CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 6

Veer was searching for piyu .finally he finds her sitting in the garden . she looks upset.

Veer- baby wat r u doing here at this hour of night

Piyu- dad u r gonna bring me a stepmom.

Veer - wat r u sying

Piyu - I overheard chachi talking that new bride is gonna cum home 2morrow so everyone should get ready

Veer- o my baby. So tell me u r ok if I married?

Piyu - ya, dad telll me is she beautiful

Veer - I don't know

Piyu - will she play with me n b my friend?

Veer- that u haveto ask her.now lets go in its cold outside

After putting piyu to bed veer went to the drawing room . his mom was lost in her own thoughts. He came from behind

Veer-can't u sleep?

Mom- I wanted to look at everything we have for the last time.i probably won't be able to see it again . I m not angry with u anymore .you are right its your life

Veer- mom I m ready to do anything but... with girl I have no feelings for...

Mom- it won't b a real marriage. Its just a formality. Live like strangers in same house. After recovery of our company .you can get a divorce

Veer- I know mom . but then to ...

Mom- anyway good night. The final decision is rests to u

They r coming here tomorrow


next day's evening


In the office its 8'0clock . Mr rai is sitting ajay comes in

Ajay- uncle everything is ready when is bride coming?

Mr rai- she is not cuming here . we are going 2 get her

Ajay- what


Mr rai called MS D'souza & explained something to her. She assured him she will do as he says

Ms D'souza went to anu's room to give her dinner . (I can't even call it dinner). There was a soup n rotti chapatti n salad. Of which our princess drank only soup which was fed by nanny . She refused to eat anymore , finally nanny gave in n told her something.

MS D - You got it my child

Ananya - (nodded )yes I did.

AT SINGH MANSION

In singh mansion everyone is dressed up . Manoj & seema(veer's bro n his wife) are wearing a suit n a designer saree resp.

Their daughter's gia n ria are too dresssed but in modern attire i.e. short dresses (they are typical wannabes).

Manoj - everyone got ready

Seema- but whose the bride? when is she coming?

Manoj- I have no clue. But mom told us to be ready

Piyu came down she was in her pajamas. Mrs singh saw it n said to seema "go get her dressed (aaj iske papa ki shaadi hai😆)"

Mrs singh- Check when mr gupta is arriving with the judge.

At Anu's house

Ananya is lying on her bed. Door opens & stepmom(s m) enters.

S m- darling r u sleeping

Ananya - was abt to

Sm - without taking meds

Anu- O I forgot

S m - O My baby . but how can I forget . here they (she gave a pill in anu's hand & was holding a glass of water. Anu put the pill in the mouth n drank the water.)

S.m - now u sleep (& she put a sheet over her & left)


After she left anu got up & took the pill of her mouth n threw it.

Its 10'o clock anu was in her room suddenly the door opened anu got scared but it was MS D'souza

Ms D- anu get up now we have to leave . ur uncle rai is waiting outside

Ananya got of the bed. She was wearing white dress n donned a sweater over it.

With Ms D's support she was walking n got out of her room they were walking slowly & quietly. Suddenly anu thought something n stopped

Ms D- wat is it dear

Ananya- necklace..

Ms D - wat necklace?

Ananya -my mom's

Ms d - will get it later

Ananya- no its her aakhri nishani (last memoir)

Ms d- fine I 'll get it . u go downstairs without making any noise n go to backyard mr rai is waiting for u.



Ananya nodded n she started walking slowing. She reached the stairs n slowing she climbed down the stairs n went out through back door n reached the backyard. It was dark. Darkness she was familiar with it she had been living in it for past 2 years. Suddenly she looked up there was million things glittering in the sky. "STARS" SHE SAID , she doesn't even remember the last time when she has seen stars . She was walking slowly ,barefooted on the grass .All of a sudden someone put a arm on her shoulder ,in haste she turned back. It was her uncle . she hugged him

Ananya - O uncle I cannot believe I' m out of the house

Mr rai- Beta we have no time to waste there is a car waiting for us lets go

Ananya- but nanny ?wat abt her?

Mr rai- she'll cum later .we must go.


Saying this he took her to the road where a black car was waiting. A handsome guy in brown jacket was on the driver's seat . He was looking at anu when she was cuming towards the car with mr rai's support . They got in the backseat. Mr rai told ajay to drive.



