MG Autumn OS Contest Entries [Open & Voting Link added page 2] - Page 4

Entry 7

Nice song

Superb OS... excellently written

so Maan is the new owner of KE

of cos he made a grand entry

everyone is indeed enamored by Maan

Geet broke Maan's heart

and this made Maan stronger

Geet was clearly upset with Dev

glad she put Dev in his place

however Maan was hurt with what happened

she was correct that Dev cannot challenge Maan

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

seems like Geet loves Maan

Furious how Maan's uncle and family treated Maan

well Maan loves Geet immensely and decided to give everything to her

but he heard what Geet said that she was just pretending

Maan's anger was justified

hmm Maan fell for Geet when he saw her

she was the only one that cared for him

as expected Maan was the real owner of KC

now Maan made changes in KC and terminated the alliance with Handa Textiles

Gosh Maan is destroying Geet's dad's business

Maan's behavior towards Geet was justified

she now has to convince him to marry her

liked that she is willing to do so

she certainly loved Maan since childhood

whatever she did was for him

finally her parents supported her

loved that she proposed to Maan

at last they are together

Entry 8

Splendid song

Terrific OS.... impressively written

so Geet and Maan met a wedding

their was instant attraction

liked that he helped Geet

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she feels something for Maan

however she is in a relationship

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

of cos he was disappointed that she has a bf

he was correct that sometimes it just takes a glance

great that he was direct with Geet regarding his feelings

but she was unable to tell him that he feels the same way

they met again

Maan was clearly not subtle

as expected he was relieved that she was single

not surprised that he asked her if she wants him

glad that she did....

Wow.. the entries are already up. I just found out that the thread it up.

Entry 9

Awesome song

Splendid OS... outstandingly written

so Maan and Geet are no a long distance relationship

its taking a strain

liked how they met

he was the elusive Khurana

sparks did fly .....

meeting up at parties, then dating and they eventually fell in love

great that they parents had no issues

pleased that Geet supported Maan

sad that he has no time for Geet as he is busy

of cos Geet was upset

she misses Maan...

she feels she is losing him

at least Maan called and then spoke

glad that she was direct with Maan

sad that he did not understand her

whilst he is busy establishing his business in London

she is lonely

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

finally she ended everything with Maan

Maan was clearly shattered

this was the wake up call that he needed

he now understood what he did and what he lost

loved that he was determined to make things right

he is now back

he did take her for granted

her hesitation was justified

pleased that he assured Geet

he proposed to Geet and she accepted

Thanks to all the amazing writers for the magnificent OS!

enjoyed reading all the OS

Promises beyond time

Its heart wrenching os

Maan is dead

Its so painful to see geet so much broken

And crying for him

Maansi is gift from maan to her

Its nice but maan ki kmi koi Puri nhi kr sakta

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thanks to all the amazing writers for the magnificent OS!

enjoyed reading all the OS

Please remember to cast your vote on the voting thread ☺️

Woh Humsafar Tha All the stories are too good n most of them made me cry.. But this one in particular I liked as it beautifully portrayed the pain of a wife and dilemma of a husband n a son. Also it has a happy ending :😊

Originally posted by: Queen0fDarkness

Please remember to cast your vote on the voting thread ☺️

Thanks for the reminder.... will do so

however its difficult to make a choice

all the OS were different and amazing

everyone is a winner!!

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thanks for the reminder.... will do so

however its difficult to make a choice

all the OS were different and amazing

everyone is a winner!!

Totally understand - the One Shots were quite good. But I still need 3 on the voting thread 😂 No rush, take your time ☺️