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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

A Wise Man's Advise

Finally I am happy that Dada jee noticed whatever is going on in MJ and Tara's life. He saw MJ doing which makes some sense. He knew that MJ needs his advice badly. Vaise bhi sometimes he behaves as if he has no brains.
Dada ji is the life saver in MriAra relationshipπŸ˜ƒ. MJ acts many times as no brainerπŸ˜†

He told him and explained how a woman loves a man truly and unconditionally. He till now didn't know how a woman loves a man. She always supported him in each and every moment whenever he needed her and so as MJ did for Tara.
Dada ji knows who things are in real world πŸ˜ƒ

I loved again the selection of song. This suited the situation and when he was all alone in his room he after a long time realized the worth of Tara in his life. I think now he will bring back Tara in his life.
Thanks for loving the song 😳
Soon Tara will be back😊

Tara is playing truth and dare with all these guys and see sach ko chahe kitna bhi chupa lo jyada nahi chupta. Everybody realized that something is bothering Tara and they have not heard MJ calling Tara. Poor Tara she is missing MJ badly.

you are right sachh nahi chhupta, and these kids are smarter than MriAra



Thanks for reading this part πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Pankhis,

Thanks for being with me on this journey of MriAra πŸ‘

I started this fic in 2014 but due to my irregular updates it took more than 2 years to complete this fic😳

Posting the last update of this fic😊

Thanks for bring patient with me πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


Thank you Shaina for editing each update and improving it qualityπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


Thanks,
Archi

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Posted: 8 years ago

As the clock struck 6:30, Mrityunjay left his office for his date with Tara, although he didn't know whether she would come or not, but somewhere in his heart he was sure she would come. He reached the date spot by 7 and checked all the arrangements to see if they were perfect or not. He was pacing in the lawn that had a table covered with white cloth and two chairs. At one dark end of the lawn a band of musicians was ready to play. This place was at a hotel near the sea shore, which was fully booked today by Mrityunjay. The cool breeze of the sea was making the environment cool but Mrityunjay's heart was restless thinking whether she would come or not.


When the clock showed 7:30, a car stopped by the hotel lawn. The door opened and one by one a pair of feet was kept on the ground very carefully. Seeing it was Tara, Mrityunjay rushed to escort her. When he reached in front of Tara, he was smitten by her smile. She was looking very beautiful , more than how he had imagined her in that saree. It was his love which made Tara more beautiful today. He was standing in front of Tara flabbergasted by her beauty. The kajal in her eyes was making her eyes more hypnotic. Tara became red seeing his eyes on her. She lowered her eyes shyly.



Mrityunjay offered his hand to her and took her to the table. Both of them sat quietly grinning. He searched his pocket for something and found it, but he didn't keep it on the table. After five minutes of awkward silence, he stood up and signalled the band to play the music. He came near Tara and asked her for a dance by offering his hand. Tara slipped her hand in his. The song started.


~Do lafz ki hai baat ek hi hai kyun darmiyaan phir ruki ruki~

They stood facing each other waiting for the other one to initiate the dance.


~ Keh bhi na paaye reh bhi na paaye kyun bewajah hai yeh bebashi~

Tara kept her left hand on his shoulder and he kept his right hand on her waist and took her right hand in his left hand.


~Tum mein hum hai hum mein tum ho tum se hum hai hum se tum ho~

He pulled her a little closer to him. They were looking into each others eyes and praising each other in their mind, how lucky they were to have a partner like each other.


~Kismaton se milte hain do dil yahan...

Har kisi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagi mein

Har kisi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagi mein ~

Mrityunjay pecked lightly on Tara's right hand. She blushed and moved her gaze away from him.


~Khushnaseeb hai hum jinko hai mili yeh bahar zindagi mein~

Mrityunjay removed his left hand from Tara's right hand and moved it to her back and removed the clutch in her hair.

"Mrityunjay it was meant to be removed by you."

"I know."

Their eyes were talking but their mouths were sealed.

~Pyaar na ho toh zindagi kya hai yaar na ho toh bandagi kya hai

Pyaar na ho toh zindagi kya hai yaar na ho toh bandagi kya hai ~

Tara wrapped both her hands around his neck. He wrapped his hands around her waist. He held her petite body in his strong arms.


~Tujh se hi har khushi hai tere dum se aashiqui hai jaan le~

Tara was seeing in his eyes his immense love for her, which was just for her.


~Mil jaye hum toh sab kuch sahi hai phir iss tarah kyun hai ajnabi~

Her eyes were filled with tears of happiness. A tear trickled from her eyes on her pink rose like cheek.


~Tum mein hum hai hum mein tum ho tum se hum hai hum se tum ho~

Mrityunjay took that tear on his thumb and swallowed it.


~Kismaton se milte hai do dil yahan...~

"Am I so lucky that he can't even see a tear in my eyes?"


