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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavitha_r

Chapter 3 Part 1

Riddhima, Vikram, & Hansa's bonding is cute. I loved Vikram motivating Riddhima to go to college & complete her education. Vikram telling Riddhima as Ridz seems romantic. Tanya did the right thing in realizing that Siddharth does not love her.

Thank you so much 😊. Forcing someone to love would make things complicated.


Originally posted by: kavitha_r


Chapter 3 Part 2

Siddharth picking up Ranya on his bike was cute.

Siddharth finally realized his love for Tanya.

I loved the gathering of Vikram, Riddhima, Raghu, Siddharth, Dhanak, & others.

While I was reading the passage that Sid proposing to Tanya, I was glad that he opened up his feelings. Tanya's engagement with Rehaan was shocking.

Vikram & Riddhima's pani puri scenes are romantic.


Thankyou so much. Glad you loved the party scenes.

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Dhanak should make him make his own tea if there is no appreciation.

Just when Sid got the courage and confessed, a fiancee showed up.

Thanks a lot for your views. True, It is the right punishment for Raghu.

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CHAPTER 4

Next day

Vikram's house,

Vikram and Riddhima reached their house after enjoying a memorable night party. Hansa welcomed them and tell Hansa whatever happened yesterday at the party and how they enjoyed there (excluding Sid's proposal). Hansa felt happy hearing all that and blessed them that no one cast a bad eye on both of them. Riddhima and Vikram smiled.

Hansa - "Vikram and Riddhima, I bought few wires from the shops to make wire bags. I know my friend who sells handmade products."

Riddhima - "That is nice, Dadi. Your wire bags are really beautiful."

Vikram - "Okay... It is really impressive. But, what is meant by wire bags? I am hearing it for the first time."

Hansa - "Wire bags are made through a kind of wires. (She shows the wire to him) Through this wire, we should make knots and make handbags of any size. These bags are stronger than cloth bags and can be used for a long period of time."

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Vikram nods with "Ohhh!"

Riddhima - "Dadi, teach him how to make a knot."

Hansa gave him wire and taught how to make a knot. Vikram could not make that knot even after trying for a number of times.

Vikram - "Oh my god! These knot making and all are so difficult. How could you both do such things? So great."

Riddhima and Hansa laughed.

Riddhima - "It depends on the concentration, Vicky..."


Hansa - "Practice makes you perfect, Vicky."

Vikram nodded and looked at how Hansa made knots so fast. After some time,

Vikram - "Riddhima, come on. You complete your project works now."

Riddhima nodded and took her white cane and followed Vikram to his room.

Riddhima - "Vicky, I really feel and for your brother Siddarth. He is really a sweet guy."

Vikram - "Yes, Riddhima. He was devastated by all these things."

Riddhima - "I wish if Siddarth could find someone else who could love him immensely."

Vikram - "I wish the same. I think he took the decision out of haste after seeing her for a long time. I am speaking with him soon he'll recover. Sanjana is also there."

Riddhima - "Yes, Vikram. A decision taken out of haste and keeping things as a result made the things mess. I wonder what will happen to Tanya and Siddarth's friendship."

Vikram - "Tanya told us that she would speak to Siddarth soon. So nothing would happen."

Riddhima nodded positively.

Vikram - "But, you didn't tell me anything, Ridz."

Vikram said cockily.

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Riddhima - "What?"

Vikram - "How was your day yesterday night?"

Riddhima - "Ah yeah... Vicky I enjoyed yesterday, so much. All of them are so sweet, just like you... Dhanak is a cutie pie... Raghu's presence makes the surroundings fun... Tanya is lovely and Rehaan is so friendly... I could see more of Sanjana yesterday... Siddarth is cool and reserved... And the way you sang took me to the memory lane."

Vikram is looking at Riddhima's gestures when she describes things and he smiled. (Song plays till the scene end)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EL_xzTinoPk

Riddhima - "You know Vikram, yesterday I felt like a normal girl who could dance and enjoy whenever she want.

Vikram - "You are a normal girl, Riddhu."

Riddhima - "Yeah... No, I am not normal... I don't have eyes and I have to depend on my white cane..."

Vikram looks at her deeply and says, "Throw that cane there and hold my hands.... Forever."

Riddhima - "Vikram..."

Vikram - "Yeah Riddhima.... I love you."

Riddhima didn't speak anything.

Vikram - "Ridz..."

Riddhima - "Can I hug you Vikram?"

Vikram - "Yeah."

Riddhima backed. Vikram extended his arms.

Riddhima runs to him and hugged Vicky tightly and cries

Riddhima runs to him and hugged Vicky tightly and cries.

She says, "I love you, Vikram. I want you to be with me forever. I don't know whether you got the best, but I got the best human as my soulmate."

Vikram - "You're not my better half, but my best half, Riddhima. Because you don't judge anyone by looks, you judge people by their heart. You added beautiful colors in my life."

Vikram kissed her forehead and cupped her face and joined his head with her head. He slowly released the hug and wiped the tears.

