Epi B - Scene 5 - tanvi was so intelligent that she concluded that maan could not be her father. But best pat was how maan explained her and convinced her that he was his boyfriend more than a father. She was so innocent that she believed everything maan told. You narrated maan's insecurity and losing tanvi beautifully. He was right in worrying about that, what if tanvi refuses to accept him as his father once she comes to know about her real father. But geet as usual supported him.
Scene 6 - tanvi knowing her truth was a beautiful and touchy scene. Liked how you took the letter reading part from GHSP. It took whole scene on a diff level, a beautiful bond bet father & daughter. 👏👏👏 Hats off to you. Good that maan told her everything in a way of gift and she too understood him & her mother very well. She gave him his deserved place in her life, of a father's. This was the perfect age to reveal her everything.
Happy that maan always think about his family. He took bigger house for all of them, including geet's parents too.
Lol...maan calling manan as a villain of his two love stories. That was funny.
Last scene - karma gives you back in full. This is what happened to dev. He lost the very imp part of his life, losing a right to give birth to someone. And he got his wife same like him only. Both were perfect for each other.
He came to know what he missed when he saw geet's happy & complete family on stage and all were praising them. Agar tanvi dev ke pass rehti to vo bhi ek spoilt brat he banati.
I liked how tanvi thanked him for leaving her & geet so that she got best father in maan. That was tight slap on his face. How confident she was to face him and glad that she did not have any grudges against him.
The last scene of maan & geet was perfect. How they were so compatible with each other and how they always supported to each other.
It is one of the best story on Yaariyaan'. Thnx for sharing with us.
Great work done by Laks & Priya for headers and morphed pics of tanvi, maan, geet & manan. I loved the collage maan gifted tanvi on her 18th birthday. Only missing was a alone pic of new born tanvi without maan. but its alright. Still it is great job.
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