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Posted: 6 years ago
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So heera knows it now...😲
& she cannot handle it , what will jalal do ?

Waiting for next .
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good one buddy
Did maham di it intensionally to drift them apart
But shouldn't have just left like this
How will jalal react
Update asap buddy
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hope jodha comes back to her love jalal soon. Poor joja. Maham anga ka pair kabar main latakte hue bhi aisa kaam😲
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Hope jodha comes back to her love jalal soon. Poor joja. Maham anga ka pair kabar main latakte hue bhi aisa kaam😲


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Posted: 6 years ago
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One thing I can say that I will not drag the story very far , as it has been too long since I started the story, and I will update the next chapter soon 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice updat
Thank you dearπŸ˜›
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: msbhattacharya

One thing I can say that I will not drag the story very far , as it has been too long since I started the story, and I will update the next chapter soon 😳


waiting waiting...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--


waiting waiting...😳

I assure you dear your waite will be over this week πŸ˜›
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Originally posted by: msbhattacharya

I assure you dear your waite will be over this week πŸ˜›



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I AM HERE WITH THE NEW CHAPTER OF MY STORY I HOPE EVERYONE LIKES ITπŸ˜›

CHAPTER 68

Jalal entered Hira's Hojra it was very romantically decorated the candle lights were dim yet very soothing to the eyes Jalal could feel the romance in the air as a special kind of Itra(fragrance was used to maintain the mood of the room Jalal was existed to see Hira he has spent night like these before qith his Begam's but he is quite exited to see how Hira looks he is enjoying the whole idea as the room is decorated with flowers , red roses was all over the room Jalal went to the window it was a fool moon nught he imagined the smiling face of Hira in the moon it really made him happy . Jalal was lostg in Hira's thought when a voice came from his back-

Servant- Parden me Sehensha but did you called me? Jalal was irritated by this interruption but he looked back and said

Jalal- yes Indeed I want to know where is Hira Begam , it has been really late in the night( the servant was a trans gender as men were not allowed in the haram) the servant did a salam and left , after few moments he came and said- Long live Sehensha

Jalal- What happend tell me where is Hira Begum> the servant did not say a word he just stood mum . Where is she tell me come on out with it. He still did not say a word this made Jalal very angry he went to him and said if you don't with to die tell me or otherwise, the servant went to his knees and said

Servant - Sehensha please don't do this to me, a Bandi of Hira begam told me that she has left the fort few hours ago and ... Jalal eyes became big with shock he said

Jalal- How can she leave the fort without asking me she can't do it , go and find her you ediot , I think she has lost the path somewhere in the fort just go and find her do you get me

Surnent Sehensha y Lord the guird in the main gate saw her living the fort with her two Bandies Vishakha and Lalita . Jalal could not Beleieve Jalal orderd him to call the Bandi

Jalal- What did you saw , and be quick with your answer because I am loosing my paitensts .

Bandi- Sehensha, Hira begam and her two close Bandies left the Fort she told me that I should inform you that she has left a letter for you in the room .

Jalal Went close to her- Then I assume you know where the letter is and I want you to give the letter to me , the bandi stated looking for the letter with trammelling hands and sweating face Jalal odered the servant. Tell Maan Singh that I want him to send force and Biring Hira begum back here in the fort , make it fast. The servant did a Salam and left Hira's room. The Bandi found out the letter and she gave to Jalal . Jalal who was fuming with anger by then looked at her and said I am going to meet Rukayiya Begum , When Hira Begum comes back only then I should be informed jalal snached the letter from the Bandi and went to meet Rukayiya.

Rukayiya read the whole letter to Jalalthis truth came as a shock to her as well , jalal never told her about this . When she finished the reading she saw Jalal seating on her bad Hiding his face with his hands. Rukayiya went to him out her hand on his sholder .

Jalal- Without removing his hand from his face- I should have told her, ya Allah whant big mistake I have made I don't know what I should do.