Vikram - "It's okay. Now you start preparing for your exams."

Riddhima nodded.

*****

Tanya's house,

Tanya rings for Siddarth for the tenth time, but Siddarth didn't attend the call even for a time. Tanya gave up her hopes on trying, but decided to try for one last time.

She dialed Sid's number and at the last ring, Siddarth attended the call.

Siddarth - "Tanya..."

Tanya - "How are you, Siddarth?"

Siddarth trembles, "I am fine, Tanya."

Tanya - "Why are you shivering and why is your voice trembling? Are you speaking to any ghost or supernatural creature?"

Siddarth looks at his hands shivering and wonders...

Siddarth - "No, Tanya... Actually, I am extremely sorry for what I did yesterday without knowing anything. I did that out of haste like an emotional fool. Till yesterday evening I didn't have any feelings like that... But seeing you after a long time made me think I did wrong..."

Tanya - "It's okay, Siddarth. No need for any explanations and I know you well. After all, we are friends.... Did you forget that?"

Siddarth - "Yeah..."

Tanya - "Yes...? You forgot that."

Siddarth - "No, I meant that you know me well."

Tanya - "Are you not crying in your room?"

Siddarth - "I cried yesterday itself."

Tanya - "Acha!"

Siddarth - "Don't think about my words, Tanya. You have chosen the best man for you. You're lucky to get a friendly guy like Rehaan and the vice versa."

Tanya - "I know that, Sid. But we should be in contacts unlike the previous incident. Deal?"

Siddarth - "Sure, Tanya. We will be in contact. Bye."

Tanya cuts the call with a relief and smile of securing their friendship with Siddarth. Rehaan hugged Tanya from behind and rubbed his face with her one.

Rehaan - "Looks like my baby is happy."

Tanya - "Baby? Am I your daughter?"

Rehaan - "If you try to be smart..."

Saying this, Rehaan kissed lips.

Tanya - "Rehaan..."

Before she could complete, he gives another kiss.

Tanya - "The door is open, Rehaan."

Rehaan - "I closed the door, sweetheart. So don't worry."

Rehaan tickled her hip. Tanya punched his stomach with her ankle lightly. Rehaan backed out rubbing his waist.

Rehaan - "Ouch! It's paining.."

Tanya laughed at him.

Rehaan - "Okay, what did Siddarth say?"

Tanya - "He apologized me and I am happy that he told me to remain as friends. Last time, we lost contact, but now it is fine. I hope everything goes well."

Rehaan - "Sure, sweetheart

Rehaan - "Sure, sweetheart. Everything will go well."

Tanya hugged Rehaan and says, "He told me that I am lucky to get you. It's very true. I am so lucky, Rehaan. That's why I got someone who accept me the way I am. You accepted me despite knowing my breakup and whatever happened yesterday."

Rehaan - "A relationship will remain blissful only when two of them takes effort. See, I am a Model and I have to attend a lot of parties and events. I have to work with females as well, but you trust me completely even if some rumor arises. These things are bigger than what I did for you."

Tanya - "Now only you said, the relationship is based on two people's efforts. So one's efforts never become smaller or bigger than other one."

Rehaan (winks) - "Love you, sweetheart."

Tanya blushed

Tanya blushed.

*****

Two weeks later,

Sanjana's house,

Night 8 PM,

Sanjana brought Siddarth to her house and introduced him to Priya and Ram. Ram and Priya know him that he is Vikram's brother, but meeting him for the first time since he didn't attend Sanjana's wedding stating work reasons. Sanjana brings bag also which she hides behind herself and takes to the kitchen with a sheepish smile. Priya and Ram couldn't understand Sanjana's behavior. While Siddarth makes them both engaged in a conversation.

This one week has changed Siddarth a lot and also the deepened the rapport of Siddarth and Sanjana. They have been talking through each other till late night. Sanjana has become Siddarth's 3 am friend.

After some time, Siddarth also entered the kitchen. Sanjana sighed.

Sanjana - "Thank god

Sanjana - "Thank god... You somehow managed my parents. Let us start our mission."

Siddarth - "You don't worry. They never get doubts on us and they also won't sleep. I took uncle's help so that he won't let aunty sleep."

Sanjana and Siddarth are going to prepare a cake for Priya's birthday, so that they could cut the cake today's night 12 AM. Sanjana ordered the cake already, but the cake got damaged due to carelessness of the shopkeeper. Siddarth saw Sanjana when she is arguing with the shopkeeper and then he cooled her and gave the idea of making cake on their own. Siddarth knows how to bake cakes so Sanjana took him to her house.

Siddarth - "Take the purpose flour... 3 cups..."

Sanjana - "Uff oh! I forgot to take that...."

Sanjana and Siddarth started to search for Purpose Flour and found at the top shelf of the kitchen. Sanjana couldn't get take that... Sanjana searches for stool...

Siddarth - "Oh why are you searching for stool? I am here na... I'll could take the box."

Sanjana - "It might be heavy, Sid."

