Originally posted by: DhwaniNair
PART III
HeyDhwani i am back.
Gauri is sleepless now... Speechless now...She is in dreamy world... Her mind whispers only one name "Shankar.. Shankar.."
Ganga asked who is this Shankar!!
Gauri skipped the topic "where is papa?"
Ganga "He went outside for meet someone. Hey Gauri..Shankar.. that priest... Am i right??"
Gauri "No" smiled and run... Ganga chased her playfully.
How Sweetπonly Ganga here and teased her, Gauri called Papa...what if all Sati's sisters came teasing her?? would she hide behind SHankar?
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Naksh entered Martial Arts Coaching Centre of the village. He is impressed with its appearance. He enquired about Shankar, the owner and teacher of the centre. He found that Shankar is well educated and very intelligent. Naksh became happy and saw a son-in-law in Shankar. He is not from aristocratic family. But infront of his knowledge and talent, All other minuses are faded away from Naksh's eyes.
Really Dr. Patel?? at least he is different form Daksh. He was so blind that never saw Shiva in Shiva.π€’btw Prabhu owns and teaches Martial arts?? Make him a professor in some subject as well...πbut yeah talented and intelligent groom like him...so desirable.
Naksh met Shankar there and proposed his idea of making him, his son-in-law. It was not a typical proposal. It was really an order! Shankar remained silent in his serious look. Naksh started to say about his wealth and fame. He also mentioned Shankar's family's status below his status. And he made a small favour to his "future" son-in-law that giving money for reestablishing the coaching centre into national level & then inter national. He informed he also did the financial help for his first son-in-law Chandramouly for starting a company because he is also talented.
Hmm...again Daksh is back. I understand his state...
Shankar breaks the silence. "Actually what you want? A son-in-law with talent or a suitable husband for your daughter" Naksh wondered both are same na?! A marriage not only need the blessings of parents but also the consent of man and woman. So Shankar said "I don't know about your daughter's heart, but i know my heart which is telling me to say you NO! I dont know whether I can be a suitabIe husband for your daughter or not, but I know I wont be a son-in-law as u wish. I am not a puppet. So sorry.. please"
And here the rejection...πreminded me the famous dialogue, "Iss tarha mujhe bibash kar dene se tumhare liye mere bhavnayein badal nahin jayegi!( compelling and pursuing me won't get you th eplace in my heart)said Shiva, "Aur kisiko prem na karne ke liye bibash karna?"(ANd what you called to pursue to not love osmeone?)
But here Daksh aka Naksh is taking it.
Naksh smiled "I like this attittude. Brave man! A perfect man! Yes... You are my son-in-law" Shankar smiled and nodded his head smoothly which denotes his objection again...
haan!! which clay is in him?πcouldnt take no as an answer!π‘
Naksh left the placeq with a great determination.
Naksh went to Shankar's father, Swami and said about the proposal and his son's rejection. Swami wondered and at the same time shocked. He knows Naksh well. If this marriage never happens, then Naksh will not let his son to lead a happy life. His son needs a good wife. He remembered Naksh's father's comment on goodness of Gauri. So Swami conveyed his happiness on the proposal. He know his son will obey him. Thus they fixed marriage of Gauri and Shankar.
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Hmm...perosnally I think force someone to marry is a crime. I know GauriShankar are destined to be together. bUt forcing them should do only bad for Naksh's daughter.
Shankar shocked on Swami's decision. " Why dont you reveal my identity to Naksh, pa? He is trying to bribe me which I will not allow. All creates problems in future." Swami said "You are my son. my own. I know reality is not that. I know Naksh once tried to kill you,my son. I dont the reason of his act. I saw his cruel act with my eyes. I rescued you and love you as my own son. You came to me as my inspiration to live, from the same river where my wife and son drowned once. You are my son. But you are Dev,who belong to Naksh family. you must be the one of them." He informed his anxieties on what Naksh do if he wouldnt accept the proposal. He also showed his faith in Shankar's courage to protest him. But Swami want him a peaceful life as his own son Shankar. He requested to accept this proposal.
As an obedient son, Shankar agreed.
Dev Shankar...I am happy that he agreed.
Gauri forgot herself in the joy while Shankar in meditation anxious about the aftereffects of this marriage.
