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Aishwarya Kommu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#471

Are!!! Such wonderful updates!
So sorry that I couldn't comment...so caught up with work here in u.s

I have like 48 unread PM's right now from 2 days 😭 oops😛

I promise my long comments will come back soon...But I'll tell you that it was a fantastic update!
Res for all the rest for now😃

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Khushboo Rajawat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#472

amagin n suprb updt..
loved it..

beautifully writtn

updt d next soon
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LiveYourDream

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Posted: 9 years ago

#473

Was traveling Navu so could not comment earlier

Drau's POV

What a powerful and poignant chapter

You captured her emotions so beautifully

The epic does not do justice to what she must have gone through but you certainly gave it a good shot... Great job👏

Edited by LiveYourDream - 9 years ago

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

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Posted: 9 years ago

#474

Arjun's POV

Another lovely piece of writing

Though I an not too happy with Arjun at this particular juncture of the story you have described this very well from his perspective

If he feels even one tenth the pain and humiliation that Drau went through he might redeem himself. I want him to really work hard and long to earn her forgiveness😡

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Sethu parvathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#475

navuuu...i just watched the mahabharata in front of my eyes...dats all what i can say!!! hats off dear👏

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sirivalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#476

Awesome update...

Loved it...

Very well written...especially arjun's pov...u r an amazing writer dear...

Edited by sirivalli.t - 9 years ago

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
Res !
Unres ! Read it before your pm 😉
Sorry could not answer to the previous chap so here relying to the both .

Draupadi view-
U did an excellent job here ! 👏👏
U totally did a justice to the character ! And loved how u described her situation and all her emotions brought out so well 👏👏
I just loved how u described how her heart ached and how the physical wounds were nothing compare to the mental wounds .
Just awesome ! But the chap that really touched my heart was Arjun PoV

I loved how u described his situation . We have read Draupadi view and even in Arjun's view but only said how he felt for following his brother's order never was described in so detail .
Everything was just amazing written ! Excellent 👏👏👏
I just love this line

" I yearned to have her in my arms, assure her that everything would be alright, "

And the way u described Krishna and Krishnaa relation with Parth .
Draupadi lost her child ? 🥱
Yeh Kya hua ? Itna badha Anarth !
Poor ArDi . But is this fact or fiction ? Anyways u gave an idea 😉

This line did an excellent job .

"My child. Our child. I had been so blinded by the teachings of my childhood that now my hands were painted with the blood of my own child. He had a right over everything, but my child, my child was not his, it was only ours"

Plus loved how u said that Draupadi knew he was there the whole time and the last line she said just to make him know how she feels .

Overall amazing Navika ! Loved the update ! One that brought tears to my eyes .

Love
Sam

Arre I missed you so much Sam! Hope you are fine now!😃

Thank you so much for such lovely and long comments!🤗

I am more than happy and ecstatic that you liked the Draupadi POV so much🥳

So glad that you liked the details about how Arjun felt about following Yudishtir's orders, it's just my perception since I have read deeply into both their POVs before this!

I am feeling so elated with your amazing response on the chapter Sam!

Thank you sooo muchhh!❤️

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

Amazing... never read anything like this from Arjun's POV..
supern yaar.. i am out of words!

@violet arjun at his best.. i like this human side of him
@green drau as one among us.,..
@red the queen. the one thing that makes her stand out from the ordinary woman crowd.. and a 10000 standing ovation to you writing dear.. you summed up drau's life.. 👏

Oh, Krishu di! It is such an honour to read such wonderful comments from you on this chapter! Really ecstatic!🤗

I wrote this POV because being such a huge fan of Draupadi and hence ArDi, I was always upset that how could Arjun remain silent about it but after researching so much, reading debates, books and POVs, I could somewhere understand that reason and form a perception about it, so I wanted the audience to read about his human side as well, where he was bound to remain silent.

Of course, even Draupadi was a woman first, so she would have that side to her wherein she would question her god as to why sh had to suffer so much!

And finally, Standing ovation?!?😲

Oh thank you trucks and loads di! This comment made my day!🤗

Coming from an author like you, I can never thank you enough for such encouraging comments!😃

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
This chapter is amazing Navika👏
Execellent writing of Arjuna's POV😃
In this world there cannot be a woman that can equal to Draupadi ⭐️

Thank you so much dear!😃

Exactly! There can be no one who equals Draupadi's valour and supremacy!😳

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
That was very scary, and I had goosebumps while reading it. Loved the way you showed Draupadi- burning from inside, but trying to appear calm! Brilliant!Will never forget this chapter!

Oh my god! Thank you so much🤗

I am speechless and can really not express how glad I am that you like the chapter and am really thankful to you!😃

Well, Draupadi was like that, expressing her emotions when she needed to and at other times, affecting people with her powerful silence!

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Arjun POV: This was very nicely done too! Krishna was the only one who actually understood what she had actually gone through! Her unconditional surrender was also portrayed very beautifully!

I know that you're a huge Krishna fan and this comment coming from you, makes me absolutely elated!

I am glad that you liked my version of their friendship and pure, innocent love. He was the master and the person who guided Draupadi in every walk of her life. No one, no one can understand her better than him.

Thanks so much!🤗

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