Subha Deepavali
Romance FF
Subha Deepavali
Anu.... Congrats on the new FF! π₯³βοΈπ
thanks for posting! π€
Part 1
Fascinating updateβ¦. superbly written
Geet is indeed a perfectionist
she ensures that everything for the party is perfect
no wonder Nina takes advantage of her
though Geet is married to Dev, it seems like that are not in love nor are they close
Geet was clearly uncomfortable with Dev's touch
why did Geet marry Dev?
how long have they been married?
Geet and Megha share a lovely bond
curious about Geet's family....
sad that for Nina, Geet is just an employee
dismayed that despite been Nina's daughter in law and giving her heart and soul to the company, Geet will
never get any shares
hmm it will only go get to Nina's blood
that's unfair as Geet is now family
Geet's reaction is justified
agree with Megha that Nina should have called Geet to also welcome the guests
after all its Geet's hard work
Nina knows how to hog the limelight
as expected Geet brushes it off
liked that Megha acknowledges Geet's hard work
at least Nina knows its cos of Geet's hard work that the company is a success
however Nina will never accept this in public
was Geet looking at the main door....for Maan's arrival?
so Dev noticed this
why was he not expecting his wife to look at him?
finally the Maan Singh Khurana arrived
wonder why Geet smiled hearing about Maan's arrival
enjoyed the banter and laughter all around
why Geet was blushing when they are talking about Maan?
of cos Maan is Nina's biggest investor
eager to know more about Maan
loved that Maan is always impressed with Geet's work and work ethics
glad that he always takes the opportunity to indirectly convey this to Nina
not surprised that he told Nina that the perfection shows with Geet's expert touch
why Nina was displeased hearing this!
there is more to Nina and her family that meets the eye
loved that Maan went to greet Geet....
pleased that they are somewhat friendly
what suggestion of Maan's did Geet not heed?
looking forward to the updates!
Thank you for the update and the intriguing update. Geet is married to Dev but obviously has no feelings for him. It must be a compromise and Maan is a close business associate. In wonder if Maan and Geet know each other way before becoming associates. Either way, they are on friendly terms or is there more.
Nice update
Waiting for next update......
Lovely Start
Different concept
Cont soon
Congrats dr
Happiee diwali ..
Beautiful update
Loved it
Maan s friendly with geet ... OMG geet s married to dev ..
Continue soon .
Waiting
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congrats for new story
very interesting
maan is friendly with geet n strict professional with nina geet's mother in law who only treat geet as employee
but brother n sister are in god way with geet
Congratulations for new story π₯³
Ouch !! Geet is married to Dev π₯Ί
When I start reading I had fear that 'husband' is not Maan π and was really heart broken when it becomes true ...
But I trust your writing..as I loved your previous FF ....I came back india forum after many years...and happy to see your FF that too first chapter....π will follow each part to read about Maaneet...
About story... I loved the title β€οΈ
What suggestions Maan is talking about β Geet and Dev are married but seems they are not sharing the bond of husband and wife...it's good to me as I'm a die hard Maaneetian π it will be interesting to read how they will become the 'partner of life'
Good and wonderful start ...the update has rise up my excitement to read more ...
Will eagerly waiting for the next chapter
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