Siddarth - "You are underestimating the power of my muscles."

Sanjana derided.

Siddarth managed to take the flour box from the top shelf, since his eyes are on Sanjana's pouts

Siddarth managed to take the flour box from the top shelf, since his eyes are on Sanjana's pouts. So the box falls on him and the flour fell on him completely and as a final touch, the box falls on the head.

Siddarth screams.... Sanjana managed to take the box out of his Siddarth's head and his face is full of floor. Siddarth breathes finally but as soon as he starts breathing, he starts sneezing. Sanjana couldn't stop laughing seeing his makeover.

Siddarth stopped sneezing and looks at her, who is laughing like an idiot

Siddarth stopped sneezing and looks at her, who is laughing like an idiot. Siddarth gets lost how she laughs in a cute and beautiful way and looks at her and smiles seeing her. Sanjana finally stopped laughing and looks at him.

Sanjana - "Are you going to keep smiling or...? OMR! The flour and all got wasted."

Siddarth is embarrassed. Siddarth started wiping the flour from his hair and the flour gets into one of his eyes.

Siddarth - "Ouch!"

Sanjana - "What happened?"

Siddarth - "Flour get into my eyes... Ouch!"

Sanjana - "Wait, I see..."

Sanjana looks at his eyes and asked to close his eyes.

Siddarth - "What are you going to do if I close my eyes?"

Siddarth laughed while Sanjana says, "Then okay. You deal with it."

Siddarth - "No no....please help me."

Siddarth pleaded like a child. Sanjana laughed.

Siddarth closed his eyes and Sanjana blows the dust from his eyes. She made him sit on the floor and cleaned some dust from his hair. Then, she opens his eyes and blows the dust from there. Sanjana smiles seeing him sitting like a cute child.

She pulled his cheeks while Siddarth screamed, "Ahhh!"

She pulled his cheeks while Siddarth screamed, "Ahhh!"

Sanjana laughs at him. Sidaarth rubbed his cheek.

Sanjana - "Enough enough... Now you go and take a shower."

Siddarth - "I don't have a dress..."

Sanjana thinks, "Umm... I have a legend's dress for you. Come on."

She takes him to her bathroom and gave a jeans and black shirt to him. She asked him to take shower fast. Soon Siddarth took his shower and comes back.

Sanjana - "I have sieved the floor and some floor remained in the box. So, exactly we have three cups of purpose flour. Now let us start our work."

Siddarth says the requirements and Sanjana mixed all that. Siddarth mixed the cake mixture with a whisk and keep the mixture in the oven. Then they take out the cake and Siddarth decorated the cake with creams and cherry toppings.

Finally the cake got ready.

Sanjana hugged Siddarth, "Siddarth, thank you so much. If you're not here, I don't know how would I have made this..."

Siddarth laughed at her, "Now you say, why is this shirt ultra-special? This shirt looks normal

Siddarth laughed at her, "Now you say, why is this shirt ultra-special? This shirt looks normal."

Sanjana - "Do you know whose dress is this?"

Siddarth nodded in negative.

Sanjana - "This is Vicky's dress. He came here for one day and he did a stupid ghost prank on me. I was scared to the hell. So, I chased him and pushed him into the mud in my garden and even rolled him in the mud. He cannot clean it in water also. So he took a bath here for 1 hour (giggles) and left his dresses here unknowingly. It happened a month before."

Siddarth is surprised hearing that.

Sanjana - "Why are you surprised? These things are nothing. I break 10 eggs on Vicky's head once. Sometimes I bully him. Except pouting at me, he could do nothing."

Sanjana says with pride

Sanjana says with pride. Siddarth laughs. Seeing it, Sanjana also laughed.

Sanjana - "He got showered with mud and you got showered with flour... No wonder you are his brother. Okay, you don't reveal this to him. Otherwise, he will kill me."

Siddarth smiles.

Sanjana - "Oh, Its time... Let us make arrangements..."

When Sanjana moves, she slipped due to flour on the floor. Siddarth holds her and they both shared an eye-lock (Kasam Tune plays) Sanjana and Siddarth are lost in their eye-lock for some moments.

After half-an-hour,

Ram blind-folded Priya and took him to the living room where Siddarth, Ram and Sanjana have decorated with balloons and some Happy birthday posters. Ram unfolded the black cloth. Priya smiles seeing the cake and the decorations and hugged Sanjana and Ram.

Ram - "You must be knowing what are we doing, right."

Priya - "Of course, what is there to doubt? But what I wonder is, what is Siddarth and Sanjana doing these much time in kitchen.."

Siddarth - "We are preparing cake for you

Siddarth - "We are preparing cake for you. Tadaa..."

Sanjana opens the lid and Priya was amazed seeing the beautiful cake made by them.

Priya - "Amazing, Sanjana."

Sanjana - "Siddarth guided me and in fact he made this for you."

Priya caressed Siddarth's face with a smile. Siddarth smiles. Priya cuts the cake and fed Ram, Sanjana and Siddarth.

