Amazing beginning 😃😃. I would love to see where this goes further.
Amazing beginning 😃😃. I would love to see where this goes further.
Bookmarked! I will edit it later
This is so gooooodd aaahhhhh my heart!!! 😭
Back to read again because i loved it so bloody much! I love that little dance and the dialogues! And I love the head touching! And I love love love this less lashing out more introspecting Imlie!
Originally posted by: happiness1
Thanks for the tag and also the links to your old OS!
Love how this is a different take on the story! Aditya will never seize to be a jerk who is self centered! (😅 I'm using nice words)!
Aryan and Imlie will always be the perfect balance to each others chaos!
Looking forward to the reaction that will come from the Tripati's and hope that would really show Imlie her true place in their lives!
Thank you! Haha, isn’t that what the essence of Aditya is? 😆
The next part is going to be more about Imlie rather than the Ts. This girl really needs to clear her head. Hoping to put it up by Thursday or so!
Sarce, this is that whole contract marriage fiasco being done right!! I loved the clarity of their deal. A registered marriage because they recognize that AKT as much as I abhor him is no fool. Also my favorite line, what crashed? someone's dreams. 🤣
Thanks, M! The whole marriage track left out some things that could be better addressed. So I decided to do two versions — this is one where Imlie is being introspective and rational. The other one will focus on the furious, irrational Imlie that we saw during the wedding episodes. That one's going to be anywhere between 3-5 parts, if all goes well. 🤞
Originally posted by: Noredink
Thanks for the tag. I felt all my buried unpleasant feels for AKT resurfacing. Pompous, self centered, highly entitled and narcissist to the core. Hope Imlie is able to keep her part irritation, part confusing feelings for Aryan and Adi’s disgusting taunts aside and tell Tripathis on the face with no guilt that she is Mrs. Aryan Singh Rathore now. Looking forward to the next update.
Haha, there's going to be a bit more of that AKT in the next part. 😆 As to Imlie, she needs to come to a decision in the next part. 😉
Originally posted by: Happy-ness
Thank you for the tag. Amazing first part. Really loved the fact that unlike the show here Imlie understands the fact that she had the choice. Also loved the way you used the Chaap tilak reel in this story.. can imagine their beautiful smile after that twirl
AKT as always will remain the most annoying and selfish person ever. Waiting for 2nd part and Aryan's Grand entry
Thank you! That Chaap Tilak reel had my heart and I couldn't let it go without using it for AryLie somewhere and that's how this story was born. 😆
In the show, we never had Imlie ponder even once as to why she accepted Aryan’s proposal of marriage. I wanted to fix that and hence why, she thinks a bit more here.
Aiiiiii finally something about the "forced" marriage that makes sense! This would have worked so well on screen too!
I love love love the idea of the spontaneous dance. That gif fit it so perfectly!!
Lovely, Sarce! Looking forward to the next part.
Also, Rupi Didi.... chup ho jao maate!
Thanks, E! The show left a lot of gaps in that track, some of which I'm trying to fill here. And that Chaap Tilak reel has my heart so it had to be used! 😆
I liked how you described how Imlie was feeling. I actually wanted to see Imlies feelings for Aryan. Loved it.
This is something that the show hardly ever addressed even though we hit the confession, when this was something key to the plot given how Imlie had suffered the first time around and she accepted that she would never fall in love again. So when she starts feeling like that for Aryan, there should have been some introspection on her part but we never got that. So, I decided to write this. :)
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