Bas Ek Baar Keh Do...(SS)||Last Update on PG 68|| - Page 54

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Last part Updated ...!!!!!
😒 😒 😒
This was one of my fab fic... 😔
I am glad this fic was so dear to you 😃😃

It was a beautiful SS... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
You are really a brilliant writer Archu 😊
Your fics are one of a reason to stick with this forum 😛
I am glad my fics made your stay in this forum longer 😃

Coming to update it was superb ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thanks 😃😃😃

MJ was waiting for Tara 😛
Finally Tara had come 😃
For both of them it was dream which had come true...
It was dream come true 😃

So lovingly you described their feelings... ❤️
Speaking of eyes !!!
Tara cried for being lucky 😊
MJ just couldn't see her crying 😳
Words are required when hearts are far away😊

I love their dance and the song too ❤️
MJ finally confessed in front of her 😛
Tara didn't delay to reply 😃
Awee... their kiss 😳 😳 😳
He had already taken his time to confess his feelings to her😆

MJ remembered their first meeting 😛
So wanted to celebrate 😊
And they happily returned to home... 😊
Yes, he remembered😃😃😃

Their love making was too hot ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
They completed each other ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Truly it was beginning of their life 😊
A hot scene for hot couple😳
It was new beginnings😃😃

It was so perfect update 👏 👏 👏
Thanks for giving us such a lovely story Archu 😃
Thanks to Shai Di for helping you 😛
Thanks for loving it so much and sticking around even when I delayed updating it😃
Now, looking forward to your other stories ... 😉

Thanks Shaina_b for editing it making it more beautiful 👏

I will read and then comment...

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

That was such a wonderful story .and the end was very intense.. cv's of ebi should take u to write the ending of the serial...

Thanks for the pm...

Did u following the new vpp show on sta plus???

Thanks for loving it so much 😃 😃

I agree end was pretty intense 😉😉
But people reading for years needed some 😉

Thanks for thinking me to write the ending of EBI 😳

It was great having you 😃

Nice Prologue Dear👏😊

Originally posted by: Archi21

Prologue

Hi Archana,

Indeed beautiful Prologue, i m looking forward to read this story, it sounds interesting. 😊

Originally posted by: Archi21

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Introduction

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Originally posted by: Archi21

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Misunderstanding

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Awesome Part Dear👏😊