Oh I guess why his meditation breaks! Must see Gauri!π
WOnderful Dhwani...so entertaining.
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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair
PART IV
Restless Gauri wish to meet Shankar. She listened the experience of premarriage days of her friends. They were always busy in phone by talking or messaging to their fiancee. A dreamy girl, Gauri too wishing it. She asked his number to her dear father. Naksh smiled "Oh my dear... I don't have his number. You are a grown up lady now. But still you asking me like my cute little girl who want a teddy" Gauri smiled. Naksh continued "It is not good to talk with a fiancee before marriage. That is not our culture" Gauri: "But my friends..." Naksh "You are Naksh's daughter! So don't do such things. I just hate that type of modernism. Do you getting my dear?" Gauri nodded her head with sad face. "Gauri, You should be more mature. I think your Shankar likes bold girls" YOUR SHANKAR! It gave a lovely electric shock to her! Her face restored its charm... But still her mind saying... "How can I get his number!"
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DO clarify Dhwani...Naksh first indulges and teases Gauri as cute little girl demanding Teddyπ³?well he is Teddy...a very big, comforting, loving and strong one.βΊοΈ
Then admonishes saying she would not talk SHankar as she is Naksh's daughterππ
ANd then he encourages saying, "Your Shankar loves bold girls??"π²π€ππ²βοΈπ€£βΊοΈfor this advice I am forgiving him ...π³
Naksh decided to go to Mumbai for some paper works to launch a multi speciality hospital in his own village as a branch of hospital in Mumbai owned by him. He informed Sruthi, his wife, that they can proceed to Gauri's engagement ceremony after it.
...He owned hospitals!!π²πgreat...πI wish Gauri or Shankar someone were doctor!β€οΈ
The next morning Gauri woke up early which surprised Sruthi and Ganga. She told them that she want to go to temple alone! Sruthi said it is impossible. "Please mumma, I will return soon...pleasee" Atlast Sruthi agreed. She requested them to help her to wear saree. Saree!!! Gauri going to wear!!! O my god!!!
They fulfilled her wish. Thus first time very tradionally she went to the temple.
Aha Mari Mari/chalite chalite/bajao kankan/porone nilambari.
(O Lady, I am dying to see you the way you move and make those noise with your bangles wearing a blue, well here red-white saree.)
Is this enough or you want more Sona??π³
The temple filled with prayers. But filled with girls of her age who came there traditionally. "What is this!! All are came here like me!! Why!! Oh my God!! All they came to get my Shankar"
"Yeah beti"..
"What!!!" Gauri turned and saw Swami. Suddenly she changed her anxious face and tried to smile. "Namaskar Swamiji.." "Namaskar.. Do you want me to ask anything??"
"No...No... But actually are they came to get My... no no I mean came to get Shankar??"
Swami smiled "yeah.. they are here to get their Shankar. Their Mahadev.. to get a suitable husband like lord Shiva. Today is Monday. Don't you heard about Somavrath??"
"Oh thats one...! I thought... Okay Swami see you later. Now I am going to see the god...anddd.. who is doing puja today??"
Swami laughed "its my son"
Gauri smiled...
Ohmm... Namahh... Shivayaa..
The room of idol is closed. The ringing of bell can hear.. Gauri closed her eyes like all devotees.
Its a pleasant feeling... She listend the chants..bells... Opening sound of door... Har Har Mahadev... She opened her eyes and saw her Shankar.. "Har Har Mahadev" She chanted with other girls. While others looking at Shiva's idol, she looked at Shankar only.
If AdiShakti behaves as woman, then Gauri is woman...so of course she beholds her Shankar.πI like to see her interacting with some you know devotees(girls) after marriage.π³
He is walking towards them with 'karpoora' flame! He is in the white dhoti and white shawl that hide the majority of his 'upanayanam' thread and also have rudraksh. He is giving prasadam.
OW!!! I like to see him like that...but of course with short hair and without the wigs and false stuffs.
She stood like a statue while All others
doing 'pranam' to flame and getting prasadam.
Shankar reached at Gauri. She looked at him without utter anyword. An eye lock between romantic passionate eyes and serious looking, but divine eyes.
"Give your hand" Gauri shocked in that bold voice and stretched her hand to him. Look like she is going to give him handshake. Others laughed at this moment. She wondered innocently. "Show me your hand to taking prasadam" She did so. He walked away. Her eyes followed him and then her body too.
