Kabir deserves praise too for letting Pooja fight her own battles and believing in her.
Fight scene was really funny
Ruhaan caring for Pooja was nice
Ruhaan feeling for Gauri
Now he's baking for her, how romantic
waiting for next
nice, cute and perfect pics 😤
Superb Chapter
Omkara blaming and torturing Gauri
thankfully both Kabir and Pooja
arrives to save Gauri
It was a Fascinating Update
and very long too
The cocorach scene was hilarious
though I just hate seeing them
it was a good scene
Pooja fighting the goons all by herself was dynamic. Loved Kabir encouraging her. Loved Ruhaan caring for Gauri & Pooja. Ruhaan making chocolate cookies for Gauri was romantic. Hope Ruhaan confesses his feelings for Gauri on the terrace.
Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Pyar jhukta nahin .... Love Does not Bow Down Part 5
Pooja was surrounded by 3 goons with lusty eyes.
One man:Hey girl..what's up?
Pooja stared at them.
Kabir who passed by stopped the car and got out of the car.He went near them.
Kabir:Why are you behind that girl?Leave her.
Pooja:Kabir,I don't need your help.I can look after myself.
Kabir:I know that.I have no intention to help you.Because I am not mad.Pooja stared at him.Kabir smirked.
Kabir looked at those guys.
Kabir:I told you...leave this girl.
One man:What if we don't leave her?
Kabir:I said leave her.
Another man:We won't leave her.You do whatever you want.
Suddenly Pooja punched that guy's face.He was shocked.He tried to beat her back.
She kicked on his stomach.
She started punching the other men.
Kabir was watching the fight sequence and enjoying it as if he was watching an interesting movie.
😆
The goons became very weak.Pooja smirked.
Pooja smirked extending her hands towards them:Come come...if you dare to come near me..come...
They all were frightened.
Good😉
Kabir went near them.
Kabir:Now did you understand why I asked you to leave her?She is black belt in karate.I knew that you guys will be in a pool of blood if you mess up with her.That's why I asked you people to stay away away from her.But see...you people did not listen to me.So now all 3 of you are suffering from severe pain.But still luck is with you all.That's why you all are still alive.
Those men were on the verge of crying.Kabir felt like laughing,
😆
He looked at Pooja.
Kabir:You were superb.I have to admit.I am not surprised as I expected this from you.Action heroine Pooja.
Pooja:Tell me something which I don't know.
Pooja walked off showing him attitude.He smiled.
Pooja reached back home.She covered her wound with a shawl.
Anuradha:You reached back.Ruhaan is waiting for you in the room.
Pooja:Ok.
Pooja went to her room.Ruhaan smiled:Pooja..I want to tell you something.
Suddenly her shawl slipped down and Ruhaan saw wounds on her hand.He was shocked.
Ruhaan:Pooja...what happened to your hands?
Pooja:Oh ho..Nothing Ruhaan.I just fell down.
Ruhaan held her hand and looked at it.
Ruhaan:This does'nt look like you have fallen down.Pooja..say the truth.
Pooja:Ruhaan...
Ruhaan:Say...
Pooja told him about her fight with the goons.
Ruhaan:What is this Pooja?Why did you fight with those goons?See how you got hurt because of that.Kabir was there.Right?He knows that you don't like him fighting for her and that's why he did not interfere.Otherwise he would have fought with them for you.
Pooja:I don't like that duffer fighting for me.I can manage myself.
Ruhaan:You are so stubborn.Whatever!
He opened the drawer and took the first aid box.
Pooja:No need of that Ruhaan.It's a small wound.
Ruhaan:How can you decide that there is only a small wound?There are many scratches on your
body.So keep quiet and sit.
Pooja:But Ruhaan..
Ruhaan:Don't argue with me like a sherni like you do to Kabir.
They both giggled.
🤣
Ruhaan applied ointment on her wound.
Gauri who passed by saw it and smiled.
