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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Nice story Tia..
I liked the idea of them talking to each other before their marriage ( a serious one ) unlike what happened in the show..
This line of Sarla Ma..

"But I don't want you to survive, Pragya. I want you to live, to live and enjoy life, like most people do. "

I loved this one..
Nicely written..👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Awesome story. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Hayee Tia!!!!

I love how you interpret the scenes shown to us in the show and make them your own by changin bits and bobs! You make it work so smoothly! Had this happened in reality I would have loved it! Seems like a good or maybe better start than they had for Abhigya in the show!

Do continue soon because i am dying to find out what happens next! <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Res!! Love it!
I read it really quickly and wow!! but i need to savor what I'm reading so comment later!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow Tia this is awesome and very interesting to see something new ...it's like a new beginning and new destiny for both of them ...Tia your story is unique and I looked forward to read what will happen next ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: deefan

Interested and intrigued...where is this leading?!
lovely so far Tia!



Thanks Dee! Next update would shed some light on where it is going..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Amazing Tia. This was the first meet they had to show n you have written it superbly. I liked Abhi first visit to Aroras but your write up scene looks more promising than actually shown in show
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Great start 👏 👏
They can have a clean start 😃
Please continue 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: -mina-



well the experiment is VERY compelling and brings me right back to last june and i am very excited!! so i hope you and bhootni make it work together!! love love love!


I hope I make it a nice story. Nervous!😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: putturani

Tia has another fic!! *dances around in excitement*

Loved it as usual! Your writing style is so natural and effortless that I can picture everything in my mind. Your characters talk like real people talk, which is so hard to achieve in writing. 👏

Thanks for those words.😊

I loved their meet-cute, with Pragya mistaking him for the milkman! 🤣

Lol. I was wondering if I should make him a newspaper guy or a sabjiwala too.

Also liked the line about the mela - exactly describes what happens to Arora house when damaad walks in!

You really succeeded with both their characters here. I love how with very few words you make Abhi so intimidating, but also imply that he is a good person.

Thanks! Hope I keep up with that Abhi.

"There has to be something else if not the money. No one ever does anything without a motivation."

He is really very cynical, will be interesting to see how/if he changes!


Tia, I have no idea where this is going and it's making me so excited! 😃😃


Uff, I know where to take it, but how is putting me in so many dilemmas. I just hope for the best.😃
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