1) No instant Romance: Imlie has went through a lot at young age . So when if she is giving second chance to love, it should feel as pure ,genuine and special as her first love turned out to be. As audience I shouldn't question " When and how did Imlie fall for Surya in such short span of time ". The process should be subtle. Imlie should be conflicted in her emotions that how can Surya be replacement for Agastya
2) Backstories acting as tool for character development: Imlie previous status as widow and Surya indirect involvement in Agastya murder should be used to stop them from confessing love to each other.
3) obstacles to romance that are interesting: Obstacle that create great scope for angst. Don't want villains who are nothing but comic relief. Anjali seems to be that type of villain who could create great hurdles for Surya Imlie without breaking the intensity of her character . Do not turn her character into fool rather make her as delusional as possible so that schemes turn out more dangerous than previous.
4)keep tension and conflicts Alive : Before the grand confession let their heart break million times. Let them rage and hurt each other. Let them feel the pain of being apart so that when they reconcile I get to swoon over them instead of giggle .
The kitchen scene in today episode was great example of angst where Imlie complaint to heart content and Surya was equally aggressive to prove his point that he didn't forget his responsibility. This scene would have fallen flat if Surya Imlie would have been at friendship or love stage.
The confession whenever it will come shouldn't feel that it came out of nowhere. Before that there should be sizzle, frizzle, the confusion, looks between the characters.
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