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You won’t believe I was almost crying when I was writing it .. it was painful to write it in words 💔
I hope itni depth show me bhi mil jata...
The Emotions are reflecting in your writings....soo painful yet soo beautiful...
You won’t believe I was almost crying when I was writing it .. it was painful to write it in words 💔
I hope itni depth show me bhi mil jata...
The Emotions are reflecting in your writings....soo painful yet soo beautiful...
Originally posted by: asmitamohanty
Beautiful....
Such talented people you all are...
Amazing....
Yes....
" Vida kar toh Rahi Hun..
Haste haste Zindagi se aap Ko,
Par aap ke Jane ke Baad khub roungi.."
Jhanak
Beautifully written....
Wo alag hngy to ashk behygy na!
Phir milengy ubarty hue jazbaat k sath ❤️
I thought about the colors here asmita… taking inspiration from you … jhanak dressing in plain white sari , everyone in colors , anirudh in red… this means so much
White is color we wear when someone dies, red is a color of celebration in weddings. Red has been significant throughout their journey… their wedding dress was red … and now again ani is wear that same red while jhanak is in white … ❤️🤍
Well u have to write for our pup Ani too🥹
Amazing !! What comes out fast like that speaks the loudest !! Aap ke dil se nikali hamare dil tak pohanch gayi ❤️
Originally posted by: Manoshono
Anirudh ka jawab… Jhanak ke liye 😭🙈
Dil ke tukre haazar hain, Magar pher bhi khud ko sambhal raha hon…
Kiya waki tumhe esa laga ke tumhe khud se dur kar paraha hon…
Meri bebasi he hai mera muqaddar, khud ko jala ke tuj ko azama raha hon…
Yaqeen hai mujhe kisi din tum aoogi laut ke mere paas, tab tak ke liye tumse dur jaraha hon…
Just freshly received in my heart after reading Vira’s poetry toh socha fatfat likh don….❤️
Anirudh ka bhi dard peeche kyn rahe…! 🥺
OMG Veere, Goosebumps 
Aankhein num kar di aapne
Writing this for Jhanak, describing Jhanak's pain on the night of Anirudh's wedding...
I hope you guys like it and feel her pain through my words...
Gumsum si khadi hoon, iss mehfil mein tumhari,
Saji hai raat aaj, khushi me tumhari,
I stand quietly in this gathering of yours,
Tonight, the night is adorned with your happiness,
Pehana hai aaj tumane laal, kisi aur ke pyaar mein,
Main bhi saji hoon safed, mere pyaar ke intkal mein,
You are dressed up in red in love of someone else,
And I too am adorned in white in death of my love,
Par kaise karu is laal rang ko mere dil se alvida,
Shayad kisi aur par sajata (sindoor) dekh kar hi hoga ye vida...
But how do I bid farewell to this red color from my heart,
Perhaps it will only depart after I see it decorate someone else
Dil ko Dard ki lat lagi hai, ab har khushi hairat si lagne lagi hai,
Tumhe na ho isaka nasha, ab issi koshish me hai ye laga
My heart is so addicted to pain that every happiness seems like a surprise
May you also not get intoxicated by it, now this my effort
Tumhari khushi dekh dil, bhool gaya hai mehsoos karana,
Mumkin hai issi liye bardasht ho raha hai mere pyaar ka tamasha
Seeing your happiness, my heart has forgotten how to feel,
Perhaps that's why I can endure this spectacle of my love.
Poochti hoon khud se, kyun bikharana chahti hoon iss kadar,
Lekin iss raat ke baad, kahan aati hai ab muze zindagi nazar
I ask myself why I want to scatter myself so much,
But then again I do not see a life for myself after this night,
Mere zindagi ki is aakhari raat me, dil to aise toot raha hai,Har pal toot kar bhi, tere liye shehnai ban kar gunj raha hai
In the final night of my life, my heart is breaking like this,
Even while its breaks, its making sound of shehnai (a wedding march) for you,
Jab guzarani hi hai muze ye raat ab kisi tarah se,
Phir kyu na sawarun tumhe kuch aur pal iss bahane se?
When I have to live through this night somehow,
Why not adorn you for a few more moments with this excuse?
I could not wait to post this till tomorrow because I loved it so much! 🙈 But I will update it with photos of the wedding tomorrow! Sharing with only a few of you who do Shayaris for now! ❤️
Yes I shall tomorrow … Anum already started ❤️
So true !! I wish !! We will have to remake it as a web series 😃
Originally posted by: asmitamohanty
I hope itni depth show me bhi mil jata...
The Emotions are reflecting in your writings....soo painful yet soo beautiful...
I thought about the colors here asmita… taking inspiration from you … jhanak dressing in plain white sari , everyone in colors , anirudh in red… this means so much
White is color we wear when someone dies, red is a color of celebration in weddings. Red has been significant throughout their journey… their wedding dress was red … and now again ani is wear that same red while jhanak is in white … ❤️🤍
Yes....
" Leke Gaya mere rang saare sangme tu Apne Piya"
In Jhanak's pov...her sirji has taken all colours of her life and is shining bright,according to her Ani is celebrating his wedding in the same red giving closure to their bond and she is just mourning her love that ended even before it could begin..
Vira 😘Amazing !! What comes out fast like that speaks the loudest !! Aap ke dil se nikali hamare dil tak pohanch gayi ❤️
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Originally posted by: Manoshono
Dil ke tukre haazar hain, Magar pher bhi khud ko sambhal raha hon…
Kiya waki tumhe esa laga ke tumhe khud se dur kar paraha hon…
Meri bebasi he hai mera muqaddar, khud ko jala ke tuj ko azama raha hon…
Yaqeen hai mujhe kisi din tum aoogi laut ke mere paas, tab tak ke liye tumse dur jaraha hon…
Just freshly received in my heart after reading Vira’s poetry toh socha fatfat likh don….❤️
Anirudh ka bhi dard peeche kyn rahe…! 🥺
@red That sums up all ❤️
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