loved the update where she tease him about him being human...
his cell filled with god pics and songs
nice update dhwani and nice pics
loved the update where she tease him about him being human...
his cell filled with god pics and songs
Welcome Dhwani...and what I can't say in my comment is...yeah there is no such ritual like eating alone after engagement but doing so Dhwani you give me a chance to behold the Maya of Mahamaya.ππ Well She's not so demure Gauri no while around Shankar...so that's her natural behaviour.Originally posted by: DhwaniNair
Thank you Rimi for this :)
Originally posted by: DhwaniNair
"Gauri, really time is over. Papa sent me here"
read this part once more.just awesome.
how??
Let me say...
Step by step.
Round table. Gauri and Shankar seated in manner of seeing eachother. But they don't looked at their face.
The scene opened.
Silence!!!
So are the audience aka readers.π
Time passing...
Like a flowing stream...
Atlast Gauri started to eat. Then Shankar too. Without looking eachother. They finished their food. Again a waiting... Who will be wash first??? This time tooo Gauri did it and came back to her chair and sat. Now its turn for Shankar. He also washed his hands. But after it he tried to get out of the room.
How gentleman like...π he waited for the Lady to start first...Knight with shining armour.
"Why are you came here?? For eating??" Gauri asked with her sweet anger. "In this ritual, the couple should eat and talk together for sometime. So you can't go out now. They will come to call us at proper time. YOU CAN SIT DOWN NOW"
and here starts the climax...first move, ever playful Gauri is angry...and is berating her Shankar...like our own GauriShankar.π
Shankar sat on his chair without looking at Gauri, took mobile and started to use it. Gauri looking at him. She is in angry mode. He slightly raised his head, just looked at her and suddenly looked at his mobile. Anyway he found that she is still looking at him with anger.
Just like our own beguile innocent one...BholeShankar...πhe sees his Gauri in anger...π³. awesome second step.
"Do you came here for playing Mobile games?? Are you a kid?? Why are you behaving like this?? I never seen a man like you in my life!! You are horrible, terrible!!"
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This is ...Gauri...with her full form...asking or rather demanding "Have you decided to stay like this Bhole through out your life??"ππ³
Shankar looked at her with same serious mode... Gauri continued "Why are you staring at me?? What do you think about me?? I am not a fool and a coward. Ok? And what do you think about yourself? Intelligent na? No..no.. its a misunderstanding.. you don't know the mind of an woman. So you are not intelligent..."
And bam...it burst out.πFantastically expressed by Gauri..."You are Intelligent?"(Of course he isπ.) No you are not...you don't know woman's mind or rather heart.(pointπβοΈ)" Gauri could be a great advocate.ππ
"Ohhh... What should I give you for shut your mouth until they comes. You can ask me anything with me except my phone number. Mmm.. Ask what do you want"
And here comes a reply from our Shankar...the benevolent one. "Man chaha var mango"(Ask your desired boon err groom in this care. Var the word in sanskrit, hindi and bengali holds to meaning...1. boon which we gotta accept and 2. groom that too we gotta accept...
Gauri said in angry mode "LOVE!Your Love!!... Give me!"
ANd she askedπjust like the stories say...
She smiled. ππ³
Shankar looks stunned. He took his mobile again. Tried to control his smile.
SO the stone expression does express and sport smile. Though tries to control it.π
Our Angry young woman couldn't controll her hands. She is succeeded in getting the mobile from him. He is helpless. Shankar: "What is this?? I am asking the same question... Are you a kid??"
"Yes" π
No doubt...all her insta pics scream to declare that.
"Then play with kids. Not with me" π
Well for that you have to take some initiatives too no??π πotherwise how could I play with our kids??
Gauri looking at his phone "Ohm..! Mm.. you are a great devotee... This mobile is filled with the pics of Gods. Oh... Only devotional songs!!! Mm..in a sense, it is good. But you should concentrate on wordly affairs too.""Excuse me! I like music, movies, sports,etc. I am a humanbeing""Oh my God! Are you sure??ππThen... Then give me your love π³..."
And here once again...our groom who keeps images of God may be able to give his love and mobile along with his everything to his mortal goddess...i.e. his bride.(as at marriage alter...after bride and groom take the vows, they both transform into Vishnu-Laxmi of their household...the place with their care and affection could turn into Vaikunth.)
"Time is over". Chandramouli entered with a smile. "Sorry for the interruptuon. But Time is over" π
"What is this Jiju!!! π‘Why are you disturbing ". [DIV]
"Ok, Mouli bhaiya, then I am going". Gauri's baby face filled with anger and sadness. "Lets go Bhaiyya". Mouli smiled "ok".
"Hey 1 minute" Gauri stopped them.
"Mr. Shankar, you are looking so handsome in this coat".She smiled. Shankar shocked and embarrassed. Mouli too smiled with a playful look.
"Okay... Okay... Gauri don't play with your fiancee. He will suffer to hide his feelings.." π "What?? No need of hide my feelings!" Shankar said. Poor man. He is very hardly trying to hold his serious look.
"Ok Shankar. Let us go now. Otherwise she will come up with the next compliment." They went out.
Gauri lauged and think..'my dear Shankar, You will fail in this competiton. I will win you with my weapon of love' π
Ohh...I am looking forward to it...
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