There was a dialogue too, "Pagalon ke bhanti main unka sangeet...na maan na maryada"
(I ran towards his voice like a crazy without remembering my duty as Dakshayani. I couldn't stop as I was drawn by him. It is true I don't want to stop.)
Thanks for portraying this too.
Both reached in front of a room. He entered and turned to close the door. He saw her. "Why are you here?? This is priest's dressing room. Who told you to come here?"
"Sorry... But I came to see you. See you only. I wish to talk with you. Atleast I need your phone number."
"For what?? This is not Mumbai. People will assume something if you roaming around me like this"
Gauri started to talk energetically... "No problem because our marriage is already fixed..."
"Get out from here!" She terrified.
"But..."
"Get out!!!" Gauri shocked. He closed the door. Tears came from her eyes...
Energetic, Sati returned as dejected after scolding from Shiva.
Same to GauriShankar...great portrayal again.
Gauri moved from there and found Swami. "Beti, why are you looking so sad??" "Nothing Swamiji"
"Gauri, Please call me babuji or pa"
"But your son wont allow me to do so :( You forced him to accept the marriage proposal na?Swamiji, forceful marriage wont give him happiness. So for his happiness, we should cancel this marriage."
He remained silent.
Go with Pa Gauri...πand SHankar won't mind I know.π³
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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair
PartV
Gauri reached home and changed the dress. Look at mirror. What is her problem! Nothing! She is really beautiful.
wow Beautiful woman like Gauri thinks like that?πWonder how ugly woman like me think??πππ
But typical Parvati syndrome...πI love it. Muuuaaahπ€okay apart form analysis...Gauri is the most beautiful woman...π³
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Then What is this Shankar's problem!!!! She tried to deviate her mind. She sat on the bed with angry face. "I will never think about him."
Liar...π
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"Oh my god! I said Swamiji to stop marriage!!!" She got up and started to walk to and fro. "What I will do now!!!" Door opened. It is Ganga. "Hey papa informed Mumma that your engagement will be on next sunday. We informed this Swamiji too. He is also agreed."
Gauri smiled. Problem solved... :)
No... Problem is not solved. "I will teach a lesson to Shankar with my syllabus of love" she murmered..
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Of course Mate...you will teach him some lessons and he will teach you! In short I am looking forwardπ
Engagement day... :)
Gauri after that incident do not try to see Shankar yet now. It is her sweet revenge. He definitely think about her all these days... Gauri is thinking like that. Now she don't like Shankar! Then why she is trying to look more beautiful in front of him!!! Why always thinking about him!!! Her mouth is saying this. But Gauri's heart know what is in her mind.. :)
Beautiful...</div>"They reached, Gauri" Ganga's words raised her to the heaven.
Swami and Shankar entered into the home of Naksh in a simple costume with some priests and their families. Naksh a bit upset. His relatives joked at Shankar's economical status secretly.
Umm...thank God my Bhole Prabhu didn't arrive smearing ash all over him.
Chandramouli, the husband of Ganga, came to Shankar. He asked him to wear coat. But Shankar refused. "Hey.. You are going to become my brother now. And I am your Bada bhaiya. So you should wear the coat that I am going to gifted you"... Mouli forced Shankar to do so. Atlast he agreed.
Coat?? He wore shirt-pant?? I thought Dhoti-stole...π³
Naksh made Shankar sit on the engagement mandap and called Gauri. She came with her mom, sister and friends. All are fainted in the beauty of her. Naksh feel proud. She sat near Shankar and do not tried to look at him. Shankar also ignored her without looking at that direction. Gauri's heart is beating and mind is murmering whether he looked at her or not. She couldn't control her face which automatically turned to the Shankar who sitting her nearby. Yeah... He is not looking at her. Her face is filled with sweet anger and turned her face.
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Dhwani...tell me what is sweet anger???π
Oww and I can imagine this...every time...she's just irresisstable and he's outrageous.
