ZainAliya FF: Beauty and the Beast. Chapter6@Pg26

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Beauty and the Beast


Prologue


She was laying on hospital's Operation Theatre's bed. She was having a lot of pain, She was feeling so weak, She was feeling the end of the world. The pregnancy was getting very complicated. The doctors were so tensed because the situation was getting worst and out of control. They have never face such a case in their career. She wasn't able to support this pain. The doctor gave her an injection to make her unconcious but her body wasn't accepting any contact with any product. She was screaming and criying. She was having tears. She only wanted his husband to be with him but he wasn't with her. The person that she needed the most in this moment wasn't with her. He let her to die. He was emotionless.. How a man can be so cruel? How a husband can left his wife alone in this critical situation? How a dad can be so careless toward his baby? Will Aliya give birth to a baby? Will she die? Will His hasbund be with her in this helpfull moment?


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Salamalekum I'm Amira. I'm going to start a new FF. I realy like Beintehaa especially Zain and Aliya so I decided to write an FF on them. Please do tell me if you like the prologue and if I should continue this story. I will use some reality issues in this story, but they will be in my version. It may shocks you but I want to share with you. I can't tell you more about the story, if you want to know more then keep giving your opinions and reading.. The updates will be rare as I'm busy with studies. I feel so lazy sending pms :( please do add me in your buddy list or add my post in your regular view post so you can see it when I will update.


IF YOU WISHED TO RECEIVE PM, DO ADD -Shareen-

She is my friend, she is gonna help me to sending pmz



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..Amira.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres.

Firstly Salamalekum.. Hugs..

n new Kahaani with Beinteha... <3

Nycc... by the way same pinch I love them too... (like b4 Rantara n nw ZaYa 😳)

coming to story is quite intriguing...

The girl is Aliya and guy is Zain... most probably (no credit on guessing right 😛)

Aliya in pain n Zain cruel...

I wana read more so plz do continue... Amira ji...

update soon...

- Luv Arya

P.S plzz do update ur creation Shop... Im missing it Alot... yaa plz...

Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept ! Continue soon :-)
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Walekumsalam! Jaan kaisi ho?
I just came to read your msg on my phone, I use less IF :( cos of busy life.

I read the prologue, its sad :( but interesting. I'm dying to read the next. I'm feeling bad for Aliya. :'(

Thanks for sharing it, please do inform me when you pm. It seems so so interesting. Your ff are always awesome and I enjoy reading them :))

I love you <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really intersting prologue.
feel bad for aliya.zain must be her husband.but where was he?
update soon plz.
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hi
just superb
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept
Looking forward to reading more!
Continue soon! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome prologue i don't like zain but i like aliya please give her a back bone awesome start thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesomeee start👏
continue soonish😳
wil b waiting for d update😳
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