MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 15 Pg 79 - Page 72

Wonderful update

Maan is in remorse and rightfully so. Looking forward to reading about what happened after geet left. How did geet reach where she is today? How did maan develop remorse and feelings for geet?

Will be in wait for next update .

Originally posted by: geetforeverlove

Yayyyyyyyy! I was wishing that you would give us an update of This story!

I loved it how he's asking geet for every single thing and being considerate towards her

Thank you for your motivation

Originally posted by: ranumohanty34

Hi, nice chapter, geet meet her whole family including Annie and Dev, come to know meera as Dev's wife, Maan discussed with doctor, doctor suggest him to keep geet with in the environment of her family, Chetan come's to know Maan is geet's husband, geet said adevay that Maan is his dad,he is very happy, geet can see adavay's love for his dad, she is not selfish that she keep her son away from his father's love, Dev and Annie is angry on Maan but they love their bhai also, Maan wanted to stay away from geet but they denied to keep him away, Maan then decide that he will stay in out house. Let see what happened next.

Thank-you for your comment.

Originally posted by: maanshi

Awesome emotional update 👍

Maan is lucky... Geet loves him beyond any limit... After everything she is still loving him n thinking about him ... Even feeling guilty

Geet meet family .... Understand dev aniee love for geet n concern too ... like their convo ... Nice bonding ... Geet feels family love after long

Maan ask dadi for geet permission n also worried after talking to DR ... So maan is also not well .... Feels bad for maan current situation but when u mention past ... I feel he deserve this... That's magic of ur writing 🙌

Ohhh geet is so nice she says to advay maan is his dad n also meet him his family n convince him to accept... Geet sees advay love his father n maan loves him too ... but maan threat in past to give her son to sameera pained her 😥 geet even admit to chetan that maan is her hubby .... Geet is so nice ...

Maan wants to do everything with geets wish n ask everyone to do according to that n he is ready to move out but family can't agree as they loves him too ... they can be angry but can't stop loving as geet 😀 (me thinking geet even angry with him or not 🤔😄) geet loves maan toooo muchhhh 😍

Past ... Well according to maan everyone trapping him knowing him but for geet there is only one reality that she loves maan n maan is beyond to understand pure love 😥 still dadi tries to make maan understand on his dad promise ... But poor geet suffered for that ... that brij n family responsible for that 😡

Awesomely written 👏 love it ❤️

Thanks for updating in ur busy schedules 🤗

Thank-you for your wonder full detailed comment. I enjoyed every bit of it.

She does want Advay to enjoy her father and Maan is on mission sacrifice...

More past to come - yes Geet suffered a lot.

And present is for someone else to suffer

Originally posted by: Gold.Abrol

loved it dear 😍 Awesome update 😃 well now things are going to be tricky now as Geets health is decorated & this sudden emotional trauma after seeing Maan was obvious ... I really appreciate how the entire family & all the siblings are concerned about Geet & Maan & they are even more closer to Geet

Well I really loved how Geet without any further inhebits told her son about Maan & also about the entire family including Chetan her friend & finally it was arranged that Geet & Advay will join the family & Maan will be in outhouse

Hmm 🤔 this FB was the main reason of Maan anguish & sourness towards Geet & things were not handled well

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Thanks Goldie

Loved reading your comment.

Yes the whole family loves her and she wants her son to have father love, so she told him

Originally posted by: ArhamRizwan

Loved the update

Annie and dev arrived and are upset with their family to pass out the information of geet’s whereabouts to Maan.

Maan is grateful for geet for allowing their son to be with him.

Doctors advice made Maan to have a meeting with his family to bring in geet , so that she can be near her family.

Maan decided that he will shift to outhouse.

Geet revealed advay that his icecream uncle is his own dad.

Thanks you for always being with my story.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 11

Awesome yet Painful Chapter

Maan spending time with Advay outside

as the hospital is not good for children

Annie and Dev have arrived , and both missed Geet a lot

when Dev learns that Geet has a son and the little boy is with Maan ,

Dev is not happy about it

but Geet clears him that she cannot keep her son away from his father

while on the other hand Advay is filled with happiness just knowing his

ice cream uncle is his Dad

back at the Manor ,Maan explains the family that Geet needs them all around her

while he will move out

but Annie gets angry as Maan himself needs family around him

it was then suggested that he will stay in the Outhouse and Geet in the main

house with family

Thanks Taahir for your comment always.

Originally posted by: Niharika.Nair

Maan repenting of the past and trying to bring Geet closer to the family. Hope she will be able to see this change

Thanks.

He had been so harsh to her, it will take time for the realization to sink to her that he has changed.

Originally posted by: chloebear

Geet would never take away Advay from Maan and that makes me love her more, in all your other stories Maan character is more powerful but in this one Geet takes all the limelight, Maan was arrogant and delusional in past and made her life hell like serious hell, promising her to snatch her baby was the worst he could do, no wonder she left him and even today she is somewhere scared of him its going to take alot for him to make her secure about everything, I know Geet will melt easily but hope she maintains her distance

I try to keep balance. if you read my old stories, her complete Submission, Innocent love or Game or Love. All these are centered to Geet's character.

One story Yeh Rishon ki uljhan is completely Geet's story where Maan is present as her support system But the story completely revolves around Geet and her strong character. I don't know about presentation, for me it is my one of the most strongest plot, story wise,

Even Partner of Life, revolves around Geet and her struggle. Maan is a strong support while Poles Apart revolves around Maan's emotion and Geet is a strong support. so I try to keep balance.