Mr rai- anu don't worry all those horrible things have ended

Ananya-but my nanny

Mr rai-she'll cum later

Ananya- I can't go without her

Mr rai- don't worry I m here for u


Ajay is looking at ananya through rearview mirror. He concentrating on driving too. The reflection he saw in mirror was of a girl with frenzy hair as if they have not combed for months. Her face was so pale as if she has not being eating properly for years (though she was beautiful but due heavy medication n lack proper food. she had become pale).There were visible dark circles. He kept on driving.

At singh mansion

Judge has arrived . Everyone is in drawing room manoj, seema their daughters n MR GUPTA.

JUDGE- when willl the bride come . Its getting late

Gupta- they r on there way.

Mom (mrs singh/jaya)- but where is veer?

Manoj -he isn't answering my calls

Piyu - (softly) he is in his room

Mom -what?why didn't u say it sooner. I ' m tired of his drama.

Then she went to veer's room 2 get him

In the car

Ananya- where r we going uncle?

Mr rai- we r going to veer's house u r future husband.


Ananya smiled.



Ananya- is there a comb?(she said touching her frenzy hair n saw herself in the rearview mirror) . I don't want him to see me like this.


Ajay again glanced at her through the mirror when was she was looking herself in the mirror.


In veer's room

Veer is sitting on sofa chair with his back faced towards the door. When Mrs. singh (mom )enters

Mom- I tried to be gentle at first. I even begged u. but no use. This marriage isn't a joke .if u break u r promise at last moment . I 'll never forgive u. you must not run from u r responsibilities by hiding

Veer- I'm not hiding just rethinking my decision 4 last time. To erase all the wounds of past(he is holding a box of pics )

Mom - have u still kept those pics till now!

Suddenly mrs singh hears a sound of car entering the premise

Mom- They have came. Now pls come downstairs fast. ( n she leaves)

Veer was looking at the picture .The particular pic he was holding had him in groom's attire n beside him there was a bride but her face was torn off . He kept the pic with other pics in the box n got up & went out of his room.

Part-7


Edited by pranita1202 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
GUYS I SAW U R COMMENTS WILL PUT INTO ACTION FROM NEXT POST AS PART 6 I HAVE ALREADY TYPED

SO NANNY'S NAME IS MS D'SOUZA BUT I CALL MS D .WILL CALL HER NANNY FROM NEXT POST

STEPMOM = SM



p.s- initially i haven't updated the veer piyu scene i have now so njoy
Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
thanks a lot for super fast updates dear 😊...

so finally ananya is out of that prison😊...great...i am worried about nanny...

& veer agreed to get married...that's good...but it seems like he has been hurt badly in past by his wife 😭...waiting to know the full story...

but ajay...what is his role...oh no...plz no love triangle😕...i want him as good friend only...

piyu & veer scene was very sweet...she wants a friend...i hope it happens...it looks like ananya is as innocent & sweet like piyu...so they will get along with each other nicely...i really want to see the cute bonding between them also...

plz update soon...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
I should say this that U r a Superfast updater Pranita😛😆...Again Nice update👍🏼.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: anu93

I should say this that U r a Superfast updater Pranita😛😆...Again Nice update👍🏼.

HAVE 2 B FAST CINDRELLLA AND PRINCE KO MILANA JO HAI😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
so quick update with supersonic speed😉😆...badawala hug from me🤗
so veer has some gloomy past i see...and these evil trio made my princess into a vampire just in 2 yrs😭...hope these two wounded souls heal each others pain...
don't worry piyu😊...ur mom won't be a stepmom...she is nice in nature...😃
waiting...😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
C my story part 1 n 2 at pg1 part 3 and 4 at pg2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
i loved it...
but i feel pity for ma lovly princess,,,,,,,,,,,ananya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,she is mugzzz character,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i just can't imagine her to be fragile, weak pale,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,like vampy...impossible...

ma QTpie ananya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,may veer's love n concern make her alright...

waiting for another radhani express update,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,their first meeting too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
beautiful story line
suspense, thrill , love
loved it
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
superb updates!!
loved it
so they r getting into contract marriage
anaya is so happy
but will veer will agree ?
but knowing ananya's situation he might agree
that is if he knows or maybe for piyu
hope all gud happens
cont soon dear
thnx 4 da pm

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