~Har kisi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagi mein

Har kisi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagi mein ~

"Tara already you have been through worse situations and had shed tears. Now I won't allow a single tear to come to your eyes."


~Haan kisi ko hi hai milta yeh zindagi mein

Khushnaseeb hai jo hume mila zindagi mein~

Still their eyes were talking and mouths were shut.

~Haan kisi ko hi hai milta yeh zindagi mein ~

Tara hugged him and rested her head on his chest. His heart too was beating at the same speed in which her heart was beating.


~Khushnaseeb hai hum jo hume mila zindagi mein~

Mrityunjay caressed her and hugged her tight, so that she can never leave him and go.

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Continued ...

~Tu mohabbat hai ishq hai mera ek ibadat hai saath yeh tera

Tu mohabbat hai ishq hai mera ek ibadat hai saath yeh tera ~

Mrityunjay loosened his grip. Tara was looking at him and resting in his arms. His eyes were drinking the beauty of her eyes. Tara tried to move away from him. But Mrityunjay pulled her towards him by holding her hands.


~Jab dil se dil mile hai phir kyun yeh faasle hai iss tarah~

He pulled her back close to his chest and trapped her in his arms.


~Aa bol de tu ya bol doon main kab tak chhupayein yeh bekhudi~

He moved his hand from her shoulder to her fingers tenderly, giving her goose bumps.


~Tum mein hum hai hum mein tum ho tum se hum hai hum se tum ho~

She clutched his fingers in hers, rested her head by pushing it back on his chest and swayed to the song.


~Kismato se milte hai do dil yahan...~

Then he moved her face towards him and cupped it in his palm.


~Har kisi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagi mein

Har kisi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagi mein ~

Tara lowered her gaze. He smiled seeing her red.


~Khushnaseeb hai hum jinko hai mili yeh bahar zindagi mein~


He then tangled his right leg with Tara's left leg and made her fall in his arms. When Tara was resting on his strong arm, he removed a red rose from his coat's pocket and said

"I love you Tara. Do y.."


Tara kept her hand on his mouth as she didn't want to hear his question, but wanted to say her feelings and said,

"I love you Mrityunjay ."


His eyes were fixed on her face. When he heard Tara's confession, he immediately closed the gap between her red lips by his. Her lips were inviting him since she had arrived today evening. Tara closed her eyes to live the most beautiful moment of the evening. He kissed her tenderly so that Tara's soft skin didn't get hurt. After a short kiss they stood up straight. Tara slipped her hand into his arm and walked to the table. Mrityunjay was holding Tara's left hand in his and slowly slipped a ring on her ring finger. Tara rejoiced seeing this. He then kissed her palm.




In the meanwhile, the waiter brought a small cake. Tara was confused seeing the cake on the table.


Her eyes questioned, "What is this?"

"Tara, today five months ago we met on the terrace of Shekhawat mansion. I don't know whether you cherish that moment or not. For me it was a precious moment when I saw you. Tara I had been very rude. "


Tara kept her finger on his lips. "Mrityunjay that is past, don't talk about it. We have another chance to re-live life and let's celebrate it."

He pecked on her finger that was on his lips.

She removed it blushing.


They cut the cake together and fed each other. When they were dinning, a gush of cool sea breeze spread Tara's hair on her face. Mrityunjay gently removed them touching her soft cheeks making her lost in his touch.


After dinner, Mrityunjay got up and stood beside Tara offering his arm to her. Tara slipped her arm into his, and held his strong hand firmly and rested her head on his arm and walked with him outside the hotel.

Mrityunjay was driving the car and looking at Tara again and again. Tara, seeing him act like a love sick boy, moved his face to the other side.


They were about to reach the mansion when his phone rang. It was his secretary.

Tara chuckled remembering how today morning he had acted on his call.

Mrityunjay too chuckled seeing his name and took his call.


After reaching home, Tara got down and Mrityunjay went to the office to sign an important document which he had forgotten to sign.

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After reaching their room, Tara was remembering today's evening's each moment while standing near the window, which gave her butterflies in her stomach. Someone's hands from the back held her. Her body shivered with his touch, she knew it was her man, Mrityunjay.



Mrityunjay slightly removed her hair from her shoulder and kissed her, making her shiver. She turned to hide her face in his chest and found a bare, slightly hairy chest. She hid her face there. His bare chest was arousing her body. Mrityunjay holding her face by the chin brought it near his lips and sucked the juice of her lips, leaving her breathless. He ran down his thirsty lips to her neck pecking wet kisses and making Tara lose control over her body. He slipped her pallu and pulled her towards him, nearly crushing her against his body.

"Tara you are beautiful." He said looking into her eyes.


"It's because you love me." She said.

Mrityunjay started planting kisses on her chest, making her moan "Mri..tyun..jay..."