Gauri came there.Ruhaan-Gauri smiled at each other.
Gauri:Pooja...are you ok?What happened?
Ruhaan:She fought with goons.
Gauri was shocked:Goons?
Ruhaan:Don't worry.Fighting with goons is normal for her as she herself is a goon.
Pooja:Ruhaan...
Ruhaan and Gauri laughed.
😆
Ruhaan:Gauri..you don't fight with goons.I will fight for you.
Gauri looked at his eyes deeply.He was lost in her eyes.
Gauri:Thank you Ruhaan for taking care of my sister.
Ruhaan:What is the need of thanking me?This happens always in our relationship.She fights and gets injured and I am her nurse.
Oh😛
They all laughed.
Pooja:By the way Ruhaan...you said you want to talk to me.What was that?
Ruhaan said in his mind:I wanted to tell Pooja about my feelings for Gauri.But now in front of Gauri I can't tell her that.
Ruhaan:Actually I ...I wanted some suggestions regarding photography.I took some photographs.You should choose the best photographs.
Pooja:Sure.
After a few days....
Ruhaan and Kabir visited Sharma house.
Ruhaan:Where is Pooja?
Anuradha:She left for an important meeting.
Kabir became dull.
He thought:Without fighting with Pooja I am not able to sleep properly.
Ruhaan's eyes were thirsting for Gauri.
He thought:How will I ask them about Gauri?
Kabir:Where is Gauri?
Anuradha:She fell down and her leg got sprained.She is taking rest.
Ruhaan:Oh no...
Kabir:Is she alright?
Anuradha:Now she is getting better.Thankfully no crack.
Kabir-Ruhaan rushed to Gauri's room.She was lying on the bed.
Ruhaan:Gauri...are you alright?
Gauri:Ya..I am fine.
Kabir:Do you still have pain?
Gauri:When I walk it pains.So I am resting.
Ruhaan caressed her head:Don't worry.The pain will disappear soon.
Kabir remembered how Ruhaan was caring for Gauri during the picnic.He smiled.
Kabir thought:Ruhaan loves Gauri.Guess Gauri also has a special affection for him.I should not remain here as an obstacle.Let them have private moments.
👍🏼
Kabir left the room.
Ruhaan:I will massage your foot.You will get rid of pain.
Gauri was stunned:What?You will massage my foot?No need.
Ruhaan:Why not?I can care only for Pooja?I love to care for you also Gauri.Because you have an irreplaceable special place in my life.
They shared a sweet eye lock.
❤️
Gauri:But you are man.How can you massage a woman's foot?
Ruhaan started laughing.
Ruhaan:In which era are you living Gauri?We are not living in primitive times where women are treated as door mats.I love to treat my woman as a Princess.
Gauri was surprised to hear him say 'my woman'.
Gauri:What did you say?
Ruhaan realized what he said.
Ruhaan smiled:You did'nt hear what I said?
Gauri blushed.
Ruhaan started massaging her foot.Gauri's eyes were on Ruhaan.She was touched by his act.
Suddenly Ruhaan twisted her foot.
Gauri was shocked:Ahhhhh
Ruhaan smiled:Now try walking.You will have no pain.
Gauri started walking.She was surprised as she had no pain.
She smiled at Ruhaan:Thank you Ruhaan.I have no pain.Your hands are magical.
He smiled:You are magical in my eyes Gauri.You appear to be a ravishing fairy in my eyes.
Gauri could'nt believe her ears.
He touched her nose cutely.
Ruhaan:Take care Gauri.
He walked out smiling.Gauri touched her nose where Ruhaan touched.She could'nt stop blushing.
So cute😳
Ruhaan-Pooja met.
Ruhaan:Pooja...I want to tell you something.
Pooja asked sarcastically:You want me to choose the best photographs?
Ruhaan:No.
Pooja:Then what?
Ruhaan:I..I....
Pooja:Why don't you tell me straightly that you love Gauri?
