Pyar jhukta nahin... JaBir,Ruhaan-Gauri,RiKara SS Last part pg10

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Pyar jhukta nahin .... Love Does not Bow Down Part 1

I dedicate this story to Narmada who wanted me to write a story on her concept with Ruhaan-Gauri,Kabir-Pooja and Omkara-Gauri.

Though both Omkara and Ruhaan are there in this story according to Narmada's concept they are not look alikes.


Sharma house....

A beautiful girl was dressing up.

Her mother Anuradha called her:Pooja..

She turned back.

She is none other than Pooja.She was in her official get up.

Anuradha:Break fast is ready beta.

Pooja:Thank you mom.I want to finish break fast.I have to leave for an urgent meeting.

Pooja is a young successful business woman.

Anuradha:Ok.But eat well.Don't skip food and get tired.

Pooja:Ok mom.

Pooja went to the drawing room and kept her bag.There someone came behind her and said:Boom...

She turned back.It was her best friend Ruhaan Mittal who is their neighbour also.

Pooja:Ruhaan..you really surprised me.

She hugged him.

Pooja:Then what's up Ruhaan?

Ruhaan:Nothing special.I thought I will have break fast here as I really feel like having Anu aunty's food.

Pooja:That's nice.Mom makes yummy food.

Suddenly she saw Kabir coming.Kabir is Ruhaan's younger brother.

Pooja:Kabir...why are you here?

Kabir:Oh come on.You are questioning me as if I am a thief who came to your house for stealing.

Pooja:Not a joke.Say why are you here.I am not interested to see your boring face.

Kabir:Even I am not interested to see your boring face.I did'nt come here to see you.I came here to see my Ashok uncle and Anuradha aunty.Why do you think that I have come here to see their ruthless daughter?

Pooja lost her temper:How dare you?This is my house and you are taunting me?

Kabir:This is Ashok uncle and Anuradha aunty's house also.I can come here whenever I want.

Pooja:Youuuuu..

Ruhaan:Oh no.These two can never stop fighting.Since childhood you both are fighting.When will you both stop fighting like kids?

Pooja:Ruhaan...we will never stop fighting.Tell your brother to be in his limits.

Kabir:Ruhaan...tell your best friend to be in limits.

Ruhaan:Oh my God!I am jammed between 2 crazy people.Save me.

Ashok and Anuradha came.

Ashok:What is happening here?

Anuradha:Pooja...did you again start fighting with Kabir?

Pooja:Mom...this Kabir...

Anuradha:Stop fighting and come for break fast.You have a meeting.Right?

Pooja:Ya.

They all were seated for break fast.

Kabir:What a nice smell!Your food tempts me to come here.

Ruhaan:Ya..yummy food.

Anuradha:Now stop buttering me and start eating.

They smiled and started eating.

They:Yummy!

Ruhaan:Ashok uncle is lucky to get Anu aunty who is an excellent cook.

Pooja:Don't worry Ruhaan.You will also a nice wife with amazing cooking skill.

Kabir:Yes.Ruhaan will get a wife with cooking skill.But I don't think I will get one like that.

Ashok:Why Kabir?

Kabir stared at Pooja and said:It's like that.

Pooja stared at him.

Kabir smirked.

Ruhaan looked at them.

Mittal house was decorated....

The Anniversary party of PK Mittal and Suman Mittal was going on.

Ashok and Anuradha hugged and wished them a happy anniversary.

PK:Thank you Suman for giving me amazing sons like Ruhaan and Kabir.

Suman smiled:Thanks to you too for giving me sons like Ruhaan Kabir.

Kabir:No credit for us for becoming nice sons?

Ruhaan:Exactly.

PK:Oh..come on.

PK and Suman extended their hands towards them.Kabir and Ruhaan hugged them.

Ashok,Anuradha and Pooja became emotional.

Anuradha:If Gauri was with us...

Ashok's eyes became wet

Ashok:Anuradha...

Pooja could'nt control her tears and went to the lawn.

She opened her wallet and looked at a photograph.

