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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
nice update dhwani and nice pics
loved the update where she tease him about him being human...
his cell filled with god pics and songs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: foram.

nice update dhwani and nice pics
loved the update where she tease him about him being human...
his cell filled with god pics and songs


Yes about that...why God's picture why not Goddess's picture??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Thank you Rimi and foru...

Foru... that "human" naturally came. me too like it. he he ;)
Rimi... I wil giv u answer one by one in my next post...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
First of all, I think u r beautiful Rimi. i felt it from your words ;)

Sweet anger is what that only comes between true lovers (my definition) πŸ˜ƒ

That ritual is not exist in Kerala. I dont knw if it exists anywhere or not. It's Completely MY IMAGINATION to make them together alone for sometime... ❀️

Gods... It refers to goddess also. I just mean in his mobile, she found only religious aspects.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dhwani
Brilliant update loved it 😊
Gauri's trying hard not to think abt Shankar 😳.😊
Such a sweet lie how can she not. He is always in her thoughts and mind. I can see this happening.
What is sweet revenge😳.
Shankar phone is filled with pics of God's. Why when it should be filled with Gauri's pics.😳.
And why is he behaving like Mahadev. He should say he loves Gauri'.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you Sadhana... Sam, waiting for ur comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Dhwani you and Sadhanadi...today make me felt thunderstruck...as if Sun and Moon both are rounding me. Both of You has described Mouni so beautifully for Mohit it churns these thoughts in me. So here is my Mind dedicating something for your heroines Gauri (Dhwani) and Maheshi(Sadhanadi) through the eyes of their heroes Shankar( what a coincident both of you named your hero Shankar).πŸ˜†
What is the Beauty!
Where can it lie?
Over you...
O Enchantress!
or in beholder's eyes?
I am nothing
but a poor soul.
All my life am craving.
Someday I would be fortunate enough,
Someone would be compassionate enough,
Who would choose to live with me and die.
I never thought I could get you in my life.
O Enchantress!
You are so beautiful that lights my my life.
All your words, your moves and stares,
Your sweet angry aims at me and burning glares,
All are so beautiful that it lights my life.
What ever you do,
Creates a new art,
Yours hasty scribbles
Seems fine arts.
You talk and giggle
Pours honeysweet music in ear,
You are yourself the Lively Dancer here.

I only thank my stars.
To give me you as my Soul and Pole Star.
May you live a thousands of years...
Along with you,
O Enchantress...My Dear.
I could walk walk beside You,
Hand in hand forever.

Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Thank you Rimi for this :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

Thank you Rimi for this :)

Welcome Dhwani...and what I can't say in my comment is...yeah there is no such ritual like eating alone after engagement but doing so Dhwani you give me a chance to behold the Maya of Mahamaya.πŸ˜†πŸ˜› Well She's not so demure Gauri no while around Shankar...so that's her natural behaviour.
And while Shankar was alone with Gauri and she was pestering Shankar to speak...and Shankar asked what she wanted to not talk..she demanded his love...that was the unique and pique point.πŸ‘β˜ΊοΈI wish Shankar could give her that without restraint...capturing her in his arm, seals his lips with her and drinks the nectar from there.😲Pardon me...I am really that charged.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair




read this part once more.just awesome.
how??
Let me say...
Step by step.

