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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey all! I'm so sorry for taking so long to update! Work load is just going boom bam up! However, this is just Section a) of part therefore a Section b) will come ASAP! Please bare with me and if you are still interested to read! Thanks! :) x

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Tumse hi Tumse (Anjaana Anjaani)

PLEASE NOTE: These updates are entirely a work of fiction. Any resemblance to people (living/passed away) are totally coincidental. These updates are not meant to offend anyone and are just a creative way of expressing thoughts and ideas.


Part 13-Section a)

Maanvi and Virat just stayed in each other's arms the entire night. Virat in between gently stroked Maanvi's hair and whispered 'I love you' but otherwise they were still. For Maanvi, feeling the comfort of being inside Virat's arms was enough for her. She wanted no more and no less. Their love was pure and there was no doubt about this.

Waking up in the morning was another story. Let's just say'it was quite difficult for them both! As the sun peeped in through the gap in the curtain's window Virat slowly opened his eyes which lingered straight on Maanvi's. They held an eye lock for a brief instance before Maanvi cuddled herself closer in to Virat's arms. Then suddenly a though came to her, quite a troubling one.

Maanvi: Virat?

Virat: I love you.

Although Virat was in a mischievous mood he saw the troubled expression on Maanvi's face and asked her what was wrong.

Virat: Maanvi? Kya hua?

Maanvi: Virat ' kal raath'kya hua tha'mera mathlab hummarey beech'kya-?

Virat: Maanvi'tumhey lagtha hai mein tumhaarey saath kuch galath karoonga?

Maanvi: Nahi Virat'.merra mathlab yeh nahi tha likin'

Virat : Maanvi kal hummarey beech kuch nahi hua'bas tum sarrey taath merrey baho mein thi'aur kuch nahi.

Maanvi let out a sigh of relief. As much as she loved Virat she did not want anything to happen between them yet'not until they were married.

Virat: Vaysey partner?

Maanvi: Hmmm'.

Virat: Ek baath bathao mujhey'tumhey shaadi ki bohoth rush hai kya?

Maanvi: Nahi'kyu?

Virat: Nahi'mein dekhra hoon ki bohoth jaldi sochney lagi hummarey suhaag raath key barrey mein-

Maanvi punched Virat right in the stomach.

Virat: Mara kyu?

Maanvi: Eh'chep'bohoth dimaag char gaya hai tumhaara kya? Ha? Zaada bakwaas baka na tho abhi tumhey kamrey sey nikaal doongi.

Saying that Maanvi remembered that they won't supposed to be in the same room. Before someone realised that they were together Virat had to go.

Maanvi: Virat'.Virat dekho koy aajayega'kissi ko patha chaljaaye ga'.

Virat: Kya patha chaljaayega?

Maanvi: Yahi ki hum dono'ek saath hai'mathlab'.Virat dekho mujhey galath math samajhna. Hum dono ko patha hai ki hummarey beech kal raath kuch nahi hua likin agar koy aur dekhey ga tab unhey shaq hojaaye ga. Issiliye abhi tum jao !

Virat pulled Maanvi closer.

Virat : Nahi thora der aur sona hai !

Maanvi : Obviously mujhey bhi sona hai ! Par abhi tum jao!

Virat: Nahi

Maanvi : ha

Virat : nahi

Maanvi : ha

Virat: Nahi

Maanvi : ha

Virat : nahi

Maanvi : ha

Virat : nahi-

Maanvi : Bas virat'.ab niklo naa please

Virat : Mann nahi hai'please thora their baath

Virat pulled Maanvi even close.

Maanvi: Please na!! Please!! Jao.

Virat: Theek hai jaa raha hoon'likin ek sarth hai'

Maanvi: Kya?

Virat leaned his face closer into Maanvi's.

Maanvi: Virat?

Virat: Kiss me.

Maanvi didn't know what to say. Every kiss so far had been on Virat's will. But this time Virat was asking her to start the kiss. He was asking her to kiss him. Maanvi put her face closer to Virat's but then stopped'she was nervous.

Virat: Maanvi. Kiss me.

Maanvi placed herself closer to Virat yet again. This time Virat helped by pulling her closer at the same time. Their lips were not even a centimetre apart.

Yet again Virat whispered'

Virat: Maanvi Chaudary'.kiss me.

Maanvi pushed herself into Virat's body and their lips connected. Virat stroked her hair gently and held her close to him not letting her escape. Maanvi and Virat's lips lingered on each other's. The kiss was perfect. Much more than the two of them had expected. Maanvi and Virat slowly broke apart.

Maanvi: Virat'chalo ab tho jao!

Virat pressed his lips quickly on Maanvi's before saying a final good bye and leaving. Once Virat had gone Maanvi smiled to herself and said, 'I love you partner!'

Quote: Make sure you tell that special someone how much they mean to you before it gets too late!

Precap: Maya is thinking of ways to get Maanvi away from Virat. Then she suddenly comes up with an idea! She will have to use Swamini Bua. She will get Swamini Bua to hate Maanvi...she will use Swamini bua in order to get Maanvi away from Virat. This time she won't give up.

Meanwhile Virat is telling Maanvi that he promises that he will never let anything happen to her. He promises her that everything will be alright. The thought of marrying Maanvi comes to his mind so no one will be able to separate them two.

Please forgive any spelling/grammar/punctuation errors. Suggestions, ideas, feedback and criticisms are most welcome-don't hesitate to post! Please let me know if you wanted a PM but didn't receive one! It really does mean a lot to me if you hit LIKE and COMMENT! Don't have to but it would mean a lot if you did! Hope you enjoyed it :) x


Edited by Preeti_Shadia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First one to comment!!!
WEll i am really angry with u fr the short update
but i need a longer one next time!!!!
To the updater, Omg what an update!!!
Truly amazing!!! The best part was it had only Virman in it!!!
Awsem part
Nd yes continue ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh i forget, got something for u!!!
This is a video a interview with SIMRAN KAUR!!!!!!
njoy watching
Edited by __Shivani__ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb yar mean totly hot
updt sun n pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww awesome update dear.. loved it... now waiting for the section b...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update!!!!
When r u uploading next part, can't w8 4 it!!!
Thanx 4 pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awosome and romantic update plz plz update soon and don't forgot to pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww,,, read all the parts at once just now...
amazing yaar.. virat love towards maanvi and maanvi's hesitant to accept it, maya and her dirty antics...
superb superb SS..
and the last couple of chapters are so romantic, going to read your SS again..
loved it that much..
add me in your PM list please..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow loved it please continue and pm me
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so beautiful and amazing update but short

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Great update..
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