Bas Ek Baar Keh Do...(SS)||Last Update on PG 68||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue


"Dr. Fahim please treat my son...take as much money as you want but please...save him...He is the only hope of my life. After the death of my son and his wife, my grandson is my last hope. What will I do with this giant business if he is not there."

"Uncle I am doing my best to recover Mrityunjay from shock. He is like a son to me. Your son was my best friend and his family is also my family."

"I can't see Mrityunjay in this state. He has became a workaholic - he doesn't come home, doesn't care about eating, sleeping. He has started smoking to hide his stress. He is doing all this to kill himself. It's killing him inch by inch each day. And I, owner of this giant empire, is not able to save him. I feel helpless."

"Uncle, now only medication alone cannot work on Mrityunjay. I suggest you send Mrityunjay to a different place for some time. He needs to come out of his old life, as long as he is surrounded by people who keep reminding him of his past, nothing - no medication will work on him. He might feel good with this change of place and this will help him forget his bitter past to some extent. This small change in location may result in a big change in Mrityunjay's life."

"If this is the case and it will result in his betterment then I am ready to send him away from myself."

Dr. Fahim is the best psychiatrist of India.

Mr. Dhanraj Singh Shekhawat is a big business tycoon whose companies have billions of turnover each year but his life is in Mrityunjay, his grandson, his only reason for being alive. But that Only reason had lost all his hope for life. Mrityunjay didn't want to be alive, he was trying all possible ways to destroy his life.
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Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️
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A/N: Chapter names with * means they are edited(safe to readπŸ˜‰).

Ch 2-Nainital's Discovery*

Ch 3-Misunderstanding*

Ch 4 (a) - Some Clearance -Part a*

Ch 4 (b)- Some Clearance - Part b*

Ch 5 (a) - Last Day - Part (a)*

Ch 5 (b) - Last Day - Part (b)*

Ch 6 - Return Journey*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Archu dear ...❀️

U chupa rustam...

Inna pyaara pyaara...khayaal...kahan se laati ho...

Zabardast starting hai...πŸ‘
Sachchi loving it...ek dam dil se...

Par update ke liye i cant force...

Pehle project and submission...exam...baad mein SS...

Hum bhi yahi hai...tum bhi yahi ho...

Tum likhte rehna...hum padhte rahenge...πŸ€—

Edited by ShagufElina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry archu for being so late...
BUt I m finally able to unres this...

WOw yaar this is something different. ...

Mj needs a psychiatrist. .opppsss in the show tara needs one...

GHanchakar ko pata hi nai chal raha that he is mj..

And yes I jaldi ab tara ki entry karwa do..
Edited by Worldpeace - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Archu dear ...❀️

U chupa rustam...

Inna pyaara pyaara...khayaal...kahan se laati ho...

Zabardast starting hai...πŸ‘
Sachchi loving it...ek dam dil se...

Par update ke liye i cant force...

Pehle project and submission...exam...baad mein SS...

Hum bhi yahi hai...tum bhi yahi ho...

Tum likhte rehna...hum padhte rahenge...πŸ€—


thank u shagu 😊

starting zabardast hai par aage kya hoga wo pata nahi πŸ˜†

jab aage dimag sochega tab update hoga πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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gud one archu...realyy nice one!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Archi yeh pooch ne ki baat hai!! Continue soon!! It's an awesome start
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Originally posted by: Piya1702

gud one archu...realyy nice one!!!😊


thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mastaTmohi

Archi yeh pooch ne ki baat hai!! Continue soon!! It's an awesome start


thanks mohi

see when next part comes to my mind
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow archie ... such a chuppa rustam πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Eagerly waiting for the next part πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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