yes... me heart was breaking while i was writing this for her... 😣
You have captured her painful journey soo beautifully....soo soo beautifully...
yes... me heart was breaking while i was writing this for her... 😣
You have captured her painful journey soo beautifully....soo soo beautifully...
Writing this for Jhanak, describing Jhanak's pain on the night of Anirudh's wedding...
I hope you guys like it and feel her pain through my words...
Gumsum si khadi hoon, iss mehfil mein tumhari,
Saji hai raat aaj, khushi me tumhari,
I stand quietly in this gathering of yours,
Tonight, the night is adorned with your happiness,
Pehana hai aaj tumane laal, kisi aur ke pyaar mein,
Main bhi saji hoon safed, mere pyaar ke intkal mein,
You are dressed up in red in love of someone else,
And I too am adorned in white in death of my love,
Par kaise karu is laal rang ko mere dil se alvida,
Shayad kisi aur par sajata (sindoor) dekh kar hi hoga ye vida...
But how do I bid farewell to this red color from my heart,
Perhaps it will only depart after I see it decorate someone else
Dil ko Dard ki lat lagi hai, ab har khushi hairat si lagne lagi hai,
Tumhe na ho isaka nasha, ab issi koshish me hai ye laga
My heart is so addicted to pain that every happiness seems like a surprise
May you also not get intoxicated by it, now this my effort
Tumhari khushi dekh dil, bhool gaya hai mehsoos karana,
Mumkin hai issi liye bardasht ho raha hai mere pyaar ka tamasha
Seeing your happiness, my heart has forgotten how to feel,
Perhaps that's why I can endure this spectacle of my love.
Poochti hoon khud se, kyun bikharana chahti hoon iss kadar,
Lekin iss raat ke baad, kahan aati hai ab muze zindagi nazar
I ask myself why I want to scatter myself so much,
But then again I do not see a life for myself after this night,
Mere zindagi ki is aakhari raat me, dil to aise toot raha hai,Har pal toot kar bhi, tere liye shehnai ban kar gunj raha hai
In the final night of my life, my heart is breaking like this,
Even while its breaks, its making sound of shehnai (a wedding march) for you,
Jab guzarani hi hai muze ye raat ab kisi tarah se,
Phir kyu na sawarun tumhe kuch aur pal iss bahane se?
When I have to live through this night somehow,
Why not adorn you for a few more moments with this excuse?
I could not wait to post this till tomorrow because I loved it so much! 🙈 But I will update it with photos of the wedding tomorrow! Sharing with only a few of you who do Shayaris for now! ❤️
very beautiful dear! Tumne rula diya 🥲
You have written so beautifully .. u must share it on other platforms too♥️❤️
Amazing !! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙 words flowing like water …
Magnificent 💖
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For Jhanak:
Khuda ne ussey tmarey liye banaya hai,
Pyaar ka ussey libaas pehnaya hai,
Izhar-e-mohabat ki raah ne usey umeed dilaya hai,
Jalan me daal ker, dil ki aag ko aur bharkaya hai,
Dard se aatish ban ker usney abhi jalaya hai,
Ishq ke rung me usny dil ko dhadkaya hai,
Mohabat me wo apni deewangi pe utar aya hai,
Junoon banker zindagi ko beyhadh tadpaya hai,
Dil ki khatir phir tmhey seeney se lagya hai ♥️
You won’t believe I was almost crying when I was writing it .. it was painful to write it in words 💔
very beautiful dear! Tumne rula diya 🥲
You have written so beautifully .. u must share it on other platforms too♥️❤️
Thank you
Originally posted by: asmitamohanty
You have captured her painful journey soo beautifully....soo soo beautifully...
Amazing !! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙 words flowing like water …
Apny bhi to Vira Jhanak se phirse attach krwadiya,
Usky dard ko itna khubsoorat andaz de kar ✨️
it is indeed painful and Jhanak’s pain and misery is felt through your poem! I wish that kind of depth were shown in the episode thru the actress, we all would have connected more with her than Ani!You won’t believe I was almost crying when I was writing it .. it was painful to write it in words 💔
No words dear.. very beautiful and sad !