Ruhaan was stunned:What?You know that?
Pooja:Ya...
Ruhaan:How?
Pooja:You are always sticking to Gauri.Extra caring too.So I guessed it.
Ruhaan was shy.
Pooja:Go tell Gauri about your love.
Ruhaan:But will Gauri accept me?
Pooja:I am sure that she loves you.But since she is an introvert she is not admitting it.But if
you tell her that you love her she will also reciprocate her feelings.
Ruhaan:But how?
Pooja:Just do it in the simple manner.She is very simple.
Ruhaan:But I want to do something special for Gauri.
Pooja:Then you will have to work hard.She will die for chocolate cookies.You will have to make it.
Ruhaan:Anything for Gauri.I will prepare it for Gauri.
Pooja:But you don't know to make it.Right?
Ruhaan:These days it's very easy.I will get the recipe from the internet.
Pooja:Good.
Ruhaan tried making chocolate cookies.But it was a failure.
Ruhaan:No..I will not accept my defeat that easily.I will try till I succeed.
Great😉
After a few days...
Gauri went to Mittal house.She touched Suman's feet.
Suman:Gauri...you should not touch my feet when you see me.
Suman hugged her:Hug me like this.
Gauri hugged her back smiling.
Suman:Gauri...how are you beta?
Gauri:I am fine aunty.
She could feel nice smell from the kitchen.
Gauri:Who is in the kitchen aunty?
Suman smiled:It's Ruhaan.I don't know why.These days suddenly he is interested in cooking.He is making some sweets.
Gauri was surprised.
Gauri:Can I go to the kitchen and see?
Suman:Ya Gauri.What's the need of asking?This is your house also.
Gauri smiled.
She went to the kitchen.
Ruhaan was stunned to see Gauri.Immediately he closed the pans.
Gauri:What are you preparing Ruhaan?
Ruhaan:It's a secret.
Gauri:Secret?Why?We are friends.So no secrets between us.
She opened the pan and saw chocolate cookies.
Gauri:Wow.
Ruhaan thought:Oh no..the suspense is broken.
Gauri:I love chocolate cookies.
Ruhaan thought:I know.That's why I made it.
Gauri:Can I taste it?
Ruhaan:No.Not now.
Gauri became dull.
Ruhaan thought:Sorry Gauri for making you upset.But let the right time come.
Gauri:Ok.Carry on.I am going.
Gauri tried to walk away.
Suddenly Ruhaan called her:Gauri!
Gauri looked at him.
Ruhaan:Will you come to the terrace tonight?
Gauri was surprised:Ya..but why?
Ruhaan:You come.I will let you know.
She smiled nodding her head.She went out.
Ruhaan opened the pan with a smile.
Ruhaan:Finally I succeeded in making yummy chocolate cookies.
Excited for it❤️
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Gauri walked to the terrace at night.Seeing Ruhaan there she blushed.
Mujhe haq hai Gauri asked blushing:Why did you call me Ruhaan?
Ruhaan took a small simple chain from his pocket and showed it to her.
Her face was glowing.
Ruhaan:For you.
Gauri was surprised:For me?
Ruhaan:Yes.
Tujhko ji bhar ke mai dekhu Mujhe haq hai Bas yuhi dekhta jao Mujhe haq haiGauri:It's so cute.
He smiled.
He gave it to her.
Ruhaan:Open the locket and see.
She opened it.She could not believe her eyes.
It had the picture of Gauri and Ruhaan together.
Piya piya - 2 Bole mere jiya Tumhe haq hai - 3Sh looked at him in disbelief.
Ruhaan:I hope you understood what's there in my heart.This is what I wish..you and me together till eternity.
Gauri looked at him emotionally.
Dhal rahi peghal ye raat dheere dheere Badh rahi hai pyaar ki baat dheere dheere Chudiya gun guna ke kya kahe sanjana Ye chudiya gun guna ke kya kahe sanjana
Ruhaan:I also know what is in your heart for me.