She was trying to get hold of his soft hair but her fingers slipped through them. He then moved his fingers playfully around her waist and kissed her. She groaned "Mri...tu..yn...jay..."

and dug her fingers on his shoulder . He scooped her in his strong arms and took her to their bed where they had been sleeping for the last four months, not as man and wife but as strangers. He placed her gently on the bed. She wrapped her arms around his neck and brought him closer to her. He took her right hand and kissed it. He then slipped his fingers into hers filling the gap between her fingers.


"Tara, I have not been a good husband till now, but I promise that it will never happen again."


She locked his lips passionately with hers. He then kissed on her neck, slowly slipping the straps of her blouse from her shoulders.


"I..don't..want..to..talk..about..it...everrr," she said in her aroused state.


Her body was reacting to each kiss of his, arching towards his naked chest, building the pleasure in her belly. His mouth reached her breasts kissing and playfully biting them, arousing her more than before.

"M..r..i..t..y..u..n...j..a..y..."


A cry escaped from her mouth, as she fell into waves of pleasure. She tried to hold him, but his kiss was arousing her more than before making her succumb over and over again, making her fall more and more into the waves of pleasure.


"You..are...making...me...want...you...again." She groaned.


"As you say my love." He said playfully in his husky voice.

He kissed on her tummy, which would one day carry his seeds.

"I..want..you..in..me..M.." she groaned in her arousal.


Mrityunjay immediately made her straddle him, and curled his fingers on her butts, pulling her deeper into him. She dug her fingers into his back, arching her body against his. She bit his lips as he thrust deeper into her. He held her tighter by her waist as she succumbed, kissing her at the center of her chest. She pulled back a little bit to take a view of the man holding her and again hugged him tightly. She kissed his broad shoulders and then grazed her lips on his bare chest at which the fellow lecturer at her college was drooling.


"Mri..tyun..jay...that lecturer at college was right."

She moaned when he kissed on the nipple of her breast.


"About...what..." he groaned with his voice thick with desire.


"About...you..The...girl...who...marries...you...will.. be..lucky."

she said holding him more tightly than before as he licked on her breast.


"l...am...glad..to... know." he said in aroused appreciation.

He grazed his lips all over again on her making her his completely. Tara was moaning and groaning. This sweet pain of love making was giving her pleasure. After a series of love making, they retired into each other's arms. Today that bed became theirs completely. There was no separation of sides to sleep. They were one completely. It was the union of two souls who found their peace in each other's arms - their solace in each other. It was the beginning of their life.

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Mumbai: I love you...three words are enough to change one's life, they just need to be said once. Mrityunjay said them but he took too long to realize it. But it was not that long either. So anyone listening to me go and tell your loved ones that you love them before it's too late.


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~The End~


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Thanks for reading 😊
Thanks Shaina_b for making it read worthy πŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 8 years ago
Kuchh jyaada nahi bahut hi jyaade intense passionate hot romantic updates the yaar!
The song is very nice!
Thanks for pm!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Last part Updated ...!!!!!
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This was one of my fab fic... πŸ˜”

It was a beautiful SS... ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
You are really a brilliant writer Archu 😊
Your fics are one of a reason to stick with this forum πŸ˜›

Coming to update it was superb ⭐️⭐️⭐️

MJ was waiting for Tara πŸ˜›
Finally Tara had come πŸ˜ƒ
For both of them it was dream which had come true...

So lovingly you described their feelings... ❀️
Speaking of eyes !!!
Tara cried for being lucky 😊
MJ just couldn't see her crying 😳

I love their dance and the song too ❀️
MJ finally confessed in front of her πŸ˜›
Tara didn't delay to reply πŸ˜ƒ
Awee... their kiss 😳 😳 😳

MJ remembered their first meeting πŸ˜›
So wanted to celebrate 😊
And they happily returned to home... 😊

Their love making was too hot ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
They completed each other ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
Truly it was beginning of their life 😊

It was so perfect update πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thanks for giving us such a lovely story Archu πŸ˜ƒ
Thanks to Shai Di for helping you πŸ˜›

Now, looking forward to your other stories ... πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 8 years ago
That was such a wonderful story .and the end was very intense.. cv's of ebi should take u to write the ending of the serial...
Thanks for the pm...
Did u following the new vpp show on sta plus???
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Posted: 8 years ago
So it was last update...
U have written well & did justice to beautiful love story...πŸ‘

End is good as start...πŸ‘


So finally the day came when two soulmates became one..πŸ‘

Dance sequence was good 😳

Eyes talk was good ...😳

Their kiss praise for each other...wow...😳


Thanks for writing this as...it was really a great journey through this ss
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Originally posted by: npksk8495

Kuchh jyaada nahi bahut hi jyaade intense passionate hot romantic updates the yaar!
The song is very nice!
Thanks for pm!


Thanks for loving itπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

I love this song and when I heard this version of song I imagined MriAra dancing on it

Thanks for being a part of this storyπŸ˜ƒ
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