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hi mitu .just commenting from start .as i'm free now so i can comment on each part.bt u hv removed index .plz pm me index so that i can read n comment o them.


for prologue n cs.

prologue is really awesum.nd all cs r really nice .msk hv a very big family.
being a princess n owner of billions geet is suffering alot .first time she is facing all these problems .its really hard for her to face all this as she never faced these in her life.
bt now she had to face nd had to survive for herself .after loosing her parents n brother she still hv to survive nd fulfill his father n brothers dream .nd had to handle her business bt first she had to find out a safe place for her where she can start a fresh nd start a new phase of her life.

plxz dr pm me index so that i can read further nd comment .

otberside maan is really a tuff guy who loves his family alot .bt he as much he loves his family bt also that strict for them.his verdict his last decision for all.
love tiya n maan bonding tiya is such a cutiepie.nd priya n maan shares a lovely bond together.

maan is ray of hope for geet .with his help she will learn many things which help her to acheive her business empire n handle it confidently.

plz dear pm soon index .waiting for it.

part 1

really awesum.beautifully penned down.

poor geet after lots of struggle finally reached to her destination.nd finding that she came to right place she took a sigh of relief.ruhinder uncle make her comfortable nd gave her a fatherly hug.which she really needed at that time .entering in house she feel the warmth of home to feel safe.now she can took some relief.

otherside in km there is lots of hustle bustle.
must say maan take care of all of his responsibility very well.he maintain business n family very efficiently.however he is strict bt really love his family.
love tiya n maan bonding.tiya is so naughty n cute too.her cute antics make anyone love her.bt she is smart too .very well know how to manipulate everyone nd his maan bro too to fulfill her wish.nd maan very well know her angel cum devil sis n her antics of buttering up bt happily fulfill her wishes.
adi is really scared of maan nd he said right that working with maan is like working under a dragon.
now hunt for maan's secretary going on.

pinky is so nice n cute.her cute antics make geet chuckle after a week.how quickly she mingle with geet.nd geet find a sweet sister cum frnd in her.
pinky shocked to know about geet real identity.
geet decide to do a job .nd she is right she had to do this not only for her own business empire bt for those family which r suffering becoz of her greedy relatives.nd pinky n ruhinder proud on her for this.
pinky eagerly ready to help geet .
she make her ready for dd's secretary which is really tuff.bt she is right geet have to start from somewhere nd working with maan give geet bst experince n knowledge to handle her own business empire.
bt precap :maan rejects geet.

part 2.

geet all ready for her new phase of life.bring a princess she never thought to face this in her to struggle for mere job bt destiny overpowers what we thought.
now she envy from her own beauty which gaining lusty gaze on her .which is scaring her alot bt she determined not to run from this bt face all problems .take this as a challenge nd win over it.her bhai sa words encouraging her not to fear bt being brave nd fight in any circumstances.
in office all gazing her lustfully which making her more uncomfortable .bt pinky trying to light her mood nd don't let divert her focus from interview.

all r alert with siren about dd 's arrival.
sasha trying not to let any girl came near mk.bt maan make her shut nd give final verdict to find out a suitable girl for his secretry post.

pinky butter up adi to help geet to give a chance for interview .nd finally adi agreed .
bt sasha get inseure to geet's beauty nd clearly reject her .adi try to protest her bt can't help her.
nd geet half heartdly turned to go bck bt bumped into maan.

first maan want to burst on her bt get amused to see her watching the blue prints keenly as she never thought any girl had any interst in this.
letsee what happen nxt.

part 3

superb update.
geet point out mistake in the design nd shocked maan.first she got scared a little bit bt cant kept quite to see thousands of life on stake.

bt maan saw talent in her nd directly short list her.adi is happy bt shasha got furious .nd geet had mix feeling happy n sad at same time.first meeting with boss n hv panga with him in her language.
pinky n adi happy for her nd encourage her for nxt round.

geet is so scared with maan bt pinky console her nd make comfortable with dadaji's presence .as he is humble n polite nd hence all r safe from dd
geet stepped in cabin for interview nd dadaji already start dreaming her as her grand dil .bt his khadus grand son can let him see day dreaming .

gert's brother words ringing in her ears nd motivate her .maan ques n geet .ans really heat up interview in an arguement .bt geet confidently ans of all his ques straight forward nd true n strict .
dadaji impressed by her bt maan is really annoyed with her few answers bt maan clear her for nxt round to check her potential n talent .

pinky is more happy than geet.

finally she got time to eat something bt again she bumped into him nd he blasted on her.