Magnificent 💖
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For Jhanak:
Khuda ne ussey tmarey liye banaya hai,
Pyaar ka ussey libaas pehnaya hai,
Izhar-e-mohabat ki raah ne usey umeed dilaya hai,
Jalan me daal ker, dil ki aag ko aur bharkaya hai,
Dard se aatish ban ker usney abhi jalaya hai,
Ishq ke rung me usny dil ko dhadkaya hai,
Mohabat me wo apni deewangi pe utar aya hai,
Junoon banker zindagi ko beyhadh tadpaya hai,
Dil ki khatir phir tmhey seeney se lagya hai ♥️
Beautiful....
Such talented people you all are...
Amazing....
Yes....
" Vida kar toh Rahi Hun..
Haste haste Zindagi se aap Ko,
Par aap ke Jane ke Baad khub roungi.."
Jhanak
Beautifully written....
Anirudh ka jawab… Jhanak ke liye 😭🙈Writing this for Jhanak, describing Jhanak's pain on the night of Anirudh's wedding...
I hope you guys like it and feel her pain through my words...
Gumsum si khadi hoon, iss mehfil mein tumhari,
Saji hai raat aaj, khushi me tumhari,
I stand quietly in this gathering of yours,
Tonight, the night is adorned with your happiness,
Pehana hai aaj tumane laal, kisi aur ke pyaar mein,
Main bhi saji hoon safed, mere pyaar ke intkal mein,
You are dressed up in red in love of someone else,
And I too am adorned in white in death of my love,
Par kaise karu is laal rang ko mere dil se alvida,
Shayad kisi aur par sajata (sindoor) dekh kar hi hoga ye vida...
But how do I bid farewell to this red color from my heart,
Perhaps it will only depart after I see it decorate someone else
Dil ko Dard ki lat lagi hai, ab har khushi hairat si lagne lagi hai,
Tumhe na ho isaka nasha, ab issi koshish me hai ye laga
My heart is so addicted to pain that every happiness seems like a surprise
May you also not get intoxicated by it, now this my effort
Tumhari khushi dekh dil, bhool gaya hai mehsoos karana,
Mumkin hai issi liye bardasht ho raha hai mere pyaar ka tamasha
Seeing your happiness, my heart has forgotten how to feel,
Perhaps that's why I can endure this spectacle of my love.
Poochti hoon khud se, kyun bikharana chahti hoon iss kadar,
Lekin iss raat ke baad, kahan aati hai ab muze zindagi nazar
I ask myself why I want to scatter myself so much,
But then again I do not see a life for myself after this night,
Mere zindagi ki is aakhari raat me, dil to aise toot raha hai,Har pal toot kar bhi, tere liye shehnai ban kar gunj raha hai
In the final night of my life, my heart is breaking like this,
Even while its breaks, its making sound of shehnai (a wedding march) for you,
Jab guzarani hi hai muze ye raat ab kisi tarah se,
Phir kyu na sawarun tumhe kuch aur pal iss bahane se?
When I have to live through this night somehow,
Why not adorn you for a few more moments with this excuse?
I could not wait to post this till tomorrow because I loved it so much! 🙈 But I will update it with photos of the wedding tomorrow! Sharing with only a few of you who do Shayaris for now! ❤️
Dil ke tukre haazar hain, Magar pher bhi khud ko sambhal raha hon…
Kiya waki tumhe esa laga ke tumhe khud se dur kar paraha hon…
Meri bebasi he hai mera muqaddar, khud ko jala ke tuj ko azama raha hon…
Yaqeen hai mujhe kisi din tum aoogi laut ke mere paas, tab tak ke liye tumse dur jaraha hon…
Just freshly received in my heart after reading Vira’s poetry toh socha fatfat likh don….❤️
Anirudh ka bhi dard peeche kyn rahe…! 🥺
I thought about the colors here asmita… taking inspiration from you … jhanak dressing in plain white sari , everyone in colors , anirudh in red… this means so much
White is color we wear when someone dies, red is a color of celebration in weddings. Red has been significant throughout their journey… their wedding dress was red … and now again ani is wear that same red while jhanak is in white … ❤️🤍
Originally posted by: asmitamohanty
This is hunting....
May Jhanak rise from the ashes and emerge stronger like a phoenix.... overcoming all her insecurities , shackles that holds her back..
And just rise...
Soo beautifully written
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