It was the photograph of 2 small twin girls.

Pooja shed tears:Where are you Gauri?

Ruhaan came and sat near her:Missing Gauri?

Pooja nodded her head:There is no moment where I don't think of Gauri.When we were 10 years old in a temple crowd she got lost.We tried our best to find her.But till now we could'nt find here.But we will keep searching for her.

Pooja asked Ruhaan emotionally:One day we will get her back.Right Ruhaan?

Ruhaan caressed her head:Yes Pooja.You will find her one day.

Kabir was over hearing them.He became dull.

He thought:Pooja is really upset.I have to distract her mind.

Kabir came in front of them:Hey guys...come.The dance floor is ready.

Ruhaan:Yes.We are coming.

Pooja:I am not in a mood Ruhaan.You go.

Ruhaan:No,you should also come.

Ruhaan grabbed her hand and took her inside.Kabir smiled.

Everyone started dancing along with PK and Suman.

Kabir pushed Ashok-Anuradha to the dance floor and they started dancing.

Chhup gaya badalee me jake, chand bhee sharma gaya Aapko dekha toh phulo ko pasina aa gaya Arey mahin re, ho ho ho......  Aap ne yuun chhed ke toh, dil meraa dhadka diya Ham mile toh pyar karne kaa mahina aa gaya Arey mahin re, ho ho ho.........  Aap kee yeh chudiya, hamko jagaye rat bhar Aap kee yeh boliya, hamko sataye rat bhar
 Aap kaa aanchal udha, amber pe badal chha gaya Ham mile toh pyar karne kaa mahina aa gaya Arey mahin re, ho ho ho......  Aankho se neenden churana, koyee sikhe aap se Pyar me pagal banana, koyee seekhe aap se Aap kee chahat kaa yeh andaj hamko bha gaya Aap ko dekha toh phulo ko pasina aa gaya Arey mahin re, ho ho ho........ Chhup gaya badalee me jake....... (Hum Aapke Dil Mein Rehte Hain).

But Pooja was not dancing as her mood was bad.

Kabir pulled her to the dance floor shocking her.He started dancing around her.

Ho aankh meri 100-100 baar
200 baar lad lad jaave
O jise dekhe dil mera
Piche piche pad pad jaave

Hai din mein ye tere ghar
Kahin aur guzre ye raatein
Karna jo dooji dafa
Pehli baar kar kar jaave

O matlab ke samjhe ishaare
Ye saare ye to nazaron mein apni utaare
Nazaare wo jo subah tak na utre
Har raat nasha chadhta hai

Le le le lele number mera
Baad mein message mujhko kar dena
Khudko samajh ke lucky
Mujhse hook up tu kar le na

She was staring at him.


Le le le lele number mera
Baad mein message mujhko kar dena
Khudko samajh ke lucky
Mujhse hook up tu kar le na

O kabhi isey kabhi usey
Dekhoon aate jaate
Kar loon mulaqatein
Main to zara waadon ka kaccha hoon
Jhootha hi accha hoon

He held her hand and started dancing.

Seedhi saadhi mere dil ki saaf hai batein
Acchi lagi ratein
Beete ik lamha tu baahon mein
Dooja nigaahon mein

Khawabon mein aana jaana
Ho gaya hai ab puraana
Ae seedha tu milne aana
Dil mera karta hai

Le le le lele number mera
Baad mein message mujhko kar dena
Khudko samajh ke lucky
Mujhse hook up tu kar le na

Le le le lele number mera
Baad mein message mujhko kar dena
Khudko samajh ke lucky
Mujhse hook up tu kar le na

Finally she also started dancing.


Ho aankh meri sau sau baari
Do sau baari lad lad jaave
Haaye jise dekhe dil mera
Piche piche pad pad jaave

Hai din mein ye tere ghar
Kahin aur guzre ye raatein
Karna jo dooji dafa
Pehli baar kar kar jaave

O matlab ke samjhe ishaare
Ye saare ye to nazaron mein apni utaare
Nazaare wo jo subah tak na utre
Har raat nasha chadhta hai

Unknowingly they got into an eye lock.