poor geet already scared from him nd now this .tears filled her eyes nd she left what she is eating nd left hungry.poor soul felt insulted .how much she is suffering bt alas.

again ready for nxt round

part 4

simply awesum.geet just rock it.
firstly she totally sad with sudden event in her n maan's words also her bt she tried to focus on her goal.
bt pinky n adi r there to motivate her .they really helped n encourage her.geet entered in room for 2nd round.even the old man shock to see her .

mk entry n all r in attention mode .bt he had his own style n aura .
he addressed all the candidates n give their task.

less words ,work more.
well said

all emerged in their given task .
omgg...geet is really pure n kind hearted.
knowing that how important this job to her bt still she left her work in middle to get treat the old man wound.while the other 2 busy in their task shamelessly.
geet first got treat the petson nd when she assured that he is fine only then she left his side to resume her work.
in 13 min she tried her level best.
mk with jury come to check their work.
must say geet is really intelligent n very efficient inspite of all she find out all the faults n correct more than other two .
all jury members suprised n happy to see her work nd proud on her also for helping the man leaving her work inbetween.
bt maan didn't say anything bt really saw her talent.
nd give her time to complete the design nd shocked everyone .
now letsee how geet complete it n prove herself.

part 5

finally geet clear for round 3.
mk is too smart .he very well know to find the real talent of a person.
both candidates gives their best .nd now the final task.
both give their opinions on the land for construction.bt maan don't give any hint to them whether he liked their ans or not.
geel is really to talented.nd don't take decisions in haste.
her ans shows that she is not only inteeligent bt had humanity too n never take any decision which stake on thousands lives.
maan is really a workaholic person n daadi really don't like his ignorance towards his health for work.
pooja n maan really share a gud bond.
n tia topped in school.
after lots of discussion maan finally give job to geet.
pinky is so happy for geet.
n geet is really happy that she got a job n take a step ahead towards her empire.
now geet working in lion's den.
exciting to see how she cop with maan n his anger too.

part 6

awesum update.finally geet joining her job.excited n nervous both.
pinky help her with her dress .
ruhinder made her ate sweet yoghurt for gud luck n encorage her to do her best n after that both left for their office.
pinky boost up her confindence n left her near maan cabin.
geet registered her entry n wait for maan.
pinky got tensed to know that maan already arrived n rush to tell geet about his arrival.
geet panicked bt cover up n enter in maan's cabin.
while maan is totally unawre about geet's arrival n furious to see her careless behaviour that on first day .nd without knowing decide to fired her from job
geet's first day n she got scolding from his dd boss without any fault.maan don't give her chance to explain n handover termination letter to her.
bt geet cleared his doubt on not taking her job seriously n told that she is on time n waiting for him outside the cabin.
first maan thought she is giving excuses bt his conception changed by checking her entry in entry register..
nd without any sorry told her to torn the letter n to do her as already wasted enough time.huh..
maan handover her project file to draw rough designs n left the cabin .
geet starts her work bt not before cursing her dusht danv boss under breath.
geet like perfection like maan .as she also royal blood n her own business empire to handle so business run in her blood.
she totally emerged into her work .
nd suddenly yash's entry in maan 's cabin.first geet surprised to see him in maan's cabin suddenly bt very politely asked to help him if any.
yash hold his aura n hd strong personality.his anger is just like maan bt when in gud mood he really like a frndly n polite person.
geet shocked to know that he is maan's father.
nd got scolding from yash .

part 7

poor geet first day of her job .nd without any fault she getting scold unneccessirly.first maan n now yash .both father n son r same .in anger they don't see anything nor listen anything .geet really felt bad hearing that she is incapable for her job.
strike tension causes to loose his temper nd all frustration poured out on geet .
thankully maan came otherwise yash defintely fired from job.
maan calm down him .n make him trust on him .he will sought out everything .nd also aware about geet that its only first of her job nd she unknowingly took fair sheets for rough designs .nd she really capable n potential for the job.
finally yash calm down..
nd suddenly mild attack really scared maan like hell
bt geet n maan together tc of him.
geet really surprised seeing this side of maan which totally different from his sadu side.who get worried for his parents.
she remember his father n her memories n tears formed in her ryes.
as maan left for some work geet tc of yash.when yash relax n stable then he realized what he had done in anger .he unnecessiecly scold geet nd she is really beautiful n innocent girl.
he asked for sorry n gave her choclates to her.
maan came n strictly warned him not came office n panic .
geet got fb of her chilhood memories with his father n her sweet memories.
she is missing terribly .