MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 15 Pg 79 - Page 62

Hey, Anu you forgot me to send Pw this time...

Maan has remembered the words he said to her and now understands the reason for her fear of him. He knows she fainted because of him. Now he is planning to stay away from her. He needs to send a message to her that he will not take her son away. She needs to hear that.

Amazing update.

Maan got to kwn y geet fears of him.

As in past he always tell that he going to take baby from geet n will give it to sam.

Dadi n all meet geet.

Geet doesnt tell her son that ice cream uncle is his dad.

Geet doesnt stop her son to meet maan.

Maan told his son to take permission of his mom before meeting him.

Want to kwn y maan behave worst with geet in past...

waiting for part 10

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He was mean with her in the past. She loved him, but couldn't live without her child. And he even threatened to give her child to sam.

Now just by thinking that he may take away her child make her weak.

Staying away from her, for her well being is a punishment itself.

Amazing update

Maan past words give her deep impact in heart and mind

Due to all this her condition falling

But after that she not stop Advay

So nice of you

Thanks Anu for the DMs...

Thanks for bearing with my delayed replies on your updates...

Will reply to each update in parts...

- Chapter 8

Misty looking at the floor or her face not able to have an eye contact with Maan says a lot. God she must be hell shocked and embarrassed meeting her past. Because all she knows is the rude and terrible person he was..

Maan surprised with admiration for her. Seeing her in a western wear, leading a company in abroad. He must have never imagined Geet could make a place this promising for herself anywhere. Just loved how he was left dumbstruck by her progress.

Those million thoughts running in her mind and yet she couldn't voice it was all the fear Maan had filled in her. Bolegi bhi kaisi woh?? I don't know how to hate this Maan or be calm for the change in him in the present..??

That 'why was he even talking normally to her?' Jab aurat apni saari pareshaniyon or katinaaiyon se apne zindagi mein akele aage bad jaati hai, uss beech ek bacche ko bhi janam dekar paal posthi hai, bina apne pati ke sahare... Usske baad woh uss pati se bas yehin pooch sakti hai, ke ab tum wapas kya maagne aaye ho??

This part really made me feel, to punch Maan on his face.

Maan only speaking and initiating conversation in the car. He was testing waters. He asking shamelessly to be invited for a coffee.. Ab yehi reh gaya tha... Now he'll meet his kid too..!! Phir kya hoga???

- Chapter 9

Misty checking him out was the old Geet in love. Aaj bhi Maan kii Deewani..

What the hell was that past flashback!! How could Maan treat Geet like that??

Itni nafrat paal ke rakhi thi, agar itni nafrat thi toh divorce de dete ya phir shaadi ke mandap se gayab ho jana chahiye tha Maan ko..

This is so much manipulation, shaadi kar lo, phir blame karte raho apni wife ko, suhaagraat bhi manao, use her every night in the name of your anger and spew venom on her character.... Why Maan???

I hate this toxic Maan..

Shit!! Geet has a nervous breakdown.. Ab kya!!!

- Chapter 10

Geet losing her senses back again. Dadima, Meera are there too.

Maan realizing his words in the past. And even doctors confirming to that.

Dadima was so sweet, I hope she protects Geet in the coming days. Women need strong woman in such times. And there can be no women as affectionate as Dadima. Also Meera?? Will she become a confidante with Geet..?? I believe if they can be good at work, they can be good as sister-in-laws too right??

Geet has already given permission to Maan meet Advay. Will love to watch how Maan and Advay bond and them maybe can get Geet together in the frame as well.

But before that, need to make believe Maan has changed for good. He needs to swallow his tears and pain and make all of us believe that he is finally repenting with his acts.. Anu, waiting for all of this...

Thankyou, for such brilliant updates, totally emotionally moving updates..

Love, Cia..

Loved dadi scene... Maan is feeling shameful because he is the reason behind her condition.. He regrets each and everything which held in past... Advay isn't willing to go to dadi.. Maan took him to the room so he can meet his mum... She wants advay to get interact with dadi but he isn't willing to... Where as he is willing to go to his ice cream uncle.. Maan told him to take permission from his mum... She let her go to go... Though she is scared he will snatch her son... But still can't stop him... Maan has to lot of effort to win her.. It will be tough.. Wants to see how he will make her trust not only for their son but for their relationship too

Nice update

Geet fainted again n now in hospital

Past was painful no wonder geet is scared of maan taking away her son from her to never let her touch advay again

Maan knew he is to be blamed for geet's dis condition

Waiting for nxt

Originally posted by: Maaneet-Cia

Thanks Anu for the DMs...

Thanks for bearing with my delayed replies on your updates...

Will reply to each update in parts...

- Chapter 8

Misty looking at the floor or her face not able to have an eye contact with Maan says a lot. God she must be hell shocked and embarrassed meeting her past. Because all she knows is the rude and terrible person he was..

Maan surprised with admiration for her. Seeing her in a western wear, leading a company in abroad. He must have never imagined Geet could make a place this promising for herself anywhere. Just loved how he was left dumbstruck by her progress.

Those million thoughts running in her mind and yet she couldn't voice it was all the fear Maan had filled in her. Bolegi bhi kaisi woh?? I don't know how to hate this Maan or be calm for the change in him in the present..??

That 'why was he even talking normally to her?' Jab aurat apni saari pareshaniyon or katinaaiyon se apne zindagi mein akele aage bad jaati hai, uss beech ek bacche ko bhi janam dekar paal posthi hai, bina apne pati ke sahare... Usske baad woh uss pati se bas yehin pooch sakti hai, ke ab tum wapas kya maagne aaye ho??

This part really made me feel, to punch Maan on his face.

Maan only speaking and initiating conversation in the car. He was testing waters. He asking shamelessly to be invited for a coffee.. Ab yehi reh gaya tha... Now he'll meet his kid too..!! Phir kya hoga???

- Chapter 9

Misty checking him out was the old Geet in love. Aaj bhi Maan kii Deewani..

What the hell was that past flashback!! How could Maan treat Geet like that??

Itni nafrat paal ke rakhi thi, agar itni nafrat thi toh divorce de dete ya phir shaadi ke mandap se gayab ho jana chahiye tha Maan ko..

This is so much manipulation, shaadi kar lo, phir blame karte raho apni wife ko, suhaagraat bhi manao, use her every night in the name of your anger and spew venom on her character.... Why Maan???

I hate this toxic Maan..

Shit!! Geet has a nervous breakdown.. Ab kya!!!

- Chapter 10

Geet losing her senses back again. Dadima, Meera are there too.

Maan realizing his words in the past. And even doctors confirming to that.

Dadima was so sweet, I hope she protects Geet in the coming days. Women need strong woman in such times. And there can be no women as affectionate as Dadima. Also Meera?? Will she become a confidante with Geet..?? I believe if they can be good at work, they can be good as sister-in-laws too right??

Geet has already given permission to Maan meet Advay. Will love to watch how Maan and Advay bond and them maybe can get Geet together in the frame as well.

But before that, need to make believe Maan has changed for good. He needs to swallow his tears and pain and make all of us believe that he is finally repenting with his acts.. Anu, waiting for all of this...

Thankyou, for such brilliant updates, totally emotionally moving updates..

Love, Cia..

So nice to read your review after so long. Thanks for giving part wise comment. I know how pathetic he had been in past and it hurts me to bring this Maan but trust me his penance will be way bigger and his remediation track is the main focus of this story.

Yes Maan had been pathetic in past but he will not be forgiven till Geet and you readers forgive him based on his atonements.

Though it looks impossible as of now, but I will make my readers and Geet fall for him again.. a long long way to go. Keep trust in me