Le le le lele number mera
Baad mein message mujhko kar dena
Khudko samajh ke lucky
Mujhse hookup tu kar le na

Le le le lele number mera
Baad mein message mujhko kar dena
Khudko samajh ke lucky
Mujhse hook-up tu kar le na(
Student Of The Year 2).

Both came back into senses.

Breaking the eye lock Pooja looked at Kabir angrily:What nonsense is this Kabir?Why did you

dance with me forcefully?

Kabir:If you did'nt like me why did'nt you stop me?

Pooja was embarrassed.

Pooja:Because I did'nt want to spoil PK uncle and Suman aunty's wedding anniversary.

Kabir:Ok.But don't expect me to say sorry.

Pooja:I am not a fool to expect sorry from you as you are someone who will never do that.Your head of full of ego.

Kabir:Hoye..even you are egoistic.

Pooja:What?

They continued arguing.Finally Kabir left from there.He gulped cold water.

Then he slowly smirked:I am happy that at least because of our fight you forgot your pain for time being.

Pooja thought:I know that purposefully you danced with me to make my mood good.

She smiled.

A simple girl was buying grocery items from the shop.She tried to catch an auto.But she could'nt get any auto.After waiting for a lot she got an auto and reached home.It was Oberoi Mansion.

Suddenly she heard a roaring sound:Gauri!

She startled.She turned back.It was her husband Omkara Singh Oberoi.

Om:Where were you?

Gauri:I went shopping.

Om looked at her grocery items.

Om:To buy a few things you took so much of time?Unbelievable.

Gauri shivered:I did'nt get auto on time.That's why I became late.

Om:Don't tell lies Gauri.Tell me with whom were you enjoying?

Gauri was shocked:No Omkaraji...I was really in the shop.I have no one in my life besides you.

Om:No.You are lying.All women are liars and cheaters.I had trusted my ex wife.But she cheated me.

Like her you are also cheating me.I will not tolerate it.

Gauri:No Omkaraji.I have never cheated you.

Om:I will not tolerate liars.

He slapped her.She fell down.She got up from the floor .He took a match box.She was stunned.

He took a match stick and lit it.Then he moved towards her.

Gauri got scared:No Omkaraji...no please.I beg of you.

Her pleadings fell on his deaf ear.

He hurt her skin with the lit match stick.She cried loudly.He laughed insanely.

Suddenly Pooja got up from her chair.

Pooja:Why did I feel that Gauri is in danger?I hope it's an unnecessary fear.I hope wherever she is,she is safe.

Gauri was crying alone in her room.

Gauri:Papa..mumma...Pooja...I miss all of you.If you all were with me I would'nt have suffered like this.

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Awesome update😳Pooja Ruhaan scene was cute😳Pooja and Kabir fighting like kids😆PK and Suman scene on their anniversary was sweet😳Sad Gauri got lost in the gathering as a kid😒Kabir thinks so much for her😳Gauri is married to Om, who thinks she is cheating on him😲His ex wife cheated him..He even slapped her and burned her skin😲How cruel he is😡It's natural for Pooja to feel Gauri is in pain..Perfect pics❤️

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Hope they find the poor girl and save her from that beast.

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Surprised to see Akshara n Naitik, bloody Omkara, how dare he? Loved the dance scene, I hope Gauri is found soon

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thanks for the pm!

great update

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This part began with Jabir nok jhok. Loved Ruhaan stoping their fights. Jabir's dance scene was romantic. Sad they started fighting again. Glad that Gauri is alive.

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Thanks a lot


Pyar jhukta nahin .... Love Does not Bow Down Part 2

Omkara rang up Gauri:I am coming back from office.Make my food ready.If you are 2 minutes late you know what I can do.

Gauri got scared:Ok.

Gauri arranged the food on table.

Suddenly she got an idea.

Gauri plucked some flowers from the garden and decorated the room.

Gauri smiled:It will be a surprise for Omkaraji.Hope his mood will be good.

