Zaya SS: I hate to hate you ( Ch 4 on Pg 12)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyaa people !!!


I am planning to write a SS based on the
current track. It will be about Aliya being in coma and Usman will be in coma
too. I will introduce some new characters and some of the characters in the
show won't be in my SS !! But I want to write if I get proper response from
people. Here is the teaser.

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Zain: Doctor, What just happened to Dad ? Tell me DAMN IT... What just happened to him ?

Doctor: Sorry Zain Mr Abdullah has gone into coma.

Zain: You are kidding me right ? This can't happen. Did you hear me ? This bloody can't happen. He is my superhero. He just can't close his eyes like that. He has to wake up now like RIGHT NOW !!

Doctor: Zain beta, come out of denial. This is the time to pray for him. Trust me prayers have more impact on patients than medicines. So pray for him a lot and don't let anybody who made him end in such a situation come close to him.

Zain: What do you mean doctor ? What led him to go in coma ?

Doctor: He is in this situation because of stress. It looks like he couldn't do anything to save something, which made him restless and put pressure on his brain, which led his body to give up and he ended up like this.

Aliya: Mamu... Zain what happened to Mamu ? Why his eyes are closed ?

Zain: Because of you damnit JUST BECAUSE OF YOU. He screamed his lungs out as he uttered those words. Just leave me alone. Just GO AWAYYY...

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INDEX

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4


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LiveLifeInBliss thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ahahaha i am FINALLY first without anyone going easy on me 😆😃
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Res!
Ugh dammit, I'm second!! -_-
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Res!

Ugh dammit, I'm second!! -_-



Awww <3 I was third on urs 😭
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Originally posted by: AashimaK




Awww <3 I was third on urs😭


i was first ⭐️ 😎
do continue and pm me please 😊
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Seems exciting! Please do continue soon x
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This was awesome! Do continue
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Sounds very interesting !!! Love it , eagerly waiting to read more .
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Sounds intresting continue soon...I am waiting :) and pm snd kaarna mat bhoolna agar bhooli then I will not spare u...!!😆
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Originally posted by: craziness05

Sounds intresting continue soon...I am waiting :) and pm snd kaarna mat bhoolna agar bhooli then I will nit spare u...!!😆


LOL Aastha I won't forget 😆😆
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