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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Yay your version is here!
I have been waiting for it.. Need some proper closure and I know I can count on this for that.. Thanks for taking out time for doing this Sonali🤗

Will read and get back with a more detailed comment but needless to say I am sure I would love it

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sonali.19281

@sonali.19281

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: santok80
hey Sonali thats real solid start😊😊 i was wondering for what i will wait from this monday onwards (i did not wait for any serial with that desparation) but here comes ur story; keep going; u hv lot of avid mb & imv lovers to read

anyway u hv mentioned but give v.industries prominent place as i feel that is biggest character bigger than even imv; it will go on whether imv is there or not albeit may not be with same pace

thanks buddy.. Appreciate it.. defo a motivation to write further.. considering what an extremely lazy writer I am..😆 and am honored if you wld await this amateur version .. yes I will keep V. Ind in the narrative.. deep rooted.. but the thing is I still dont know for sure how and where I am heading.. hopefully some grand context wld make its way to my head.. fully formed😆

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sonali.19281

@sonali.19281

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Faith-
Yay your version is here!
I have been waiting for it.. Need some proper closure and I know I can count on this for that.. Thanks for taking out time for doing this Sonali🤗

Will read and get back with a more detailed comment but needless to say I am sure I would love it

awww you commented😆 finally.. munira and me were hounding you on the other thread.. and yup I did find some time last evening to write this part.. this part was easy.. i m nervous abt the rest.. I guess I need to get in the CP-IMV mode for tht.. watch those scenes.. sigh..

you wld write a detailed comment😲.. 🤣 I had pretty much settled for a like.. but wooopie..

now only if Binis wld say something.. m sure she has loads to say.. esp make fun of.. coz she has never read my other story..😆 and all this is rather new for her...

and b4 I forget.. OMG I loveee the sig u r wearing.. fab work.. must be tht frnd of yers..

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-Faith-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sonali.19281
awww you commented😆 finally.. munira and me were hounding you on the other thread.. and yup I did find some time last evening to write this part.. this part was easy.. i m nervous abt the rest.. I guess I need to get in the CP-IMV mode for tht.. watch those scenes.. sigh.. *sigh* aww I am sure you would do complete justice..
Ya I could not help but comment na *sharminda muh*
Oh and you and Munira hounded me? Leh I did not even see? I did not get to lurk properly past two three days.. Will check hehe

you wld write a detailed comment😲.. 🤣 I had pretty much settled for a like.. but wooopie.. hehehe sharminda na karo yaar... detailed comment... vaada nahi par koshish 😉

now only if Binis wld say something.. m sure she has loads to say.. esp make fun of.. coz she has never read my other story..😆 and all this is rather new for her... Awww I am sure once she reads she won't be able to resist either comment zaroor karey gi...

and b4 I forget.. OMG I loveee the sig u r wearing.. fab work.. must be tht frnd of yers..Oh ya same friend Fati! :D She is beyond amazing na! :D And I loved those avis you are using ... but it kind of makes me sad too.. but then oh well *sigh*

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-Faith-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Aaahhh I want the next part like NOWWW!!!
You chose just the perfect point to begin with.. post the birthday and the whole tortorous fiasco and butchering of VV and even S ...And wow hopes for redemption for VV.. the VV we once loved... This would SO help in erasing the loser wimpy V memories from the show..

The dialogues and the descriptions and the flow everything was just so subtle .. loved that and ofcourse you always excel in your choice of songs..

Looking forward to the rest of it.. Whenever you can manage to jot it down.. And however long or short it maybe(the longer the better though) And esp looking forward to the way you would deal with IMV-CP-D angle...

Once again thanks for doing this Sonali!🤗

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chandaursitare

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

It's beautiful! If only, they had taken this route.

I can't wait for more. I would like to remember V like this and not the way he changed after S came back at his birthday. And I totally forgot about the card. 😍 Thank you for writing this, Sonali! 😊

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sonali.19281

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Faith-
Aaahhh I want the next part like NOWWW!!!
You chose just the perfect point to begin with.. post the birthday and the whole tortorous fiasco and butchering of VV and even S ...And wow hopes for redemption for VV.. the VV we once loved... This would SO help in erasing the loser wimpy V memories from the show..

