Spin Off - Loved it. Specially how you narrated maan's emotions, his feelings, his protectiveness for his daughter, his worry for her future, his dislike for aakash that how he always with tanvi, knowing that time will come soon when she will be permanently go away from him after marriage, that feeling of losing her, everything was perfect.
I liked the convo of maan & tanvi and how tanvi exclaimed him about how she was sure about herself and aakash.
All was already decided about them hiding from maan and just waiting for his approval. Even they decided if he denies then how to make him agree. Lol. Even sweets were kept ready.
Finally he accepted their relation and both got married.
In whole story the best part was maan-tanvi's father-daughter bond.
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