Round table. Gauri and Shankar seated in manner of seeing eachother. But they don't looked at their face.
The scene opened.
Silence!!!
So are the audience aka readers.πŸ˜›
Time passing...
Like a flowing stream...
Atlast Gauri started to eat. Then Shankar too. Without looking eachother. They finished their food. Again a waiting... Who will be wash first??? This time tooo Gauri did it and came back to her chair and sat. Now its turn for Shankar. He also washed his hands. But after it he tried to get out of the room.
How gentleman like...πŸ˜‰ he waited for the Lady to start first...Knight with shining armour.
"Why are you came here?? For eating??" Gauri asked with her sweet anger. "In this ritual, the couple should eat and talk together for sometime. So you can't go out now. They will come to call us at proper time. YOU CAN SIT DOWN NOW"
and here starts the climax...first move, ever playful Gauri is angry...and is berating her Shankar...like our own GauriShankar.πŸ˜†
Shankar sat on his chair without looking at Gauri, took mobile and started to use it. Gauri looking at him. She is in angry mode. He slightly raised his head, just looked at her and suddenly looked at his mobile. Anyway he found that she is still looking at him with anger.
Just like our own beguile innocent one...BholeShankar...πŸ˜†he sees his Gauri in anger...😳. awesome second step.
"Do you came here for playing Mobile games?? Are you a kid?? Why are you behaving like this?? I never seen a man like you in my life!! You are horrible, terrible!!"
😑
This is ...Gauri...with her full form...asking or rather demanding "Have you decided to stay like this Bhole through out your life??"πŸ˜†πŸ˜³
Shankar looked at her with same serious mode... Gauri continued "Why are you staring at me?? What do you think about me?? I am not a fool and a coward. Ok? And what do you think about yourself? Intelligent na? No..no.. its a misunderstanding.. you don't know the mind of an woman. So you are not intelligent..."
And bam...it burst out.πŸ˜†Fantastically expressed by Gauri..."You are Intelligent?"(Of course he isπŸ˜ƒ.) No you are not...you don't know woman's mind or rather heart.(pointπŸ‘β­οΈ)" Gauri could be a great advocate.πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
"Ohhh... What should I give you for shut your mouth until they comes. You can ask me anything with me except my phone number. Mmm.. Ask what do you want"
And here comes a reply from our Shankar...the benevolent one. "Man chaha var mango"(Ask your desired boon err groom in this care. Var the word in sanskrit, hindi and bengali holds to meaning...1. boon which we gotta accept and 2. groom that too we gotta accept...
Gauri said in angry mode "LOVE!Your Love!!... Give me!"
ANd she askedπŸ˜›just like the stories say...

She smiled. 😊😳

Shankar looks stunned. He took his mobile again. Tried to control his smile.
SO the stone expression does express and sport smile. Though tries to control it.πŸ˜†
Our Angry young woman couldn't controll her hands. She is succeeded in getting the mobile from him. He is helpless. Shankar: "What is this?? I am asking the same question... Are you a kid??"

"Yes" πŸ˜‰
No doubt...all her insta pics scream to declare that.

"Then play with kids. Not with me" πŸ˜•
Well for that you have to take some initiatives too no??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†otherwise how could I play with our kids??


Gauri looking at his phone "Ohm..! Mm.. you are a great devotee... This mobile is filled with the pics of Gods. Oh... Only devotional songs!!! Mm..in a sense, it is good. But you should concentrate on wordly affairs too.""Excuse me! I like music, movies, sports,etc. I am a humanbeing""Oh my God! Are you sure??πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰Then... Then give me your love 😳..."

And here once again...our groom who keeps images of God may be able to give his love and mobile along with his everything to his mortal goddess...i.e. his bride.(as at marriage alter...after bride and groom take the vows, they both transform into Vishnu-Laxmi of their household...the place with their care and affection could turn into Vaikunth.)
"Time is over". Chandramouli entered with a smile. "Sorry for the interruptuon. But Time is over" πŸ˜›

"What is this Jiju!!! 😑Why are you disturbing ". [DIV]
"Gauri, really time is over. Papa sent me here"

"Ok, Mouli bhaiya, then I am going". Gauri's baby face filled with anger and sadness. "Lets go Bhaiyya". Mouli smiled "ok".

"Hey 1 minute" Gauri stopped them.
"Mr. Shankar, you are looking so handsome in this coat".She smiled. Shankar shocked and embarrassed. Mouli too smiled with a playful look.

"Okay... Okay... Gauri don't play with your fiancee. He will suffer to hide his feelings.." πŸ˜‰ "What?? No need of hide my feelings!" Shankar said. Poor man. He is very hardly trying to hold his serious look.
"Ok Shankar. Let us go now. Otherwise she will come up with the next compliment." They went out.
Gauri lauged and think..'my dear Shankar, You will fail in this competiton. I will win you with my weapon of love' 😊
Ohh...I am looking forward to it...


waiting eagerly for your next updates.
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