Gauri became shy.
Ruhaan:But I want to hear it from you.
Gauri was blushing silently.
Raat ki raat jagau Mujhe haq hai Chand poonan ka churao Mujhe haq haiRuhaan:Ok I understand that you are reserved when it comes to expressing feelings.But if you allow me to tie this chain around your neck it means you also love me.If you don't allow me to put it around your neck it means...
Gauri looked at him.
Piya piya - 2 Bole mere jiya Tumhe haq hai - 3Ruhaan:So may I?
Gauri nodded her head blushing.Ruhaan smiled happily.
Kal subah tujhse me Door chala jaunga Ek pal ko bhi tujhe bhool nahi paunga Ruhaan tied the chain around her neck.
She was blushing sweetly.
(Ye chehra ye muskan Ankho me bhar ke) They looked at each other's face. (Ye chehra ye muskan Ankho me bhar ke)
Ruhaan moved closer to her face and joined their foreheads romantically.
Mai teri yaad me tadpu Mujhe haq hai Tujhse milne ko me tarsu Mujhe haq hai He slowly took a box from the table near by.He opened it.It was full of chocolate cookies. Ruhaan:This is for you Gauri.I prepared them for you only.That time I did'nt let you eat it as I wanted to make this moment special by your favourite chocolate cookies. Gauri smiled happily with surprise. Mai teri yaad me tadpu Mujhe haq hai Tujhse milne ko me tarsu Mujhe haq hai
He took a chocolate cookie and fed her with his hand.She smiled.She also fed him back. Mai teri yaad me tadpu Mujhe haq hai Tujhse milne ko me tarsu Mujhe haq hai
They sat down looking at the shining moon in the sky.She rested her head on his shoulders and he pulled her more closer to him.
Piya piya - 2 Bole mere jiya Tumhe haq hai - 3(Vivah).
Mittals and Sharmas sat together except Gauri,
PK:Come on Ruhaan...what do you want to tell us?You have not told us what is in your mind.
Ruhaan:Actually I called all of you here to share the most important matter of my life.I am in love.
All of them were surprised.
Pooja smiled thinking:Gauri...
Kabir smiled saying in his mind:It's Gauri for sure.
Ashok:Say who is that lucky girl.
Ruhaan:Gauri.
PK,Suman,Ashok and Anuradha were stunned.
PK:But...
Ruhaan:Papa...you may think that this alliance won't work as Gauri is already married and she is a memory loss patient.But I love only Gauri.
PK:Ruhaan..how could you think that I will object it?I will be very happy if Gauri becomes your wife.She is perfect for you.
Ruhaan was surprised.Everyone including Ashok-Anuradha smiled emotionally.
PK:What I was going to ask you is...does Gauri like you?
Ruhaan blushed:Yes,she also loves me.
Ashok,Anuradha,PK and Suman were surprised.
Suman:So things reached till here.These days children are so smart.
They all smiled.
Ashok:PK..are you sure about Gauri?You know about Gauri very well.I don't want Gauri to have a heart break again.She has already suffered a lot.
PK:Why are you talking like this Ashok?Just because Gauri was married before and she has memory loss she does'nt become unfit for Ruhaan.To be frank I always wanted Ruhaan and Gauri to get married as their personalities match.
All were surprised to know that PK wanted Ruhaan to get married to Gauri.
Suman:If Gauri also loves Ruhaan then we should get them married soon.
Ruhaan blushed.All were very happy.
Ashok-Anuradha smiled emotionally.
Anuradha:We will tell Gauri this good news when she returns from the temple,
PK:Wait...the day after tomorrow is Pooja and Gauri's birthday.Right?That time we will announce Ruhaan-Gauri's wedding news.This will be the best birthday gift for Gauri.
Pooja:Good idea.This will be the best birthday gift for me also as I wanted my best friend Ruhaan and my dearest sister Gauri to unite.