Time for the engagement.[/DIV]Swamiji announced the date and muhrut of Gaurishankara vivah. It is fixed on a second monday after four months. Naksh asked "why this delay?" Swamiji "Very strange to find onething. In the kundali of both Shankar and Gauri there is only one vivah muhrut!!! They can't marry anyone or eachother on any other day of their life. That means It is necessary to get them married on the same day. Otherwise they will remained unmarried always""Gauri, really time is over. Papa sent me here"
Naksh smiled and said ok. There is nothing to worry. He know that this marriage is fixed by him. So that it will never break.
Swamiji gave ring to Shankar. He turned and look at her hands and her fingers only. They exchanged the ring eachother without looking eachother. Swamiji noticed it.
wow...auspicious moments and all...love the way you explain the mystery. But he refused to see at her eyes during engagement???π‘π‘π‘π‘
Typical Shiva...Don't make cry my Sati again.π
"Come on ladies and gentle men. The food is ready for you". Naksh informed.
Naksh seated Gauri and Shankar together and alone in a room for having food. Its their ritual which is actually hate by Naksh.
Naksh hated the ritual but I liked it...πbtw IS this ritual from Kerala???
Round table. Gauri and Shankar seated in manner of seeing eachother. But they don't looked at their face.
Silence!!!
Time passing...
Atlast Gauri started to eat. Then Shankar too. Without looking eachother. They finished their food. Again a waiting... Who will be wash first??? This time tooo Gauri did it and came back to her chair and sat. Now its turn for Shankar. He also washed his hands. But after it he tried to get out of the room.
"Why are you came here?? For eating??" Gauri asked with her sweet anger. "In this ritual, the couple should eat and talk together for sometime. So you can't go out now. They will come to call us at proper time. YOU CAN SIT DOWN NOW"
Shankar sat on his chair without looking at Gauri, took mobile and started to use it. Gauri looking at him. She is in angry mode. He slightly raised his head, just looked at her and suddenly looked at his mobile. Anyway he found that she is still looking at him with anger.
"Do you came here for playing Mobile games?? Are you a kid?? Why are you behaving like this?? I never seen a man like you in my life!! You are horrible, terrible!!"
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Shankar looked at her with same serious mode... Gauri continued "Why are you staring at me?? What do you think about me?? I am not a fool and a coward. Ok? And what do you think about yourself? Intelligent na? No..no.. its a misunderstanding.. you don't know the mind of an woman. So you are not intelligent..."
"Ohhh... What should I give you for shut your mouth until they comes. You can ask me anything with me except my phone number. Mmm.. Ask what do you want"
Gauri said in angry mode "LOVE!Your Love!!... Give me!"
She smiled. ππ³
Shankar looks stunned. He took his mobile again. Tried to control his smile.
Our Angry young woman couldn't controll her hands. She is succeeded in getting the mobile from him. He is helpless. Shankar: "What is this?? I am asking the same question... Are you a kid??"
"Yes" π
"Then play with kids. Not with me" π
Gauri looking at his phone "Ohm..! Mm.. you are a great devotee... This mobile is filled with the pics of Gods. Oh... Only devotional songs!!! Mm..in a sense, it is good. But you should concentrate on wordly affairs too.""Excuse me! I like music, movies, sports,etc. I am a humanbeing""Oh my God! Are you sure??ππThen... Then give me your love π³...""Time is over". Chandramouli entered with a smile. "Sorry for the interruptuon. But Time is over" π
"What is this Jiju!!! π‘Why are you disturbing ". [DIV]
"Ok, Mouli bhaiya, then I am going". Gauri's baby face filled with anger and sadness. "Lets go Bhaiyya". Mouli smiled "ok".
"Hey 1 minute" Gauri stopped them.
"Mr. Shankar, you are looking so handsome in this coat".She smiled. Shankar shocked and embarrassed. Mouli too smiled with a playful look.
"Okay... Okay... Gauri don't play with your fiancee. He will suffer to hide his feelings.." π "What?? No need of hide my feelings!" Shankar said. Poor man. He is very hardly trying to hold his serious look.
"Ok Shankar. Let us go now. Otherwise she will come up with the next compliment." They went out.
Gauri lauged and think..'my dear Shankar, You will fail in this competiton. I will win you with my weapon of love' π
Finally some words...and that's too interrupted by Chandraπ‘...anyways if we talk about stubbornness and childish ways then both would get same number...π³0.πunless they make one.π Till then very intelligent and beautiful updates Dhwani...love it very much.
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