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Hi guys! Because of some technical issues our dear babygirl287 was not able to post her topic so she requested me to de so in her behalf. This thread will contain her SS which she had posted on the show's AT. Enjoy!!😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Meri imagination... (First time likh rahi hu toh koi galti ho toh chala lena)


Part #1
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(Vikrant coma se bahar aa gya hai aur ab apne ghar pr kuch dino k liye bed rest par hai aur Aditi uska dhyaan rakhti hai)
Aditi: good morning
Vikrant: good morning, arre wah chai,mujhe ni pata tha ASP Aditi revenge lene walo me se hai
Aditi: revenge?
Vikrant: ha,jab tum bed rest par thi tab mai jabardasti khayal rakhta tha tumhara aur ab mai bed rest pr hu to tum jabardasti mera khayal rakh rahi ho to ye to revenge hi hua na
Aditi: hmmm agar ye baat hai to fir to ye revenge hi hai
Vikrant: waise mujhe iss revenge se koi problem ni bas khana acha banana usme no compromise, ok? Waise chai me adrak(ginger) kum hai
Aditi: ab lag rha hai ACP Vikrant Singhal wapas aa gya hai, waise khane pine ki tension lene ki jaroorat ni tumhe kal se
Vikrant: kyu? Mujhe Taaj me shift kar rahi ho? Nahi nahi itna kharcha mat karo
Aditi: not funny Vikrant, actually tumhari maa phone aya tha wo kafi pareshaan thi to mujhe unhe batana pada k tum ek mission k doraan injured ho gye aur ab bed rest par ho toh isi liye aaj wo aa rahi hai.
Vikrant: maa aa rahi?? Aditi is time muje wo vanraj tumse acha dost lag rha hai
Aditi: kya?
Vikrant: or nahi toh kya, arre tum janti ni meri maa ko jitne din mai bed rest par rahunga utne din me pure shehar ki ladkiyo ka bio data bata dengi mujhe
Aditi: hahahaha...kuch bhi na Vikrant
Vikrant: are kamal ho tum b joke par hasti nahi or serious baat par has deti ho,chot mujhe lagi dimag tumhara hil gaya
(Doorbell baji)
Aditi: mai dekhti hu
Vikrant: ha waise bhi mai to jaa nahi sakta
...
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Part #2
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(Aditi darwaja kholti hai aur samne ek lady hoti hai)
Aditi: ji aap kon?
Maa: Vikrant hai?
Aditi: ji,par aap?
Maa: mai uski maa
Aditi: oh auntie namaste,ayiye andar ayiye. Vikrant apne room me hai. Ye saman mujhe de dijiye mai dusre room me rakh deti hu.
Maa: ha,par beta tum?
Aditi: main Aditi, Vikrant ki partner. Ap usse miliye tab tak mai apke liye kuch chai nashte ka intezaam kar deti hu.
(Maa Vikrant k room me jati hai)
Maa: vikku kaisa hai beta? Apna dhyan ni rakhta na? Itni chot laga li, kaise case pr bhej dia tere department ne? Waha koi or nahu hai kya bs tu hi hai?...
Vikrant: maaa shant ho jao ate hi itni sari shikayate,ruk jao thodi-2 karo sunne or bolne me maza ayega
Maa: chup kar,chot lagi hai lekin faltu mazak karne se baaz ni ayega na tu vikku
Vikrant: maa ab to vikku mat bulao na,aur meri partner b hai yaha usne sun lia toh
Maa: are ha,mai mili Aditi se,badi sundar or pyari hai,tune kabhi bataya kyu ni uske bare me?
Vikrant: aap ko uska naam b pata chal gya
Maa: tujhe sach bohot chot lagi hai isi liye aisi bate kar raha hai,abhi darwaja usine to khola tha
Vikrant: oh ha
(( chalo maa ne entry maari bhi toh Aditi k hi samne,ab maa uski or meri shadi karwa k hi manegi,hey bhagwan bacha le,ab to vanraj kidnap kr le toh b khushi hogi))
Maa: kya hua? Kya soch raha hai? Dard ho raha hai?
Vikrant: ni maa aisa kuch ni hai mai thik hu
(Aditi apni hone wali saas k liye chai lati hai)
Aditi: auntie chai. Vikrant tumhare ghar pr cornflakes k alawa kuch ni rehta?
Vikrant: ni ni Maggie bhi rehti,tumne dhyan se dekha ni
Maa: tu sirf Maggie and cornflakes rakhta hai khane k liye?
Vikrant: are jadatar time to cases k chakkar me bahar hi rehta hu or bahar hi kha bhi leta hu.
Maa: tu har samay bahar ka hi kata hai?
Vikrant: nahi mai Mumbai k bahar jata hu bas tab hi varna Mumbai me jab Aditi k sath kaam shuru kia tb se wahi khana bana k lati hai...((kyu bola yeh maine,ni maa ni kuch mat bolna Aditi k samne plzzz))
Maa: acha, Aditi beta fir toh bohot pareshani hoti hogi tumhe,iss ka b khana banana padta hai,tumhara to kaam bhad jata hoga na?
