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Chapter 68 : Circle


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Part 2

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"Correction. Are not were. I am still married to him." Generating an unwanted flickering inside Sameera's dark eyes.

"Is this something to be proud of? Why did you play all these games with me??

Agar yehi sab karna tha toh mujhe mar jane diya hota?"


“You don’t love him even a bit. Do you Sameera?” With a hard face, Geet asked instead.


“Mujhe pata hi tha.. Abhi tum uss aadmi ka hi sath dogi jisne tumhare sath itna bada dhoka kiya. Areh main toh samajh rahi thi tum dono ka platonic rishta hain. But aab jo sacchai samne aayi hain.. Tumhare hote huwe woh insaan mere paas aata raha aur tum mujhse puch rahi ho pyaar mohabbat ki fizool baatein? Cheater ghatiya tareen aadmi se kaisa pyaar?..

Maan ko toh uska maza mill gaya aur aab hum aurte wapas mein aisi neech haiwan ke liye lad rahe hain... Jis buzdil(coward) mein itna bhi dum nahin hain ke aapne bacche ko aapna sakey... Koi pyaar nahin hain mujhe.. ” Shaking in anger Sameera suddenly wailed in the highest pitch!


The mask of Sameera's fake calmness was shed off instantaneously as Geet repaid with a similar pitch, “Baasss.. bohot jhel liya maine tumhari ye gandagi..

Aab ek shabd nahin Maan ke khilaf…

What proof do you have? Haan?

Srif chilla ke galiya dene se kuch sabit nahin kar paogi samjhi tum. Main bhi chilla sakti hoon..” Those hazel eyes churned with lava matching the high decibel of her voice.


Everything is in shambles. This is not how she is supposed to oppose Sameera but... Hearing such despicable words about him, the wiring inside her brain got into mayhem. Maybe she wasn't too patient when its about his dignity afterall!


“Proof? Doctors didn’t tell you loud enough?” Seeing Geet's red face filled with fury, Sameera passed a mocking smile wrapped in sarcasm, “You know. It’s incredible that tum ek aurat hokar..”


“If I can't deny that you are pregnant then you too can't deny that he was intoxicated…

Kyun ki chahe woh hosh mein ho ya behoshi mein, in sab mein bhi woh srif mujhse hi pyaar karte hain...Srif mujhse!!”


“So You are agreeing he did these? Doesn’t matter if it was a sober act or not! He cheated on you! Do you realize that girl? Agar tumse itna pyaar karta toh 5 saal kaha tha Maan? He wanted to run away from this marriage. We both know it sweetie.” Sameera laughed again.


Soon to be wiped out by Geet's next words, “You didn’t hear me Sameera! I said I don’t care if he had sex with you in an intoxicated state!

You want me to leave him for this but you don't have any proof.

Aisa toh hain nahin ke he was emotionally invested in full senses. That is a whole different case even without a single touch.!"


“Are you hearing yourself right now Geet?? You are saying you are completely ok if he commits adultery!!" She was visibly disgusted.


"In complete senses did Maan ever try to come close to you?" Geet asked.


"I can’t believe how much Maan must have brainwashed you! Trust me there are other boys don’t lower yourself so much!" Sameera dodged.


"Let me ask again. In complete senses, did he ever try to get intimate with you?"


"I really can’t understand you! Is it because you don’t want to lose this battle to me?”


"Dekha tum mere ek simple se sawal ka jawab nahin de paa rahi ho..."


“Because that's irrelevant. He took advantage of me while we were drunk, this is the only answer you will get from me Geet."


"Aur main ye kaise maanlu ke tumne unka fayda nahin uthaya?

Khair Maine kaha na tumhari baas ki baat nahin hain ye sab samajhna!

Mere baas ekbaar...Srif ekbar kehne pe Maanne mujhse shaadi kar li..

Aur.. Shaadi ke baad srif aur srif mere liye unhone khud ko mujhse dur rakha!! Yehi wajah thi un 5 salo ki judai ke peeche.” Blinded with anger, Geet was spitting fire from her vocal cords, “Agar woh chahte toh mujhe aapna bana saktey thhey...Sari haadein todh saktey thhey...Aur main bhi unhe nahin rokti…Bilkul bhi nahin rokti!” Emphasized the last words to etch a burn on Sameera's shame-deprived face.


“Lekin unhone kabhi aisa kuch nahin kiya… Meri khushiya, lakshy, padhai ko sabse upar rakha hain hamesha…He has always been like a shield in my life..

Iss zamane mein jaha logo ko shaadi tak ki zaroorat nahin hoti wahan woh aapni hi biwi se door rahe, takey mera dhayan bhatke na!!

Uss insaan pe jhuta ilzaam laga rahi ho tum!"


"Quit it Geet. Aur kitna safai dogi?" She rolled her eyes, "And I am not interested in how he treats you, samjhi.." Jealousy was evident!


