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Awwwww my Khushi and her craziness over jalebis will never end Making full shaantivan upside down for a bag full of jalebis, only she can do it and sadly Arnav has to follow biwi's dramaThe ending brought me back to their Ab naa jaa sequence that was beautifully written, thank you for sharing it and gorgeous cover as wellLove the energy behind it
I like the colors and textures in this banner... the jalebi in the corner scores extra points in my book .
'The Great Jalebi Heist'
What do I say about this OS... or should I say case . There are so many hilarious moments interwoven with canon typical characterizations and dialogs... honestly, this is one my fav entries in the contest . I know, as an organiser, I shouldn't be picking favourites... but I need my secret stash of Arshi moments like these from time to time... so... 🤷🏻♀️.
If I sit and pick my fav dialogs from the OS, it will take too long... so suffice to say, the whole thing was a riot... with a dash of sweet romance at the end . Arnav (and Aarav) pulling Khushi's leg even while helping her on the case... innocent Payal to slightly mischievous Aakash... Buaji's Sanka devi, Mamiji's Phatti Sari and NK's Nannav... all in one OS!! Eeeekkss... don't mind me while I stalk this thread and re-read it a few more times (perhaps go back and watch a few episodes too while I'm at it ).
If you have written something else on Arshi, please link me to it... if not, I demand plead that you write it ASAP!! Pretty please with a Jalebi on top.
Love,
Stuti
P.S. Tagging the judges to this thread as well.
Awww, the OS was so cute. Post marriage Arnav Khushi and you included Aarav too. I loved it. Thanks for the tag, So-So!
Khushi and her emergency Jalebi stash..
Priya, the cover is beautiful.
Aarav 😍😍
Loved the cuteness of Arshi ❣️
Great work!
Wonderful OS!!! This was such a fun riot to read! Khushi proves her Sanka devi title right with taking the entire house in search of her jalebis.
The cover is gorgeously done!
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