Priya - "You know Siddarth, tomorrow Ram will prepare my favorite food for me... Aloo paratha..."

Siddarth - "Wow, Uncle is so sweet..."

Sanjana - "Tell the remaining, mom."

Priya - "He made this for me on the first day of marriage. I wonder if I could get such a cooking husband. Then only, I came to know he knows to cook only aloo-paratha.... It has been 28 years but he knows only that. If I get mood-off, he will prepare that for me. If Sanjana got mood-off, he will prepare that for me..."

Sanjana and Siddarth laugh. Priya also laughs.

Ram - "Ohho! I have celebrated Priya's birthday for 27 years and she is also saying this dialogue as a ritual. Now my daughter also joined."

Priya and Sanjana shares hi-fi

Priya and Sanjana shares hi-fi.

Sanjana - "But Dad cooks aloo-paratha better and best than anyone in the world. Mom used to say this each and every time when I cook aloo-paratha."

Priya - "Sanjana, do you know whose birthday today is?"

Everyone laughed.

*****

Next day,

Siddarth calls Vikram through the phone.

Siddarth - "Bhai, there is an important news

Siddarth - "Bhai, there is an important news. One of my clients is a doctor in Jyoti Hospital. He told me that a German doctor Mr. George has paid a visit here. He is one of the renowned eye specialists in the world. Can you consult him regarding Riddhima?"

Vikram - "Thank you so much Siddarth. Loads of love to you, bro. I'll consult him soon. Can you please join with us?"

Siddarth agreed and cuts the call.

Vikram, Riddhima and Siddarth come to Jyoti Hospital and Dr. George conducted few tests on Riddhima. Vikram and Siddarth were called by Dr. George

Dr. George - "Well, there is a good news for you Mr. Raheja. Riddhima could gain her eyesight. She is perfectly eligible. There are organ banks so need to worry about donors."

Vikram gets excited and happy.

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Vikram - " Doctor, when shall we conduct the operation?"

Dr. George - "Within 2 days... Because I have my schedules in Germany after that and it is difficult to keep the operation later."

Vikram - "Sure, doctor. You can do her operation tomorrow. I'll take care of the application."

Dr. George - "Sure."

Vikram - "Doctor, May I know your fees?"

Dr. George - "1.5 lakhs."

Vikram gets sad as he cannot manage to arrange the money soon, but smiled and goes with Siddarth. Riddhima is sitting outside. Vikram knelt down besides her and holds her hand.

Riddhima - "Vikram..."

Vikram - "Tomorrow is your operation, Riddhima. From tomorrow onwards, you can see the colorful world with your new eyes."

Riddhima don't know how to react on this. Riddhima smiled and cried simultaneously.

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Vikram also cried. Siddarth felt emotional on seeing them.

Riddhima - "I am extremely happy, Vikram. It is not because I'm gaining vision, but I am happy that I am going to see your face, who did a lot for my happiness and you made me feel like a normal girl despite my blindness."

Vikram caressed her face.

*****

Night 7 PM,

Vikram returns home after getting rejected in another project. He is sad and gloomy. Hansa called him but his phone beeped.

It is from Mr. George. Mr. George apologized Vikram that the donor's family has refused to donate the donor's eyes and suggested him to look for a donor within the operation time. Vikram was devastated to hear this.

Vikram enters the room and closed the room. He breaks the things from the there and punched his fist on the wall. His fist bleeds and he leaned his head on the wall and cries... "Why... Why...Why...," he screams.

Riddhima knocks the door, calling out his name. Vikram didn't respond. Riddhima keeps knocking the door and Hansa also comes there. As the knocking sound increased, Vikram wiped his tears and keeps the things as it is and opened the door.

Hansa - "Why didn't you open the door and Riddhima has been knocking for 5 minutes? You usually won't lock this room, right?"

Vikram - "Oh, that is nothing. I was bathing so I couldn't hear the noise. You don't worry."

Vikram says with a reluctant smile. Hansa gets little doubtful, but she goes. Vikram enters inside, followed by Riddhima. Riddhima closed the door, surprising Vikram. Riddhima comes near him and touches his face. Vikram removes her hands from his face and goes.

Riddhima - "Did you cry, Vikram?"

Vikram - "What happened to you now? Why are you speaking out of context?"

Riddhima - "Answer my question, Vikram."

Vikram - "No..."

Riddhima - "You are lying, Vikram. Then why should you break things?"

Vikram - "Riddhima, please don't..."

Riddhima holds his face and turns his face towards her face

Riddhima holds his face and turns his face towards her face.

Riddhima - "Why did you cry?"

Vikram releases his face, forcibly and turns.

Riddhima - "Tell me, Vikram. Sorrows are halved when you share with someone."

Vikram - "I don't want my sorrows to affect anyone."

Riddhima - "So you accept that you cried."

Vikram - "Yeah, I cried."

His voice breaks. Riddhima touched his face and could feel the droplets from his eyes increasing. Vikram sits on the bed with a thud.

