Arshi FF:I love you,I trust you!(Discontinued!) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Oh No yaar...Make the MU as short as possible...

And yeah if you want the story to be more dramatic, go for the "Kushi getting shot" storyline...There'll be lotsa drama then...

Personally I would love to read anything you write...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Okay can't decide if she should be shot or not well maybe it will be more interesting if she gets shot okay don't kill me for this suggestion ppl but this way arnav can be sure that he can trust her
Man I wish she wouldn't do things like these on her own but tell nk and mami at least
Cheers for this update and pm looking forward to next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Awesome start!!!
Love the concept!!
Continue soon!!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
I'm not happy righ now, but you know I was the same with TMYLM. I trust you, you're not a CV.๐Ÿ˜‰Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
awesome part
loved it
very well written
shyam is cunning
hope arnav doesn't believe shyam

continue soon
thanx for the pm๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
luved it
wonderful update
at last khushi found her husband but hope arnav trusts khushi.
dont want any mu gain.
looking forward to the next update and how khushi gets arnav out of that trap.
thx a lot for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
๐Ÿ‘thanks...great job...lvoed it...๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
dear plz continue..like it...n thxx tht no MU...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Oh no MU ... I just hate when that happens arnav please don't doubt on her , she loves you! But damn gotta give it to Khushi she only gonna give 10% of property to Shyam ... I hope even nk doesnt misunderstand her , that she is playing with her :)
Thanks for the pm and please continue soon <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
yes please no mu... but i think you should write both ways so that we can have a bit fun if u dont mind or have any problem writing both ways...

cant wait to see how arnav finds out that khushi is tricking that snake

thanks for the pm
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