Omkara reached home.He ate the food.

Om:It was delicious Gauri.

Gauri smiled:Thank you Omkaraji.

Gauri thought:Today Omkaraji's mood seems to be good.He will like my surprise.

Omkara entered the room.He saw flower everywhere.Gauri who followed him smiled.

Omkara started sneezing.

Gauri:What happened Omkaraji?

Omkara stared at Gauri:You kept the flowers here?

Gauri:Ya.

Om:To kill me?

Gauri was shocked:What are you saying Omkaraji?

Om:I am allergic to these flowers.Purposefully to torture me you kept the flowers here.

Gauri was shocked:Trust me Omkaraji...I did'nt know that you are allergic to these flowers.I thought you will like flowers.To surprise you only I kept the flowers here.

Om:Stop lying Gauri.I know your intention.But I won't let it happen.

He took a compass.Then he looked at Gauri's hand.

Om:With this hand only you kept the flowers here to ruin my health.Right?This hand deserves a punishment.

Gauri got scared.She started shivering.

Gauri:Omkaraji...no...please..I am sorry..I will not repeat it.

Without listening to her,Omkara pricked her hand hard with the compass.

Gauri screamed loudly.

Days passed....

Ruhaan and Kabir visited Sharma house.

They were chatting with Anuradha and Ashok.In between Kabir's eyes searched for Pooja secretly.

Ruhaan:Where is Pooja?

Ashok:Pooja is busy preparing for her presentation.

Anuradha:I will inform her that you both came.

Kabir:If you tell her that I have come here she will not come at all.

They all laughed.

Suddenly Kabir sneezed.

Kabir:I will go to the washroom and come.

Kabir went to the washroom and washed his face.While coming back to the drawing room accidentally he saw Pooja's room slightly open.Unknowingly he stopped and peeped into her room.

He saw Pooja standing on the stool and trying to take a book from the cupboard.

The stool started shaking and she was about to fall down.Suddenly Kabir caught her.

Pooja was in his arms.They shared an eye lock.

Suddenly Pooja said:How dare you touch me?Put me down.

Kabir released her and she fell down.

Pooja:Ahhh..

She got up from the floor.

Pooja:Why did you throw me down?

Kabir:You only told me to put you down and I did so.

Pooja:Stop it.You need a reason to insult me.

Kabir got angry and he pinned her to the wall.

Kabir:I am insulting you?You are the one who is insulting me unnecessarily.When you were going to fall down I caught you.Instead of thanking me you accusing me of touching you.Really Pooja?Why should I touch you when we are not even friends?

Pooja was not hearing Kabir's words.

Due to close proximity between them Pooja was becoming weak.She closed her eyes.

Suddenly Kabir saw her closed eyes.He kept staring at her.He moved away from her realizing that he was standing close to her.She opened her eyes.Without facing him she tried to climb the stool.

Kabir:So again you want to climb up and fall.So that I can catch you.What a drama!

Pooja:Stop it.Why should I do drama to make you catch me?

Kabir:Because you like me catching you.

Pooja:Never.I don't even like seeing you.It's you who is desperate to catch me.

Kabir:I am not dying to catch you.I caught you,so that you won't fall and break your bones.I adore Ashok uncle and Anu aunty.If something happens to you,they will become upset.That's why I wanted to save you.

Pooja looked at him emotionally.

Pooja:Whatever I have to take a book from the top and it's necessary for me.

Kabir:Wait..I will take that book for you.

He took the book and gave it to her.

Kabir:Say thanks.

Pooja:Why should I say thanks to you?I won't say thanks.

Kabir:You have to say thanks to me Pooja.Because we avoid saying thanks to a person if that person is our friend.I am not your friend.So you should thank me.Right?

Pooja:Ok..thanks.

Kabir:This 'thanks' sounds fake.But it's ok.I can't expect anything else from you.

Ruhaan came in.

Pooja smiled:Ruhaan!

Ruhaan:Kabir..you are here?You said you are going to the washroom.Right?

Kabir:Ya.But then..