(Song plays)

(Song plays)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tvFReKj-bkA

Riddhima - "Vicky.."

Vikram - "I failed Riddhima.... I failed in everything... I neither be a good son, nor a good brother to Siddarth... Now I failed as your boyfriend... I am completely useless, Riddhima..."

Vikram cries. Riddhima cupped his face,

Riddhima - "Nothing like that, Vicky

Riddhima - "Nothing like that, Vicky... You are ideal in all ways. What happened to you?"

Vikram - "No Riddhima.... Nothing like you say. In the past two weeks, I attended a lot of auditions, but I was rejected in each and every one. I just have only one music video... But what to do..."

Riddhima - "Vicky, you told me right... Life is not always unfair. You're no supposed to become a singer today but you'll definitely become a singer in future. Don't you remember many talented people got rejected by people at first?"

Vikram (tearfully) - "No, Riddhima. My parents were against my wish to become a singer. They want me to become a businessman like Dad or a lawyer like mom. I stood strong in my decision so they cut their contacts with me. They didn't like me singing in cinemas. Now, I am 28. But I am there on temporary job and couldn't do anything. I cannot give financial support to Siddarth being a elder son. Now by today's night... the donor's family has rejected to donate the donor's eyes to you. I am so unlucky, Riddhima. I cannot do anything...."

Riddhima hugged him tightly and says, "Quiet! Keep Quite, Vikram. Don't speak anything." Riddhima wiped Vikram's tears. Vikram didn't release the hug.

Riddhima - "You didn't support Siddarth financially. But Sanjana and you are the one who called him daily and supported him emotionally when he undergone a heartbreak. You gave him an emotional support. About your parents, they will understand you soon, Vicky. Don't worry about them. Concentrate on your passion. You told me that it is a risk filled field and you accepted it whole-heartedly. Take this as a part of your journey, not the end of the journey."

Riddhima continued...

Riddhima - "Is he the only doctor exists? You may see an another talented doctor who can do my treatment. Also, I got used to this condition itself, Vicky. Also, you are there for me to hold my hands."

Vikram - "No, Riddhima. That is different. You must get eyesight."

Riddhima - "I understand Vicky. But you should not lose hopes on such small things. You gave hope to me, but now it is not fair if you lose hope."

Vikram - "Thank you Riddhima

Vikram - "Thank you Riddhima. I'll not cry again."

Riddhima - "It's not about crying, Vikram. It is normal to cry when something happens in your life overpowering you. It is about not losing hope. Also, understand one thing. You are not alone. I am there for you to listen to you and heal your wounds. Also, like you say, it won't affect me if you tell your matters. It hurts only when you succumb the burden into yourself. I am sharing my matters with you and you heal all my pains and add happiness, right? I also expect it from you."

Vikram - "I'm sorry, Riddhima. I won't do that again to hurt you. Promise!"

Riddhima - "Now smile..."

Vikram smiles and so is Riddhima. Vikram's phone rings and Sanjana's name flashed. Vikram attends the call casually without knowing about the bad news waiting for him through the devastated Sanjana.

To be continued.

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Beautiful and Nice update🤗🤗

Loved it

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Hansa, Riddhima, & Vikram's bag-making conversation is cute.

Vikram & Riddhima's love confession is romantic.

Siddharth & Sanjana's flour scenes are funny.

Rehaan & Tanya's dialogues & scenes are romantic.

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Chapter-2

First of all, I am very very sorry for the super late reply

Riddhima did a good job by giving the exact answer on the face of Samarat..

The last part was very very emotional 🥺

Poor Riddhima they had to leave the house but Vikram was really a nice guy and indeed a good friend of Riddhima. He taught her self defence .

Thank you for the PM 🤗

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Originally posted by: golden_aura

Beautiful and Nice update🤗🤗

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗

Thank you so much buddy.

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Originally posted by: Priyo0143139

Chapter-2

First of all, I am very very sorry for the super late reply

Riddhima did a good job by giving the exact answer on the face of Samarat..

The last part was very very emotional 🥺

Poor Riddhima they had to leave the house but Vikram was really a nice guy and indeed a good friend of Riddhima. He taught her self defence .

Thank you for the PM 🤗

Thank you so much for commenting. Its okay. Glad you loved the chapter.😊

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Originally posted by: kavitha_r

Hansa, Riddhima, & Vikram's bag-making conversation is cute.

Vikram & Riddhima's love confession is romantic.

Siddharth & Sanjana's flour scenes are funny.

Rehaan & Tanya's dialogues & scenes are romantic.

Thank you so much dear. 😊 Glad that you loved all the scenes.

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CHAPTER 5

Next day - 4 PM

Riddhima's operation has been completed successfully. Now it is time to remove the white cloth from her eyes. Mr. George and few specialists are present. Vikram, Hansa, Siddarth, Sanjana, Raghu, Dhanak, Rehaan and Tanya are also present there.

