Taarey Short Story - Khamma Ghani [Completed and Migrated]

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DHER SAARA PYAAR TO SHWETA FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL BANNERsmiley27smiley27

Girllll, you're killing it!!!

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THIS STORY HAS BEEN MIGRATED, PLEASE READ IT IN THE NEW FANFICTIONS FORUM. FOLLOW THIS LINK TO SEE THE EXTRA CHAPTER ADDED THERE.

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/8312


Prologue

(Music in background is the song Khamma Ghani from Happy Ending)

https://youtu.be/hCjNsJXyfyE

He sat there contemplating his mistakes. He'd made many of them, he was only human. Not all of them were unintended though, some were impulsive decisions that he knew stemmed out of immaturity.

Whimsical, temperamental, inconsistent, he had been it all, and at the worst possible moments and he could see the results now. He sat there like a criminal, hoping for redemption, begging for fate to have mercy. Clueless as to what else he could do as his path to get her love itself had brought him here, to this point where he was without her.

He called out to his love in pain and somewhere within, he really hoped this telepathic conversation was successful and that she would hear him and return.

It had been so long since their breakup, and her voice in his head was starting to fade. He still could hear her say that she didn't want to be with him though, and he still remembers her walking away. He respected her words. He knew after all that he was at fault and he was paying for his deeds. He didn't know how he would ever be able to convey to her how guilty, how regretful, how much in pain he was.

It was her wish to stay away. This was what she wanted and he accepts it. He had to let her go and he understood this but his heart, who was going to explain it to his emotional fool of a heart?

He didn't know if she was his medicine or his pain as reliving his multiple memories with her gave him both pleasure and anguish. Those moments with her were still golden for him, and he wanted to ask her if she too remembered them like him, whether she too thought of them like he did.

Clueless, that's all he is now that his love itself had taken him down this route, this inexplicable, ineffable route that made him feel incomplete.

He wished and he wished, he continually wished for her to come back, to stop punishing him like this. He could only wish after all, nothing about this relationship was in his control anymore..


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Hi Guys! Mai finally ek short story likhne jitna confidence juta chuki hu! Welcome to Khamma Ghani. This story is called that because I love the song and it's lyrics, because this prologue is inspired by its lyrics and because Khamma Ghani means live long and what we want most for Taarey is that their love story lives long.. too cheesy na? ok the name may changešŸ˜›

This story starts a week after Taani's engagement, will be pretty intense in the beginning as they have quite some knots to solve! Do tell me what y'all think of itā¤ļø

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Index:-

Prologue - The post above.

Chapter 1- Teri Hasi, Meri Khushi (Pg 2)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150745270?tid=5101818

Chapter 2 - Behla Fusla Ke Khud Ko Naseehatein Karu.. Jhoothi Moothi, Tooti Footi.. (Pg 4)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150784817?tid=5101818

Chapter 3 - Naseehatein Naa Maani, Apni bune Kahaani.. (Pg 6)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150829000?tid=5101818

Chapter 4 - Ishq mehenga pade, phir bhi sauda kare.. (Pg 8)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150895306?tid=5101818

Chapter 5 - Wo.. jo lavz the bandhe hue labon pe, khul gaye.. (Pg 10)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150947807?tid=5101818

Chapter 6 - Tune hi toh samjha mujhe, jo na keh saka, suna tune.. (Pg 12)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151012418?tid=5101818

Chapter 7 - Palkein Chamakne Lagi Hai, Ab Khwaab Kaise Chupaaye! (Pg 16)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151063102?tid=5101818

Chapter 8 - Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo.. (pg 17)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151228776?tid=5101818

Chapter 9 a - Bahaane Se Tere Lab Chu Lunga, Na Hoke Bhi Hojaunga.. (pg 19)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151362674

Chapter 9 b - Dooriyan Jitni Ho Hojaane De, Faasle Na Rahe.. (pg 21)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151668287

Edited by Trisha49 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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The emotions that you penned down reminded me of the Tum hi ho sequence. Each and every word dripped of pain!

Aur phir end mein pata chala ki yeh engagement ke baad wala hai. Well needless to say that engagement will break, if not now but sometime in the future! Iā€™m really hoping to see Rey handling his emotions maturely where he is heartbroken due to her engagement but also accepts it as a punishment or just for her sake. I donā€™t know what you have in mind but this angle would be greatā¤ļø

She is his medicine and his pain. And he is a sucker for her! (Sorry that line reminded me of the song suckeršŸ¤Ŗ)

Do continue soon. Iā€™m waitingšŸ˜³

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Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

The emotions that you penned down reminded me of the Tum hi ho sequence. Each and every word dripped of pain!

Aur phir end mein pata chala ki yeh engagement ke baad wala hai. Well needless to say that engagement will break, if not now but sometime in the future! Iā€™m really hoping to see Rey handling his emotions maturely where he is heartbroken due to her engagement but also accepts it as a punishment or just for her sake. I donā€™t know what you have in mind but this angle would be greatā¤ļø

She is his medicine and his pain. And he is a sucker for her! (Sorry that line reminded me of the song suckeršŸ¤Ŗ)

Do continue soon. Iā€™m waitingšŸ˜³

Haha thanks

Hope you like the track ahead!

Well now I've got sucker stuck in my mind, thanksšŸ¤Ŗbrb gonna dance

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice story

Love it

Thanks for pm

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WowwwwwwwšŸ˜‰ there are so many new taarey stories coming up and I m liking all of themšŸ˜ƒ. living TAAREY once agai ā¤ļø.

Well the story seems to be very interesting and definately looking forward to read it .

Also please give this SSa name pleaseā˜ŗļø.

Waiting for many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many more update to comeā˜ŗļø

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: dakshumhatre

Nice story

Love it

Thanks for pm

Glad you liked it!

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Originally posted by: Taanirey2101

WowwwwwwwšŸ˜‰ there are so many new taarey stories coming up and I m liking all of themšŸ˜ƒ. living TAAREY once agai ā¤ļø.

Well the story seems to be very interesting and definately looking forward to read it .

Also please give this SSa name pleaseā˜ŗļø.

Waiting for many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many and many more update to comeā˜ŗļø

Hahaha will definitely think of a name!

Thank-youā¤ļø

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice start.. Looking forward to read more..

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Originally posted by: Trisha49

DHER SAARA PYAAR TO SHWETA FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL BANNERsmiley27smiley27

Girllll, you're killing it!!!


You're most welcome luv!šŸ˜³

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