Rukayiya- i know what you can do Jalal . She sat next to Jalal let her go to Amber. Jalal was shock to here this from Rukayiya , Rukayiya said in a calm voice please bring the force back here in the fort. If you trust me do that please. Jalal called a Servant and orderd him the same

Rukayiya- Smiled said Jalal your force may bring her back , but that will increase her distance with you. She will never accept you , she will try to run away more , let her be there for a while let her know why you took this decision . I know you from childhood Jalal you never take decisions only on emotions , Let her discover that also if you let her do this she will be with you forever by her heart , mind and sole .

Jalal- Rukayiya how can just leave me like this she would have caem to me ask about what hapend.

Rulkayiya- Jalalshe is a very young innocent girl she was not brought up in Royal proto calls. At least you should understand that Jalal .
Jalal- Fine bring me a glass of Sharab(alcohol) . Rukayiya went a brought a glass of Sharab to Jalal , Jalal drank a jug of Alcohol then and under the effect of alcohol he imagined Rukayiya as Hira and he made love to her , he was very passionate on bed with Rukayiya.

On the other side Hira reached Amber after an extensive travel of three days / She directly went to her hjome where she spent her childgood , but she came to know that her family lives in Amber fort now, and there celebrations are going on as the youngest princess of Amber Shivani is going to get married to a prince of a state of Rajputana . Hira had no choice but to go the fort , she went to the palace for the first tume in her life she felt like dyeing WHEN SHE ENTERED THE palace . She spent a lot of time here in her childhood , but now when she knows that she belongs to this place she just can not take the truth . She has decided that she will never go to Agra again .but before that she will talk to her biological parents and to the family who brought her up to know why they did this to her?

When she reached the Rani Mainawati came to greed her she was more than happy to see that her daughter was here . Hira said Pranam to her she felt like crying in front of her mother but she couldn't /

Mainwati took her in her own Room and started talking to her-

Mainawati- I must say the horse rider is really fast we have sent him this morning to Agra to give you invitation for Shivani's wedding and you came in the afternoon. Where is Shensha?

Hira- I did not knew that Shivani Kuwrai saa is geeting married I just came her as I wanted to see my family members. Mainawati felt something is fishy in it

Mainawati- I hope everthing is fine in your life, Hira looked at her she was amassed to se ehow she can predict the things so easily , Everything is fine. I wanted to meet all of you as it has been a while since I met all of you Rani sa

Mainawati Oh then that is great it is great that you have came to meet us. I hope you will stay here for a while/

Hira- yes I will and trust me this time it will be a long stay. Mainawati again felt something is wrong but she did not say anything. She made up her mind that she will talk to raja Bharmal about this /

In Agra the whole Mahal is upset Hira has left her home like this, Jalal every day feels that she will write to him, his network of spies have told him that hira has reached Amber , and she is in Amber fort , but she herself did not write to him, a letter from raja Bharmal has also came that she has reached home safely with the Invitation of Shivani;s marriage, which is going to be held in one month. Jalal so want to go there as he want to meet Hira Begum he is missing her very badly / he want to inform that her biggest wish has came true , Rukayiya begum is with child , Hira always wanted that Rukayiya Begum should have someone who she can call her own.

Rukayiya also miss Hira begum a lot . She wanted so much that she should be with her in her happiest moments, because she knew in this haram she is the only one who would have been happy after salima begum to know that she is going to be a mother soon. Rukayiya and Salima Begum was talking to each other

Rukayiya- I miss Hira begum, I thought she will forget her anger and come back soon but she didn't .

Salima- I know she has got abig shock , but she should come back now I am sure Sehensha has a very good reason for his action.

Rukayiya You know I always thought Hira begum was special she was different from other Begum's and Kaneez . now I know why? Because she was never an ordinary girl, she had a grace and charm in her .

Salima- I know but she is very heart I think, otherwise it has been 3 months since she has gone to Amber . I am worried about Rahim. He has became very stubborn he always says I want to go to Hira Ammi , I want to play with choti Ammi jaan . I don't know what to do .

Rukayiya- Everything will be fine I am planning to write to her, I will give her my good news and also I will mention that Rahim has changed a lot in a negative way, I hope that she will come back even if not for jalal but for my baby and Rahim, both the begum looked at each other and smiled.