Riddhima asked Vikram to come in front of her as she wanted to look at his face first with her eyes. Others are standing at the adjacent sides of Riddhima's bed. The nurse wrapped the cloth in Riddhima's eyes.

Mr. George asked Riddhima to open her eyes slowly. Riddhima slowly opened her eyes and the vision is bit blurred but then again she adjusted her vision and she looks at Vikram standing in front of her. He is standing in front of her with a hopeful smile with some anxiety.

Riddhima - "My eyes... My eyes... I got my eyes... I got my sight..... I could see you, Vikram."

Riddhima smiles and cries simultaneously. Riddhima looks at others present over there.

Vikram gets happy and embraced Riddhima. Hansa also comes and hugged Riddhima.

Vikram - "I cannot define my happiness now, Riddhima. Glad you got eyesight."

Riddhima recognized Sanjana as well. Vikram introduced other people to Riddhima. Riddhima felt happy to see the face of the people at the party. Others also speak to her.

Priya, Ram and another girl entered the room.

 Riddhima looks at them and identified the girl

Riddhima looks at them and identified the girl. The girl smiled at Riddhima and extended her hands for congratulating her. Riddhima shook her hands with a smile.

Riddhima - "Thank you so much, Aaliya."

Aaliya - "You're welcome, Riddhima. God bless you and lead a wonderful life with Vikram."

16 hours before,

Sanjana calls Vikram. Vikram attends the call and he could hear mild weeping sound of Sanjana.

Vikram - "Hello Sanjana, Are you fine?"

Sanjana wiped her tears and says, "Vikram, there is something to talk to you."

Vikram - "What are you saying?"

Sanjana - "Rishabh has died, Vikram."

Vikram was shocked, "What? How?"

Sanjana - "Three months back, when he consulted a cardiologist for heart ache, they found that he has a block in his heart. It is impossible for him to live more than 3 months. His parents have sought alliance with me. He doesn't have any courage to tell them because of his fear that his parents might become weak. He doesn't want to make me a widow so..."

Sanjana cried. Siddarth who is with her now consoled Sanjana. Sanjana give the phone to him.

Siddarth - "He run away from wedding and stayed with his friend Aaliya. But a few hours before......"

Vikram - "May his soul stay happy in heaven. Rishabh has not only considered him but also his parents and Sanjana."

Present

Vikram - "Aaliya, thank you so much for agreeing to donate Rishabh's eyes to Riddhima. Also my sincere apologies to you... I asked you regarding this in a wrong time without considering your agony on Rishabh's loss. Still you agreed with a big heart."

Aaliya - "It is not a wrong time, Vikram. I can understand you situation too. You did everything for your love. Rishabh wished to donate his organs after death so I am happy that your Riddhima got eyesight because of me.

 Rishabh wished to donate his organs after death so I am happy that your Riddhima got eyesight because of me

Vikram and Riddhima - "We are forever indebted for you, Aaliya."

Aaliya smiled.

*****

1 month later,

Vikram's song gets released in Youtube and it has become one of the biggest hits among the other released songs. Vikram gets many other projects in music vidoes, movies and web series. Vikram considers Riddhima as his lucky charm as only after her successful surgery, his song becomes hit according to him.

The song's team has set up a success party for adulating Vikram. Vikram's parents Ankush Raheja and Yamini Raheja attends the party on Riddhima's insistence. Riddhima welcomes Ankush and Yamini. Riddhima seeks blessings from Yamini and Ankush and they blessed her happily.

Riddhima took them to Vikram. Vikram smiles at them reluctantly and didn't look at them.

Ankush - "We are happy for your success, beta."

Yamini - "You made us proud, Vicky. Even people in our country watched your song and complimented you."

Vikram smiked - "Thank you.... Thank you so much..."

He is about to go but Riddhima stops him

He is about to go but Riddhima stops him.

Riddhima - "Where are you going, Vicky?"

Vikram - "Riddhima, I am in a good mood please don't..."

Riddhima - "Then take blessings from them, Vicky."

Vikram - "Don't act as if you don't know..."

Riddhima forcibly made Vikram touch their feet and she also did the same. Ankush and Yamini blessed them to lead a happy life. Vikram goes from there with anger. Riddhima couldn't stop him. Yamini caressed Riddhima's face.

Yamini - "It's okay, Riddhima. His anger would melt soon. We are glad that he has chosen a girl like you. His choice is the best after all. We thought you would take him far from us but you're not that type."

Riddhima - "No need to thank me, aunty. You're like my parents. I am happy that you accepted me whole-heartedly."

Ankush looks at Vikram who is talking to others enthusiastically

Ankush looks at Vikram who is talking to others enthusiastically.

Ankush - "We always wished him to see happy. That's why we don't want him to become a singer as it is not a beneficial job for someone who is talented and intelligent like him. He can be a perfect businessman who can earn in crores solely. But he didn't obey us and stood strong in his decision. Now we also understood that he is happy with his profession. Also he has found his better half. We are sure that you'd keep him happy."