“Safai nahin sacchai hain ye." Hissing forthwith, Geet articulated, "Tum toh khud Maan ki classmate reh chuki ho..Kabhi bhi dekha unko galat harkatein karte huwe???

Har mauke pe unhone mujhe srif beinteha mohabbat di hain.

Sharafat ki naqab toh har koi pehen sakta hain...Lekin nazdikhi mein aasli sharafat maloom chalti hain…

Aur mujhe mere Maan ki sacchai pe yakeen hain!!! Tum jaisa bol rahi ho hum dono ko maloom hain uska ulta hain woh..

That’s why I don’t really care what you say!” This time Sameera couldn't discern anything underneath Geet's nonchalance.


“Oh, dear lord! Love is truly blind. Tum toh ho hi bewakoof...Jo aapne pati ki bewafai ke saboot pe khud safai pesh karte nahin thak rahi…Ironical.. Ever thought, why he is not sleeping with you despite being married to you for so long? You are not a minor anymore!”


“Unbelievable! Itni negative kisi ki thought process kaise ho sakti hain? Ek pure intention ko bhi tumhe zabardasti ganda hi prove karna hain!” Geet was baffled at the capacity of Sameera's ignorance.


Stupidity is indeed limitless!


“It's clear like day to me why he isn’t leaving you..Must be his long-term plan...Abhi tak tumse woh mila nahin naa usey jo chahiye...Once he sleeps with you woh tumhe puchega bhi nahin Geet!! Just like Gia!"


"Hmm.. Right..! Kyun ki duniya mein baas wahi ek hi cheez toh hain?!?!" Gibing aloud a derisive smile cropped up on Geet's lips.


"Waise bhi tumse shaadi karne ke baad Handa group of industries, sabkuch ka malikana bhi toh chahiye hoga na usko...” Sameera didn't stay behind in sneering, "He is a sharp businessman after all!"

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Double update today with 4200+ words

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Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Double update today!

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Prev Chapter 66 || Next Chapter 68

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Will update next part in two days


thanks for updating!

shall read and comment later

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Thanks a lot for the comments. Lots of love to you all who have been with this FF since last 6 years despite me being extremely irregular here.

At times due to time shortage, it's difficult for me to reply every post but I always read each of the feedback/comments.
Really appreciate how you all have kept this forum alive even after 13 years. 🤗



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Due to inadequate response last few parts of this story will be on blog hence do like and comment to gain pw.

Thanks a lot for reading. Have a nice day! ❤️

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

One of my favourite stories

wow that's a big complement, thanks a lot

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hope you continue this lovely story

Will end this soon!
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Originally posted by: Pranb

When Geet doesn’t trust maan and wanted to marry Sameera what else maan has to do …. What ever he did is right from his pov and now let’s see how Geet going to manage him.


Really missed this story but wanted to read from first ….


New I’d : PranB

Hi, hopefully the recent chapters will answer your queries 😊
Thanks a lot for reading and your generous comment.


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Originally posted by: maaneetcraze

Want to read this again. Need pw

Hi dm me I will send you the pw.😊

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Provide thread 1 link


Want to read from.starting

Hello Priya, hope you are well. I opened a repost thread but unfortunately, it got closed.😭 Will try to reopen it.
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Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Hi dm me I will send you the pw.😊

Hello Priya, hope you are well. I opened a repost thread but unfortunately, it got closed.😭 Will try to reopen it.


Thread 1 ka link toh mil sakti honga na

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Thanks for all those chapters. It’s been a while since I read this story but i’m so glad that Geet does still support Maan. Hope Maan didn’t do anything, i’m Sure he wouldn’t, not even when intoxicated. He is crazy about his Geet. Sameera is a vey sly one. I hope Geet will prove Maan’s innocence.

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Thanks for double update


Part 67 (past story)


Maan making tailor life hell with his anger n geet touchering maan with her Innocent questions 😄


Beautifully written ... Maan angred about geet's backless dress n geet comparing him with other friends ... Hahaha maan to gussa hona hi tha ...


Geet loves to irritate maan ... I love that part too 😉😄


Possessive maan stoping geet but her tears brings maans anger down ... Ohhh how sweet geet didn't went to wedding after maans permission too... As she can't to without maan ... Lovely

Geet's trust on maan n her each n every word about maaneet bonding ... Heart touchy ❤️ awesomely written


Maan amazed with geets trust on him... Maan reveled real reason for his anger n geet simply ask why he didn't said it before... She is right .... but maan ko share nahi karna hota fir bhi geet uspe yakin karti hai hamesha 💓


😄😄😄 Pahad se khudungi per aapko saath lekar 😄😄😄 geet is awesome 👏👏👏


Golden days ... Past was so lovely for maaneet ... N for us too but in present time 😥 all because of that sico sameera 😠😠😠


Maan is so hurt.... geets behavior confusing/hurting him to the core 😥

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