Jalal was walking on the garden in the fort when a bandi from the haram came to him and said that maham Anga is very ill the Hakima Sahiba has told everyone that she have few hours left , Maham Anga wish to see Sehensha for the last time. Jalal told the bandi that he will go immediately . When Jalal reached Maham Anga's room his mother and JIJI Anga was coming out of her room

Hamida- jalal Maham Anga have few moments left, go and talk to her, and possible please forgive her for what she did she said she wanted to make few confessions to you. Go and talk to her not like a Sehensha but like a son which you were to her once. Jalal entered maham Anga's room she was laying on her bed pale, her body size has reduced her eyes have became bigger than the usual size, when jalal entered she tried to sit raise herself but she failed Jalal went and sat on her bed. She gave a pale smile to him. Both were silent for few moments then Jalal started the conversation -

Jala- what have you done to yourself bari Ammi ! I could not believe that you are the same bari ammi who use to be my Wazir- E Aliya ( Misnister) . Maham Anga smiled and she told Jalal's jand

Maham- Jalal I have grew old now, I was your minister once , but I am dyeing now. And I feel I have gave enough contribution to your dynasty as well as in your life. Jalal looked at maham Anga then looked down

Jalal- Bari Ammi don't say that i will need you till the end of my life , nothing has happend to ypu I know you will be fine , you just need to take care of yourself/

Maham-( heavily breathing) Jalal everybody has to go one day, my time has come and I have no regattas , today where I am standing, i am standing here because of my deeds . jalal was about to say something but maham insisted him to stop. Jalal I took care of you , I loved you but it was never selfless . I had a dream that I will rule this country by my mind, after me you will be controlled by my son .

Jalal always felt that Maham Anga was trying to control him but he never admitted it, he knew this in mind , but his heart always refused the truth . Maham Anga took a breath and said- jalal you will admit that when you lost your father at a very young age people around you be it me or late Bairam Khan wanted to seek advantange of your tender age, they all wanted to mole you according to there benefits. In few cases Bairam Khan succeeded, That's why I had a rivalry with him and it was evident in the court. Jalal when Bairam Khan died I am not ashamed to tell you that I was very happy . I thought your control will be in my hands now, because I was the nost near person to you much closer than your own mother, But then Hira Begam came into your life , and she changed everything , she changed your outlook towards life. Politics and everything, and I started getting insecure , but in my heart I knew she is a great girl, she has the power to change the destiny of this whole country .

Jalal- Bari Ammi the times which has gone can not come back we could not change anything, even as Sehensha-E- Hind I can not bring back the time which has gone, I just want you to be healthy again , that;s the order of your sehensha / Maham Looked at jalal and smiled, who was acting like yhe little 13 year old boy became the leader of Mughals and maham Anga use to run behind her with a glass of milk.

Maham Jalal you have to be strong , there is a power where you don't have control , and that is death . jalal before I die I want to confess that I told Hira Begum about her birth origin , she came to meet me she was very happy I don't know what happend to me that I just told her that . I know she left you I also know I wont be able to see her again. But when she returns please tell her that I begged of her forgiveness , Maham Anga was running out of breath, she still continued-

Jalal I have a last request when your Biography will be written please be true to my deeds , don't make me sacrificing and noble which is not the real nature of me . I know the future generation of this country will hate me, curse my Soule, but I will be happy in the heaven to know that the history of this country will know my true colours . Jalal looked at Maham Anga he was about to break down in tears but he can not as he is a shensha- maham Anga said- Jalal smile and say Khuda Hafis to me , I am very happy I am going to meet my son. My husbands all the people I lost in this life time. And just say one lsat thing

Jalal- What bari Ammi( witha heavy voice)

Maham- That you forgive me for everything I did.

Jalal- I forgive you for everything Bari Ammi , Maham Anga Gave her last smile and closed her eyes. Jalal said- bari Ammi Bari Ammi. Someone call hakima Sahiba- the lady doctor came an announced that maham Anga is no more . One of the most Diplomatic of Indian History died .

PRECAP

HIRA TO MEET HER EX LOVER , MAINAWATI TO KNOW THE TRUTH OF HIRA'S VISIST TO AMBER.

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