain facts!

Great job, Sona...u really have a way wid words...and I'm SOOO looking fwd to this SS. So, update FAST, madam!

And yeah...if possible..send me the link of ur other SS...would love to read it. Take care and all the best!

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😲 I din't kno that u had updated the second part also...Read Binish's comment and was wondering why haven't I read a few things she has mentioned...so, checked the first post again and saw the second part. Bata toh deti that u've updated...i've been waiting for it like a loser. Anyway...my comments above are for the first part...will try n write abt the second part at the earliest possible. As of now, *runs to read*

Edited by ayesha_80 - 13 years ago

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santok80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Sonali another masterstroke!! u r keeping this forum alive. some comments will write in detail once i m out of work

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sonali.19281

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Posted: 13 years ago

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sonali.19281

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

@Munira: me and Kools have been most vocal in critiquing baa, charu and even D.. but all said till the very end D stood her conviction.. making everyone look bad.. she was unreal but still stood her ground..

as for IMV.. for me IMV died in the finale.. the white man clad whoever I cant even recognize.. you say I am V and S are bearing the brunt of my displeasure.. obv...😆 so many deviations from character's convictions happened on the premise of VS ka gola and chuski prem..🤣 and for me VD worked coz there was this simplicity in their equation.. it was easy going not glorifying one thing against everything else.. I am all about convenience..

and your version is interesting but I see it differently.. well IMV vs D could never be a game of equals in business.. just coz IMV was wayyy too experienced and sharp.. there is nothing wrong in him taking the upmanship.. tht was EXTREMELY REAL.. and D had to only learn from him.. obv she won a deal or 2 using IMVs tricks.. she was hardworking etc.. but in corporate world.. only tht doesnt work😉 there is no shame in D learning from IMVs experience and acumen.. and as for the promos.. as far as I remember.. the first few promos were all abt.. IMVs story and how this girl ENTERING his life changed the way he looked at life..

so thats what it was always about IMVs story and how D influenced a change.. what did D have to do it.. this immense strength in her innocence and her innocent convictions unfazed by the corruption around.. Ds innocence did bowl over IMV on most occasions.. and he tried to fight it.. but at some point tht innocence wld have taken over his psyche and warmed his heart.. it was way too abrupt in the finale.. for IMV to accept someone, he or she had to make it to his inner circle... which D was getting to but never did.. thts wld be very I would head.. showing outer competition is just a context not the core for me😃

and as for S and VS.. I maintain they never reached out to me coz their love was little too sensationalized for no reason..😆 so I wouldnt really glorify them.. or their love.. for me its far braver and dignified to Sabina to have inspired V towards his moment of self realization and self worth as Kools mentioned.. thts rather poignant yet great.. not dying like Diana..😉 but obv we saw 2 different sides to this same story.. so its interesting to read how you saw it.. thankfully this wld be very diff.. to at least keep you interested..😆

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sonali.19281

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: trouble_maker
Waahhh, u do know how to write. lol. Not letting u off this time... I wanna read ur first SS. Send me that file!

LMAO coma moment🤣 dont be weird.. I wld be more in sync with you going.. u r so weird and archaic Sona😆 thts more u.. so will wait tht criticism bit.. hmm u wanna read the first one lemme see if i have yer email id.. its a pdf as of now..😆n i warned u.. but i wld put all the disclaimers in the email itself😉

These 2 parts, knew I'd love it even before reading. We both loved the same guy, the one who valued his work and family the most. Kahan gaya woh VV... sigh. THIS is that VV! LOVED LOVED his scenes with Charu and IMV. Staying true to the beautiful relationship he had with his parents. Loving every little detail u're including, like looking up at their bedroom before leaving, knowing she'd be awake. Can picture it all. His reaction to the card was cute. The only surprising bit I'd say, but cute. Sabina.. if they showed her in such a dignified way, I would've never hated her... well done there. U included Manjusha? Haha that was funny. I see she's quite popular around here though lol.

I am sure u wld love VV.. coz both of us loved the exact same thing in him.. the responsibility, the accountability.. the objectivity.. not being judgemental etc.. and these r exactly what i wld highlight.. even in his equation wid D... and both of us were suckers for IMV-V and Charu-V scenes.. so had to get them in😃 as for Sabina I always told u I liked the way she made the exit the first time.. and knew if she ever came back there wont be any respite😆so I let her be in peace in my mind..😆

Update quickly.. can't wait to read more. Would've commented before but wanted to post a long reply, to ur surprise lol. But not getting the time... to abhi ke liye isi chote post se kaam chalao. Reserving the 'criticism' for the next post. lol.
lmaooo U want it quick eh.. in fact I happen to have time this evening.. lets see if I can finish it.. I did write one part already.. but its the easy part.. tg u dint write a longer reply than this.. I need to digest even this bit🤣

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