I’m saying this again…you write so well that I can actually visualise the scenes. And I am loving this suspense. Please please do complete the story as and when you get time.
Will surely complete this
I’m saying this again…you write so well that I can actually visualise the scenes. And I am loving this suspense. Please please do complete the story as and when you get time.
Will surely complete this
In one word.... Awesome....beautifully written.....I am in court....reading this in middle of a case and waiting for the case to be heared...... I have to wear a coat in this scorching heat.. The heat wave is going on in our country.....some people died from heat stroke....Really this time in sunmer tempreture is high...so everybody take care of yourself....
So sweet of you... Yes, the heat is unbearable... Take care of yourselves ❤️
Originally posted by: PSharada
This was so nice. I would have absolutely loved if the creatives introduced Surya in this manner without having Binni the Tinni or Raghu in the mix. They could have not had Reddy family also. Maybe Surya could be an orphan and we could have had Chaudhary family only on the show. The way you are weaving the story - it's beautiful. Surya is really the man of his words. Can't wait for how the Chaudhary's react to the truth unveiling.
Absolute beautiful part Shree. Thanks for the tag.
So happy that you're enjoying the story ❤️
Kya likhti ho Shree behan!
I am so exhausted with all the traveling, shifting and everything else.. I am reading this, even before watching aaj ka episode.. And this gave me such a respite...
Garmi me baarish karke, mitti ki khushboo, de di tumne..
From sketching Arjun and Raghu into the story, to even having Alka doing her shenanigans, you are really weaving an intriguing tale..
And Imlie ke pyaar me, ye wala Rowdy Reddy bhi kaafi jaldi phisalne wala hai... I can see him falling in looouuuveeee, and blushing like an idiot!
Looking forward to more of this detectivegiri..
Tell me, Is Arjun going to be the Watson to Surya's Sherlock? or will it be Imlie?
Noo, you da best!!!
@Bold: hayeee!!! You're too much 🫣
Arjun is such a cutie, usse add karne ka mann kar gaya... and ek useless cop chahiye tha to who better than thangaballi Raghu
Yes, ladke ko already aisa dhak dhak horela hai...
Arjun and Tripathy will both kinda be the Watson and Mrs Hudson to Surya's Sherlock
That was an amazing update yrr the way Surya working on August ka case here.. Show mein iska 0.01 % bhi Nahin dikhaya he was in uniform ginke 2 baar lol but alas loved Surya Arjun conversation and how the investigation going.
And wow the revelation of surya being August twin brother in front of Surya was amazing i could feel sai nailing the scenario but show mein toh it was blah.. But here just loved it.
Imlie being imlie.. She can't see anyone in pain. The way she was concerned for surya and helped him was good.. Will be waiting for next update🤩❤
That was an amazing update yrr the way Surya working on August ka case here.. Show mein iska 0.01 % bhi Nahin dikhaya he was in uniform ginke 2 baar lol but alas loved Surya Arjun conversation and how the investigation going.
And wow the revelation of surya being August twin brother in front of Surya was amazing i could feel sai nailing the scenario but show mein toh it was blah.. But here just loved it.
Imlie being imlie.. She can't see anyone in pain. The way she was concerned for surya and helped him was good.. Will be waiting for next update🤩❤
I wished for a better reaction to the twin revelation in the show, it felt wrong ki Surya ko kuch DDP nhi hua until he saw Agastya ka video, so thought it should be this way in the FF...
So glad you liked it... ❤️
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WOW - Once again I had the same DDP when we got that Agastya was killed due to mistaken identity. Sigh - your writing is so beautiful Shree. It makes me feel all the emotions again - the ones I already made peace with.
This show will forever be the one show which will always leave me unsatisfied as I did not get a decent closure either with Agastya - Imlie or with Surya - Imlie even though no actor quit the show in the middle.
Looking forward to how you weave the story of Surya - Imlie together. Beautiful writing.
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Wonderful update.
So now Imlie knows that Surya was indirectly responsible for Agastya death. Ab aayega asli angst when Surya will slowly fall for her and she will deny her feelings. But dadi and Sonali may try to bring these two together as they rightly said only they can heal each other .
Looking forward to next updates
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