Riddhima - "Thank you uncle, happiness is attained by mind's peace. Money is also needed but only money is not necessary."

Riddhima made Ankush and Yamini sit and looks for Vikram.

[NOTE: Slightly mature scene ahead. If you wish to ignore it, you can skip the Italics in this scene]

She goes to dress up room guessing that he could be there. Vikram is looking at the mirror and adjusting his hair.

Riddhima - "Vicky, you're here. Function is going to start soon."

Vikram comes near Riddhima and closes the door. (Dil Mein Chuppa Loonga song from Wajah Tum Ho plays)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Zz1TAfOp34

Vikram - "So what, sweetheart... You're looking s*xy in this gown."

Riddhima pouts, "Are you in a romance mood?"

Vikram holds Riddhima and pulls towards him.

Vikram - "You're so busy today. Even you were busy romancing with your in-laws, right? But you ignored me..."

Riddhima - "Vicky, they are your parents but you're angry..."

Vikram - "Hushhh, my lucky charm."

Vikram brings face closer to her face and says, "I know they are my lovely parents. Don't I have the right to get angry on them? After all I am their son."

Riddhima sighs in relief.

Riddhima - "Then, leave me. Function is going to start."

Vikram - "No, sweetheart. Also function won't start until I come. But you'll escape if I leave you now."

Riddhima - "What are you going to do?"

Riddhima - "What are you going to do?"

Vikram - "I am taking our relationship to another level, Ridz."

Riddhima - "Duffer, is this the time to do that?"

Vikram - "THAT... We can do THAT after you become an IAS."

Vikram brings his lips to Riddhima's lips. He placed his hands on her neck and cheek and locked his lips with her. Both are involved in the passionate lock.

Riddhima could feel his flaming breathe on his nose. After being involved in a deep kiss, they released themselves and Riddhima exhales while Vikram wiped his lips with a smirk. Riddhima looks at him.

Riddhima - "My god! It was amazing, Vicky."

Vikram - "I know that, Ridz... (winks)"

Riddhima looks at the lipstick pasted slightly below Vikram's lips. She smiles derisively and wipes it. Then, Vikram and Riddhima goes to attend the function by hand-in-hands.

*****

After a week,

Siddarth and Sanjana comes to Vikram's house. Vikram and Riddhima welcomed both of them. Four of them gathered at garden to talk.

Siddarth and Sanjana are looking at Vikram and Riddhima silently. Vikram and Riddhima blinks at each other.

Siddarth - "Bhabhi..."

Riddhima - "Haan."

Siddarth - "How is your IAS preparation going on? After all you are going to write exam by next month."

Sanjana nudged Siddarth. Siddarth screams. Riddhima and Vikram are looking at them confused.

Vikram - "Why are you both behaving weird? Did you both see your face in the mirror?"

Vikram - "Why are you both behaving weird? Did you both see your face in the mirror?"

Sanjana stares at Vikram. Vikram behaves as if he didn't notice.

Riddhima - "Okay, what is going between you?"

Siddarth - "Bhabhi, I am loving a girl."

Vikram pulled Siddarth's ears, "What Bhabhi... Everything you say to bhabhi only... Didn't you see your brother here?"

Siddarth - "Bro, leave me... I'll tell you also."

Vikram leaves his ear

Vikram leaves his ear. Siddarth pouts. Sanjana sighs for the 10th time.

Siddarth - "Bhabhi and Bhaiyya... I am loving a girl."

Vikram - "Who is that lucky girl?"

Sanjana - "Its me..."

Vikram - "Really? I though Siddarth would date a girl."

Sanjana - "How dare you!"

Sanjana stands up and starts beating Vikram

Sanjana stands up and starts beating Vikram. Siddarth and Riddhima did a hi-fi on seeing Vikram getting beaten. Sanjana then spares him.

Vikram - "It doesn't pain me by the way."

Sanjana - "Monkey!"

Riddhima - "Okay, so Sanjana and Siddarth are love with each other."

Sanjana and Siddarth nods shyly. Vikram pulled both their cheeks.

Riddhima - "Then, why are you scared."

Siddarth - "Actually..."

Vikram - "Ridz, understand. It is a transition from friends to lovers. They are in the fear of getting committed to someone. Right?"

Siddarth and Sanjana nods.

Vikram - "Tell me one thing. Are you both really in love with each other?"

Siddarth and Sanjana - "Yes, we are."

Vikram - "Then, go with it. Second chances works out even better than the first one. Do you know why? Because you can learn from your mistakes."

Siddarth and Sanjana feels content on hearing that. Sanjana and Siddarth hugged Vikram and kissed his cheeks.

Sanjana - "You are a love-guru, Vicky. As a payment, I bought you a gift."

Vikram - "Really?"

Sanjana - "Yes, wait I'll bring it."

Saying this, Sanjana goes.

Siddarth - "Bro, you'll enjoy the gift."

Vikram - "Thank you bro."

Vikram smiled while Siddarth smirked

Vikram smiled while Siddarth smirked. Sanjana comes inside with a box. Vikram opens the box and finds a black shirt and jeans.

