Arjun Draupadi SS: The Immortal Love (Part 3 and 4 posted) - Page 44

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

supeb navu!!
loved the description of the twin princesses,,, wwwooowww they are exact copies of their parents.. waise bhi aakir bachche kiske hai! 😉

gaawwwddd too hawt to handle!!
ardi reunion is beautifully written dear... but i can see shadows in between.. ooohhh gooosshhh Govind!! Vh is coming!!! 😭

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Res
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Awesome updt.
Loved it to the core!

Originally posted by: KIRTIAHUJA91

Thanks for update
Fabulous update
Eagerly waiting for next update 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ilardi

what an update sweetie!!! i got completely carried away while reading!!👏i just wished it would never end!! u just left me speechless.. but still i have a long comment😆 their unison was obviously the best part!! but the way u have described all the children was too cute!!😉well i guess now we will get to read the most important part of the story!! so impatient i am!!!! post soon yaar!!😭anyways sorry for being late😆but remember i may not comment but i have always loved this story!!due to your style of writing!!

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

You have so seamlessly blended in the time lapse Navu... wonderfully done

It was a treat to read about the children and you have merged the kids' characteristics with their parents so nicely

A beautiful chapter to read👏

Originally posted by: KIRTIAHUJA91

Please update yaar its too late

Originally posted by: frankie123

Awesome loved it 😆