The dialogues and the descriptions and the flow everything was just so subtle .. loved that and ofcourse you always excel in your choice of songs..

Looking forward to the rest of it.. Whenever you can manage to jot it down.. And however long or short it maybe(the longer the better though) And esp looking forward to the way you would deal with IMV-CP-D angle...

Once again thanks for doing this Sonali!🤗

LMAOOO.. now is not an option.. but I can try soon😆 well thats the thing I am debating.. it may just get a little longer than I imagined.. esp developing everything.. which like I said I still dont know.. I HAD to start from there.. the b'day onwards.. coz tht bullet fiasco was just ughhh.. and I was watching the B'day bit.. and they just completely threw the developing feelings of V out the window.. the cryptic feelings that resonated in the LOOK he kept giving her as he greeted everyone.. WAT happened to tht.. shrugs.. Well I dont exactly know long term how to deal with it.. but If its any hint VD have to be at peace for the big IMV-CP thing to come..and for D to deal with it.. they showed her rather superficial here.. and VV is the ONLY OBJECTIVE influence in her life who can show her the right path.. IMO.. so yup defo heading tht way.

as for the subtlety.. I am a sucker for such stuff.. always more on what's implied than what's said.. In fact I loved one line tht Sabina ended up saying here.. sigh I cldnt imagine I wld redeem her too😆that wasnt really the intention..😆

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sonali.19281

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: chandaursitare
It's beautiful! If only, they had taken this route.

I can't wait for more. I would like to remember V like this and not the way he changed after S came back at his birthday. And I totally forgot about the card. 😍 Thank you for writing this, Sonali! 😊

you are most welcome chanda.. its not just you.. ALL of us dark lord lovers and once upon a time VV and VD lovers.. wanted things to go this way.. Most importantly show things in a more real vein.. not chasing a fantasy and being irresponsible and extremely self consumed about things.. Ppl blame iMV for being selfish.. where does tht leave VV..😆 as much as we hate to accept everyone is selfish.. aka Khudgarz like IMV once said..

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koolsadhu1000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

She got to her feet as I followed her "Well said Mr. Virani" and now extending her hand she concluded "All the best.. I wish you every happiness in life.. more importantly a fulfilling life"

I am not just Vaibhav.. I am a Virani ' the future of an enterprise.. I have opened my eyes into that legacy and worked my way towards it for the better part of my life.. I am responsible for everything and everyone VAIBHAV Industries stood as an establishment for.. I owe each and every bit for who I AM "As usual YOU made my life easy.. thank you for THIS Birthday Gift..'

As usual YOU made my life easy.. thank you for THIS Birthday Gift..'

You portrayed Sabina VERY objectively , just as the character originally was and is supposed to be . Thats EXACTLY the way Sabina wud have bid Vaibhav good bye . It shud have been THAT WAY only .

The dialogue u gave Vaibhav ...This dialogue wud have made this serial's TRPS sky rocket . The moment of self realization for him and recognising WHO nd WHAT he was . Not just Vaibhav but ALSO a VIRANI . There r two parts to his name , in the serial he forgot the second part . Oh HOW i wish this scene had been there in the serial ! I wud have forgiven him for running after Sabina had he come to this realisation of his own worth and self .

As for Devki ...Yes she had made his life easy . Right from the day of the engagement when she had held his bandaged hand and ut the ring on his finger ...she had soothed him first and then thought of herself . It was a primary instinct with her ...soothing him . She simplified his life and thought of nothing but HIM and they showed he remained untouched and unmoved coz he was a great one month old lover , one of the most loyal and finest .

his reaction to Devki shud have been as u showed . That card shud have been put to rightfu luse .

Excellently written .ity ur a scientist coz u wud have minted a fortune writing books . Ur a born writer .

Came home late today fell asleep on the sofa while typing this , got up now . finished my post and now going up😃

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Anmol Jain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

u could have pmed me 😡😆anyways brilliant , i wish u had directed mb😆and u would have added kools hot ideas too

ahaaa wish these makers had never bought s , last ke 2 months mein jamkar vd romance dikhate

i am telling u if the show would have run for a long period of time, they would have never united vs

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