A Bag of Sweet Surprises - ArShi OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: Savera84

Awe! Such a cute story. I can totally imagine this in their post proper marriage life. Khushi and her jalebi love is out of the world.

I have a feeling, she loves jalebi a tad bit more than Arnav.

Everyone was in their element. Loved it.

Priya's book cover is adorable with a orange coil of jalebi.

Thank you so much for your lovely review . I thought their banter should never change. Jalebi and Khushi... a love that never fades . For Arnav... maybe pyaar ka badal nikal gaya

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

I like the colors and textures in this banner... the jalebi in the corner scores extra points in my book .

'The Great Jalebi Heist'

What do I say about this OS... or should I say case . There are so many hilarious moments interwoven with canon typical characterizations and dialogs... honestly, this is one my fav entries in the contest . I know, as an organiser, I shouldn't be picking favourites... but I need my secret stash of Arshi moments like these from time to time... so... 🤷🏻‍♀️.

If I sit and pick my fav dialogs from the OS, it will take too long... so suffice to say, the whole thing was a riot... with a dash of sweet romance at the end . Arnav (and Aarav) pulling Khushi's leg even while helping her on the case... innocent Payal to slightly mischievous Aakash... Buaji's Sanka devi, Mamiji's Phatti Sari and NK's Nannav... all in one OS!! Eeeekkss... don't mind me while I stalk this thread and re-read it a few more times (perhaps go back and watch a few episodes too while I'm at it ).

If you have written something else on Arshi, please link me to it... if not, I demand plead that you write it ASAP!! Pretty please with a Jalebi on top.

Love,

Stuti

P.S. Tagging the judges to this thread as well.

Awww, thank's so much for your lovely review, Stuti . Your words made my day .

It was great fun to write this story. For me, it can't do without their little Tom & Jerry fights. I thought that was a big part of the show and gave it flavour. And of course there should be a romantic moment too. Imagine their speaking eyes ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it and if it makes you watch a couple of episodes again all the better. Maybe Diwali-episode

It's my first story about Arshi. Maybe sometimes I will write another one . Will definitely tag you then.

A case of missing jalebis and the whole house is turned upside down. Instead of the bag, he should have got her a box of jalebi.

Originally posted by: coderlady

A case of missing jalebis and the whole house is turned upside down. Instead of the bag, he should have got her a box of jalebi.

He could've packed a box of Jalebis in the bag 🤔

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

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Dii dii what a beautiful and heartwarming story!

You’ve captured Arnav and Khushi’s dynamic perfectly - the humor, the love, and the chaos they bring into each other’s lives.

The “emergency jalebi stash” moment was absolutely hilarious and so true to Khushi’s quirky nature.

Arnav’s thoughtful gesture with the handbag was touching, and I loved how he expressed his love in his unique way.

The ending was perfect, with Khushi promising to carry jalebis in her new bag - it felt so true to their bond. You’ve written their chemistry so wonderfully. Absolutely loved it! 💖

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