They all smiled.
Gauri-Pooja's birthday party...
Pooja appeared in a Green and black dress.
Kabir was lost in her beauty.
Kabir:Oh no...this girl is killing me with her looks.
Pooja:What is the matter Kabir?Don't you think that you are staring at me?
Kabir was embarrassed.Pooja smirked.
Kabir:Yes,I was staring at you.Because your face is pasted with paint.
Pooja was stunned:What?Are you making fun of make up?
Kabir:You look as of you bathed with cosmetics.Look at Gauri.She is so simple and beautiful.But you look like a ghost with over make up.
Pooja fumed with anger.
Pooja:I am not giving you any reply as I don't want to spoil my birthday by fighting with you.
She turned back angrily to go.Suddenly Kabir held her hand.She looked at him in disbelief.
Kabir:I was just kidding.You look very beautiful.
Pooja's face blossomed.
She said in her mind:Why can't you admit that you stared at me because of my beauty?
Kabir said in his mind:If I say that I was staring at you because of your beauty you will start yelling at me again.So I won't say that.
Pooja:Thanks for the compliment.
Kabir:Pooja Sharma thanking me?Not bad.
She smiled.
Ruhaan was mesmerized by Gauri in her white Indian attire.
Ruhaan:Really a fairy who descended from the heaven.
Gauri blushed.
Gauri:And you look like a Prince.
He smiled looking deeply into her eyes.
Pooja and Gauri cut the birthday cake and fed each other.Then they fed to Ashok-Anuradha.
They kissed their daughters emotionally and fed them the cake.
Anuradha whispered to Ashok:After many years we are celebrating the birthday of Gauri and Pooja together.
Ashok:Yes.It's God's blessing.
Pooja and Gauri fed the cake to PK-Suman.
Gauri fed the cake to Ruhaan blushing.Ruhaan fed her back.Pooja also fed him cake and Ruhaan fed her back.Pooja extended the cake piece to Kabir.He held her hand and made her put the cake inside his mouth.Pooja was stunned.She opened her mouth in 'O' shape.Then Kabir took a cake piece and put in her mouth:Happy birthday Pooja.
He winked at her
and walked off.
Slowly Pooja smiled:Crazy.
Ashok-Anuradha and PK-Suman went on the stage.
Ashok:I want to announce a happy news to all.Wedding bells are ringing in our families.Our daughter Gauri is getting married.Gauri was shocked.
Gauri thought:Papa fixed my wedding without asking me?Who is that guy?What will I tell Ruhaan?Oh Shankarji!
PK:Gauri is getting married to our son....
Suman: Ruhaan.
Gauri could not believe it.She became so happy that she ran towards Ashok and hugged him:Thank you papa.
Ashok smiled.Gauri hugged PK also.
PK:How is the birthday gift Gauri?
Gauri:This is the best birthday gift.Thank you so much.
Gauri and Ruhaan looked at each other.They shared a romantic eye lock.
They brought rings for Ruhaan-Gauri.
They exchanged rings.
Suman and Anuradha played music.
Anuradha:The newly engaged couple Ruhaan and Gauri..come and beautify the floor through your marvelous dance performance.
Suman:A romantic dance ...
Ruhaan held Gauri's hand and started swaying to music.
They danced with pure romance.
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Meharbaani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tera nazara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Takdeer ki kashtiyon ko, kinara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sauhbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maanu mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye ("Agent Vinod")
After the dance everyone clapped hands.
Ruhaan was clicking Gauri's photographs with his camera.
Gauri:Ruhaan..let us take our photo together in my phone also.I want our photographs in my phone also.
Ruhaan:Ok.
Gauri:I will go and get my phone from my room.
Gauri went upstairs and took her phone.While coming downstairs her leg slipped and she rolled down the stair steps hurting her head.She was bleeding heavily.
All were shocked and shattered.
They screamed:Gauriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
They ran towards Gauri.
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