Pooja:He came here to fight with me Ruhaan.

Kabir:No.I came here to save her from falling.

Pooja:But...

Ruhaan:Stop arguing guys.Pooja..are you busy?

Pooja:Need to prepare for the presentation.But now I want rest.

Ruhaan:Then come.Mumma sent some home made chocolates for you.

Ruhaan gave her the chocolates.Pooja was surprised.

Pooja:Wow...Thank you so much Ruhaan..

She hugged him from the side.

She started eating chocolates like crazy.Kabir smiled seeing that.

He thought:She looks so cute.

Pooja shared the chocolate with Ruhaan also.

Pooja:Suman aunty's chocolates are yummy.

Kabir thought:Ruhaan and Pooja's friendship is so beautiful.Why Pooja and I did not become friends?

Omkara and Gauri went for a party.Omkara introduced Gauri as his wife to others.

A colleague of Omkara said:Mrs.Omkara Singh Oberoi looks very pretty.

Gauri smiled:Thank you.

Omkara could'nt tolerate his colleague looking at Gauri.

Colleague:Omkara..you are lucky to get a pretty wife.

Omkara controlled his anger.

After reaching home Omkara started breaking things.Gauri was stunned to see his behaviour.

Om:When that person admired your beauty you were blushing.Why?

Gauri:No Omkaraji.I just said thanks to him.

Om:No.I saw your facial expression.You were blushing.Tell me.Do you know him?Do you have affair with him?

Gauri was shattered.Tears formed in her eyes.

Gauri:What are you saying Omkaraji?I am seeing him for the first time.

Om:May be.But you were trying to seduce him with your beauty.That's why he praised your beauty.

Gauri cried:No Omkaraji.I never did that.

Om:No..you were trying to attract him.But why did you other men Gauri?What does he have what I don't have?

Gauri was crying:No..believe me Omkaraji.

Om raised his voice slapping her:Stop lying you cheater.

He started beating her.She was crying a lot.

After a week...

Kabir went to Delhi for his business project.

He went to a mall.There he bumped into a girl.

Kabir:I am sorry.

She looked at his face:It's ok.

He could not believe his eyes.

He said in his mind:Pooja!How come she is here?

It was none other than Gauri.

Kabir:How come you are here?

Gauri was confused:What do you mean?I did'nt understand.

Omkara who came from the other side saw Gauri talking to Kabir and fumed with anger.

Om:How dare she flirt with a man when I am around her?

Kabir to Gauri:I mean how come you are in Delhi?You also have any business commitment here?

Gauri:Business?I think you mistook me for another person.I have no idea about business.I stay in Delhi only.This is my place.

Kabir:What nonsense are you saying?

Omkara went near them and grabbed her hand:Come with me Gauri.

He dragged her away.Kabir was shocked to hear Om calling her Gauri.

Kabir:Gauri?Is'nt she Pooja's lost sister whom she is searching for?It means Gauri is here.Oh my God!What a surprise!Who is that person?

Kabir took the phone and clicked a picture of Om-Gauri zooming the screen.

Kabir:I need to collect information about this person and find out how Gauri is connected to him.Then I will inform Pooja.Ashok uncle,Anu aunty and Pooja are craving to see Gauri.Now they will be so happy.

Kabir saw Om-Gauri getting inside the car and going away.Kabir followed their car without their knowledge.Om-Gauri got inside the house.Kabir looked at it from a distance.

Reading the name board Kabir said:So this is Oberoi Mansion.I will find out who all stay there with Gauri.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Kabir just likes to fight with Puja. Good he ran into Gauri so they can help her.

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Gauri kept flowers for Omkara but he got allergic n tortured Gauri 😫

Kabir saving Pooja and then throwing her 😂

Ruhaan and Pooja scene was cute

Kabir thinking that why is he not friends with Pooja was striking

Omkara beating Gauri because she got praised by his colleague was painful

Kabir meeting Gauri misunderstanding her as Pooja was surprising

Then Omkara took her away.. Waiting for next

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Dynamic update! well written!

thanks for the pm

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