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Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 67

Part 2

Intense update…. wonderfully written

Past well incorporated

so Maan did not want Geet to attend the wedding

great that Maan explained to her

he is indeed possessive of her

she assured Maan that she always trust him

Present

clearly nothing is the same

where is her trust?

Maan's anger was reasonable

now he wants to undo the pheras

of cos she tried to stop him

but Maan was adamant

she was clearly concerned about him

Maan's response was justified

as expected she tried again to stop him

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Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 68

Part 1

Astounding update… excellently written

Maan was clearly furious that Geet did not trust him

Gosh he wants to set Geet free

Maan's question was reasonable

now he wants to undo their pheras

of cos Geet refused

Maan's response was justified

however Geet denies that they were ever married

so Maan used her words against her

Maan was clearly determined to free her

as expected Geet tried to stop him

Gosh she fainted

at least she noticed his pained face

Thank God Geet gained consciousness

well she expected Maan to be by her side

she was certainly disappointed that he was not there

not surprised that Geet wants to know if she is still Maan's wife

Geet wanted to know where Maan was

liked Geet's concern for Maan

dadi was perplexed seeing Geet like that

dadi was also worried about Geet

Geet was tensed as Maan was angry

glad that Maan did not complete the undoing of their pheras

she was really relieved

dadima was upset that Maan and Geet hid their childhood marriage

Geet was naturally emotional

good that dadi consoled Geet

hmm Sameera confronted Geet about her marriage to Maan

loved when Geet said she is still married to Maan

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Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 68

Part 2

Majestic update… superbly written

hate Sameera's attitude

Geet was correct that Sameera does not love Maan

Sameera is clearly delusional

so she taunted Maan

liked that Geet warned her not to speak another word against Maan

glad that Geet asked Sameera for proof!

Sameera can only shout

Geet really loves Maan

but Sameera could have told the doctors to lie about her pregnancy alternatively she the baby is not

Maan's

Geet had a valid point that Maan was intoxicated

of cos Maan loves Geet and only Geet

Sameera tried to show that Maan cheated on Geet

loved Geet's response

Geet's question was reasonable

well Sameera as unable to answer the question so she tried to distract Geet

at least Geet noticed this

why would Maan want to take advantage of Sameera?

pleased that Geet asked if Sameera did not take advantage of Maan

Geet's anger was justified

Maan did distance himself from Geet for her sake

as expected Geet trusts Maan

Geet knows Maan loves her immensely

nice that Sameera's words do not affect Geet

Geet knows her Maan

Sameera is certainly stupid

good that Geet did not believe Sameera

dismayed that Sameera tried a new tactic

how could Maan be after Geet's wealth?

I am sure Geet will not pay heed to this

where is Maan?


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Past is the open eye to us as how much Geet trust maan blindly and maan always has reason whenever he gets angry on Geet … he’s so possessive and always tried to protect her when ever he was around … but how come he took big decision of leaving Geet when he went abroad …there was no one to protect her as him…..


Dadima is come to know the depth of their love but still waiting for Geet to reveal it … psycho Sameera is still not understanding the immense love between maan and Geet and she’s still proving maan as her culprit ….is she on drugs to act like this and destroying their love ….please Geet should put an end to this soon because maan is not in his sane mind to bring down Sameera and her acts ….


Eagerly waiting for next update…

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Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 1 - 10

Amazingly written

so Geet is at KM

loved the flashback of past

A nine year life Geet is nervous and clumsy around Maan.

She overheard their mother's convo regarding an alliance between Maan and Geet

Maan adores Geet and it’s nice that the Handas and Khuranas are family friends.

She is thinking he forgot the promise he made to marry her.

Gosh he was about to reveal his feelings but stopped

now he also believes that she does not remember anything

if they would only talk

at least she apologise but the misunderstanding persists

Loved Dadima as she knows that Maan likes Geet and that Geet is perfect for Maan.

Maan misunderstood everything whatever Geet said to him he thought she is not interested in him now and don’t consider him as her husband where as geet is trying to say something else. Sameera’s entry and she is dreaming in her head her love life with Maan. Geet getting jealous of her. Maan is challenging geet to kiss him so that she lose but she is considering him her husband and not even shy to kiss him.

Loved it.

Would love to read more

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Posted: 1 years ago

wow i thought i saw it wrong. So happy that you updated my favorite ff. Welcome back

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Sad but outstanding parts. Loved the way everything is incorporated. Past is so different than present. Maan always cared so much for geet. N she trusted him fully why she is not trusting him now? Geet fainted. And now maan is not here. She is still married to him. That's a relief. Sameera is so stupid. Geet's logic is very good. Sameera couldn't answer geet. Where is maan? Is he ok? Hope that he is not doing anything rash. When will maan and geet talk clearly again? Can't wait for next update. Thank you for double update. I wish to start reading it from the beginning

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21


Thread 1 ka link toh mil sakti honga na

Hi Priya, I have moved the previous parts to blog, that's why I was reposting. I asked the mod to unlock but they are delaying so I guess I will have to open a new thread instead. I will post the links there.
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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu27

Welcome back. Thank you for the tag and double update 🤩

Thank you very much. 😊

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: yakub

wow i thought i saw it wrong. So happy that you updated my favorite ff. Welcome back

Glad to see you here. Thanks a lot for your amazing comment. It means a lot. Ecstatic to know that MP is your favorite story. ❤️
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