Vikram - "It looks amazing, guys."

Riddhima takes the box and sees that.

Riddhima - "But..."

Sanjana - "I know what are you asking... It is not a new shirt. It is his old shirt and we packed in a new box for him."

Vikram cannot understand

Vikram cannot understand.

Siddarth - "Bhabhi, smell it."

Before Riddhima could smell it, Vikram grabs that from her. Riddhima pouts at Vikram. Vikram gives a sheepish smile.

Vikram - "Maha chudail and chudail ka pati dev... Main Badla lungi tum dono ko... (Big Witch and Witch's husband... I'll take my revenge on you both...) I'll do that in you wedding..."

Siddarth tells Riddhima about the history of the shirt. Riddhima couldn't stop laughing. Vikram also laughed along with them.

*****

After some time, Siddarth and Sanjana comes out of their house and sits on the car.

Siddarth switched on a romantic song in the radio and starts driving the car. Sanjana also gets mesmerized to that song and leaned on Siddarth's shoudler. Siddarth drives the car slowly to match up the mood.

Siddarth - "When shall we get married?"

Sanjana - "After a month... I want to live my courtship with you. I like to enjoy the loverhood."

Siddarth - "Sure..."

Siddarth stopped the car

Siddarth stopped the car.

Sanjana - "Why did you stop the car?"

Siddarth - "Let us go for a walk. You know, night walks are love. No one except the moon is present here. The whole environment is peaceful."

Sanjana approves and get out of the car.

Sanjana inserts her shoulders into Siddarth's shoulders and starts walking. (Janam Janam song from Dilwale plays)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=waOOwBHb0uk

Sanjana - "I wish to walk like this throughout our life, Sid."

Siddarth - "It is my wish as well, Sanju."

Sanjana - "We got introduced to ourselves in this moon light and now we are taking oaths in the moon-light."

Siddarth - "If someone is destined to this specific person, wherever the person exists the fate would reunite them."

Sanjana - "I love you to the moon and back."

Siddarth - "I too love you to the moon and and back."

Both smiled.

Sanjana - "Sid, there is a ice-cream cart

Sanjana - "Sid, there is a ice-cream cart."

Siddarth - "Would you want to buy it?"

Sanjana - "Yeah, sid. Eating ice-cream in this walk is a feel...."

Siddarth - "Okay okay..."

Siddarth buys two ice-creams and gives one to Sanjana. They both continued their long walk with the ice-cream.

*****

After 2 years,

Riddhima has become an IAS officer of Shimla now after clearing all the exams and interviews.

On a breezy evening, Riddhima unfolded Vikram's eyes and took him to the trees filled area for surprising him. Riddhima takes him out of the car and took him for some distance.

(Roshiv Romantic Tune plays)

Vikram - "Please open my blind-fold..."

Riddhima - "Sshhh! Wait, Vicky

Riddhima - "Sshhh! Wait, Vicky."

Riddhima unfolds Vikram's blindfold and there is a big thing wrapped by a cloth.

Vikram - "What is this Vikram?"

Riddhima - "Remove the cloth, Vikram."

Vikram removed the cloth and sees a brand new bike there.

Image

Vikram - "Riddhima, this is..."

Riddhima - "Your dream bike... Now it is yours."

Vikram - "Wow! Riddhima

Vikram - "Wow! Riddhima... I didn't expect it... Thank you so much, Riddhu."

Vikram goes and touches the bike's work and kissed it.

Riddhima - "No wonder people say bike is man's first wife, lover etc."

Vikram laughs and hugged Riddhima, "Thank you Riddhima. But this is your first salary for your work. You're planning to buy a jewel set."

Riddhima - "I said that since you keep asking me. I wanted to buy this bike for you, Vicky. You sold your bike and car for the treatment. You could have bought it later but, you prefered to spend the money for my training and Dadi's medical treatment. I know, your previous bike is special since it is bought on your savings and first salary....."

Vikram stopped her, "This is even more special since it is your selection."

Vikram kissed Riddhima's forehead.

Riddhima - "Do you want to thank me?

Riddhima - "Do you want to thank me?

Vikram - "Yes."

Riddhima - "Then, take me a ride with your new bike. To the mountains and hills...."

Vikram - "Your commands are my wish, Ms. IAS. Who will deny such romantic request?"

 Who will deny such romantic request?"

Riddhima corrected him, "Mrs. Vikram."

Vikram smiles and sits on the bike. Riddhima sits behind him. Riddhima hugged him from behind tightly and rested her head on his back. Vikram starts riding the bike.

THE END.

Author's note:
Finally the story has come to its end. I hope you loved the story. Immense gratitude to the each and every reader who liked, commented and supported this story throughout the journey. It is definitely going to be very close to my heart.

Please mention your favourite scenes from the story.

Also please mention what do you think about each and every character from the story. You can also refer CS to remember the character's name.

Edited by RadiantSpark - 3 years ago
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