FS: Cherish Whatever You Have (chapter 3) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 months ago
#41

Awesome update

Riya has a troubling household

I have a feeling she is going to end up at Arjun's company after the interview

but un dono ka relation chuhe billi jaisa hoga ya fir junior senior ka pata nahi

cont soon

Edited by bloomie - 9 months ago
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Posted: 8 months ago
#42

Seems really interesting!


Read the whole thing, almost twice cuz my lazy ass didn't feel like commenting the first time I read smiley36 was marinating with the story and thinking aage kya hoga smiley36



Suzie, dear you've beautifully captured the emotions and penned down characters with realness. It was a fun read in that manner. Riya has her share of problems and Arjun has his. Loved to see the supporting friends Riya has! smiley31 it's a rarity in fictionssmiley36

Mazaa aa gaya!


Coming to the part that bugged me a bit. Arjun has CHD! AYYY! Firstly Sam ka reaction was dramatic but like that's quite expected. But it'd be better if he didn't scare Arjun like that. Although ye 3 mahine wala ultimatum wasn't needed. CHD is fully treatable in most cases. Very, very few chances of death unless the person has other issues with their body.

So, I hope you'll show a surgery that fixes his heart smiley36 it's takes an hour and 3 days of recovery. Uske baad slow exercises for a month and your life is back to normal. smiley36 easy peasy! smiley36smiley27

PM if you wanna know more.smiley27


Update soon and tag me smiley31

Edited by Satrangi_Curls - 7 months ago
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Posted: 7 months ago
#43

Expecting an update from you...It's been so long you updated last. Please please please update soon.

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Posted: 5 months ago
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Kab update milegi hume aapki sari stories ki? Aapko long break liye huye kitna time bith chuki hai, kuch toh khayal karo apke readers ka. How long we need to wait more?

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