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Posted: 1 years ago
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Part 3


Shocking Update


Disha marrying ye her husband only wanted money

and not a marriage

while there is Veer who is very understanding and cares about Disha

Aliya gets kidnapped and it's Disha that got injured saving Aliya

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Part 3

Pleasant update... nicely written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#33

Kidnapping a child for money. Disha is right that they should involve the police.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#34

Disha saved Aliya and took the bullet. A mother would do that for her child. She is already a mother.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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What a sad partsmiley38

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Thank you very much


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Dil Diyan Gallan(The thoughts of heart)Part 4

Veer and Disha reached the destination with the police.

The kidnapper got angry:You fooled me.I will not leave you.

The kidnapper took the gun and aimed at Aliya.Aliya,Veer and Disha got scared.

Veer:No...please leave my daughter.

Disha:Are you not ashamed to harm an innocent child?Don't dare to harm the child.

The police cops ran towards the kidnapper to stop him.But before that he fired the gun.

Disha came on the way to protect Aliya and she got shot.Disha fell down unconscious.

All were shocked.

Aliya cried:Disha Ma'am...

Veer screamed:Dishaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

The kidnapper got arrested by the Police.



Veer took Disha to the hospital.

Veer requested the doctor:Doctor,please save Disha.

Veer was in tears.

Veer thought:When Disha's life is in danger,why do I feel that I lost a part of me?

Aliya was crying.

As Veer called Kokila,Shikar and his parents also came there.

Kokila was crying:My Disha!Hey Krishna Bhagwan...please save my daughter.I have only her.

Shikar asked tearfully:Will mumma be alright?

Veer caressed him tearfully and said:Yes.Your mumma will be alright.She has to live for us.

He wiped his tears and held him closer.

The doctor came and told them:Disha is out of danger now.

All were relieved.


Kokila,Aliya and Shikar hugged Disha.

Kokila caressed her head softly and said:I was so scared.Lord Krishna saved you.

Disha:Maa,why were you scared?Can I leave leaving all of you?

Kokila smiled tearfully.

Aliya:I am sorry Ma'am.Because of me only you got shot.

Disha:No bachi...don't think like that.It's that criminal's fault,not yours.

Disha caressed her.

Veer:Disha,you risked your own life to save my daughter.I can't thank you enough.

Disha:What are you saying Veer?Aliya is my daughter too.Right?

Veer smiled emotionally.



Disha got discharged from the hospital.



Veer visited Disha in Kokila's house.

Disha and Kokila were surprised.

Veer:I came to check Disha.After all Disha got into a serious situation because of me.

Disha:No Veer.It's not your fault.It's that kidnapper who did everything.Anyways I will bring tea for you.

Disha went to the kitchen.She took a vessel to prepare tea.Suddenly Veer caught the vessel.

Veer:No need of making tea for me.You take rest.It's the time for resting.

Kokila:I told her many times.But she does'nt listen.Good that you also told her to rest.

Disha:Maa!

Veer:Disha...you should listen to us and take rest.

Disha:When all of you care for me,I have to take rest.

Veer and Kokila smiled.Veer took the vessel from Disha and kept it on the table.

Veer:Disha...when you get well,please come to my house.

Disha:Why?

Veer was silent for a moment.Kokila smiled.

Kokila thought:You want to spend more time with Disha.Good!

Veer:Just like that.We are friends now.

Disha:Sure.I will come.

Veer smiled.



After some days Disha went to Veer's house with Shikar.

Disha and Shikar were welcomed well by Veer's parents Arpita and Manohar.Aliya hugged Disha.

Aliya:Miss you in school Ma'am.

Disha:Don't worry beta.I will rejoin the school soon.During the upcoming final exams I will be there.

Aliya:I will be waiting for you.

Disha:Sure.Now you go and play with Shikar.

Shikar:We do play with each other daily in school.But again we will play.

They smiled.

Shikar and Aliya started playing together.

Arpita:How are you now Disha?

Disha:I am feeling better.

Arpita:You did what nobody does for an outsider.

Disha:But Aliya is not an outsider.She is my daughter.

Arpita and Veer's father Viren smiled.

Disha roamed around the house.She saw Amritha's photograph on the wall.

Disha:Is this your late wife?

Veer became sad.

Veer:Yes.She is my life which I lost years back.

Disha became emotional hearing it.

Disha:I am sorry if I hurt you by reminding you of your wife.

Veer:Nothing like that.You did'nt remind me of her.Amritha is remembered every second by me.

Disha:Amritha is pretty.Aliya is pretty like Amritha.

Veer smiled.

Veer's parents Arpita and Manohar were observing them.

Arpita:Don't you see a spark between them?

Manohar:Yes Arpita.I hope our wish to see them together will get fulfilled.

Arpita:If it happens Veer,Disha and the kids will make a happy family.

He smiled.




After Disha went back,Veer was thinking of his moments with Disha.He remembered how Disha saved Aliya by risking her own life.

Veer:This one incident made me fall in love with you Disha.My respect for you has increased.No one can be as loving and selfless as you.When you were fighting for life,I realised how important you are for me.I can't live without you Disha.Years back I lost my life.But I got my life back after I met you again.I will ask your mother for your hand.Before that I will tell you what I feel for you Disha.

Veer and Disha were standing on the road.

Veer:Disha...I want to tell you something.

Disha:Say Veer.

Veer stammered:I...I...

Suddenly a couple called her:Disha!

Disha looked at them.She was shocked and emotional.

Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#37

The kidnapper is so cruel that he showed the gunpoint to Aliya. Disha saved Aliya, but she took Aliya's bullet on herself. Kokila, Shikkar, and Veer hospital scenes were emotional. Glad that Aliya recovered and got discharged. Nice to see Veer's concern for Aliya. Veer wanted to confess his feelings to Disha, but there was an interruption. Hope Veer confesses his love for Aliya soon.

Edited by kavitha_r - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#38

Part 4

Remarkable update... awesomely written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#39

Thanks a lot.I think u meant Disha instead of Aliya in the last sentence.


Originally posted by: kavitha_r

The kidnapper is so cruel that he showed the gunpoint to Aliya. Disha saved Aliya, but she took Aliya's bullet on herself. Kokila, Shikkar, and Veer hospital scenes were emotional. Glad that Aliya recovered and got discharged. Nice to see Veer's concern for Disha. Veer wanted to confess his feelings to Disha, but there was an interruption. Hope Veer confesses his love for Aliya soon.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#40

Glad Disha And Aliya Are Safe.

Is Veer Going To Confess His love To Disha?

Who Is The Couple Calling Her?

Her Parents?

Update Soon

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