Aditi: are ni auntie aisi baat ni hai,apne liye to khana banati hi hu to Vikrant k lie b banati leti hu,isme koi pareshani ni hoti
Maa: mai janti hu iss nakhrebaaz ko ache se,kahi namak kum kabhi namak jada iska yhi chalta rehta hai
Aditi: hahaaha...ha auntie wo toh hai
Maa: pata hai bachpan se hi vikku ki yhi adat rhi hai
Aditi: vikku?
Vikrant: ha ACP Vikrant singhal urf maa ka vikku
(Aditi apni hasi kisi tarah control kar leti hai or Vikrant apne sharam se laal hue gaal)
Aditi: are ha Vikrant wo thodi der pehle commissioner sir ka phone aya tha,ek case k liye jana hoga,mai sham ko ati hu. Ok bye, namaste auntie.
Vikrant: ok but case k bare me updated rakhna mujhe or kisi musibat me mat phasna please.
Aditi: yes sir.
Maa: beta sham ka khana yhi khana,thik hai
Aditi: arre auntie ap takleef mat lijiye
Maa: arre isme kya takleef,tum dinner yhi karogi bas
Auntie: thik hai auntie, namaste
Maa: namaste.
((Chalo maa ne apna kaam shuru kar dia,beta Vikrant taiyar ho ja maa Aditi ki puri kundali nikalengi tujhse))
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Part #3
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(Sham ka time hai aur Aditi abhi ayi nahi hai but jald hi ayegi)
Maa: vikku beta aao khana taiyar hai,mai laga deti hu
Vikrant: maa abhi nahi thoda ruk kar,wo Aditi ko bulaya tha na apne toh woh aa jaye fir sath khate hai sab
Maa: ha thik hai. Waise ye Aditi hai bahut pyari ladki,sundar hai,sanskari bhi hai,hoshiyar bhi hai,hai na?
Vikrant: ha maa achi hai I mean partner achi hai intelligent hai and communication skills bhi hai.
Maa: ha waise shadishuda toh lagti ni sagai hui hai kya uski?
((Chal beta maa ne shuru kar apni investigation))
Vikrant: nahi,nahi hui
Maa: acha, kahi baat chal rahi hai kya uski?
Vikrant: yaar maa aap bhi kya,wo kya mujhe apna relationship status update karti rehti hai aur mujhe na ache se pata hai aap ye uska bio data kyu nikal rhi hai? Maa partner hai wo meri baksh do uss bechari ko
Maa: chup kar nalayak, aur kaha likha hai k partner ko life partner nahi bana skte,bilkul tere type ki hai. Tujh se baat nahi ho paye toh main karu kya?
Vikrant: nahi bilkul nahi,jo jaisa hai waisa hi rehne do Vikrant singhal filhaal single hi thik hai aur jab mingle hona hoga tab apko bata dunga shagun le kar aa jayiyega.
Maa: pichle kayi salo se yhi bol raha hai,ab itni achi ladki mili hai toh mauka mat gawana intezar k chakkar me.
Vikrant: maa
(Doorbell baji,vikku ki dulhaniya aa gyi )
Maa: Aditi hogi mai dekhti hu
Vikrant: nahi aap rukiye mai dekta hu
Vikrant: hi aao
Aditi: hi,ab tabiyat kaisi lag rhi hai?
Vikrant: pura dun soya hu to acha lag rha hai
Aditi: ha,namaste auntie
Maa: namaste beta,tum thodi der baitho mai chai bana k lati hu
Aditi: arre nahi auntie aap takleef mat lijiye vaise b mujhe jaldi jana hai case se related kaam hai,apne itne pyar se dinner k lie bulaya tha toh thode samay ka break leke aa gyi
Maa: acha thik hai tum log aao baitho mai khana lagati hu
Aditi: auntie aap akele kyu karengi mai b ati hu
Maa: acha thik hai
Vikrant: mai bhi hu yaha mujhe b thoda khana de dena
Maa: nahi tujhe toh bhuka hi rakhte hai hum
(Aditi giggles)
(At dinner table)
Vikrant: acha Aditi wo uss lash ka kya hua koi aya pehchanne ya nahi
Aditi: nahi abhi tak toh koi nahi aya but Mumbai k sabi police stations me photo bhej di hai shayad jaldi hi kuch pata chal jaye
Vikrant: ha waise bhi face to pura kuchal dia tha uska,pehchan me thoda time to lagega hi aur...
Maa: offo vikku ye kya khana khate hue lash wash ki bate kar rha hai,thode samay to ye apna ACPpana chod
Aditi: auntie sahi keh rhi Vikrant aise khane k time pr iss trh ki bate nahi karte
Vikrant: ha main akele hi toh bate kar rha tha ap to apni auntie ki bat man kr chup chap khana kha rahi thi haina?
Aditi: ha bilkul
Vikrant ha? Wah or photo bhejne ki baat kisne ki?
Maa: woh toh tune pucha tabhi wo boli
Aditi: ha bilkul thik kaha auntie ne
Vikrant: wah bimar kya ho gya mere against to teaming hone lagi,jaldi thik hona padega ab toh warna ap log to puri AntiVikrant force bana loge
(Sab iss baat pr has padte hai)
Maa: acha Aditi tum Mumbai se hi ho ya job k liye ayi ho?
Aditi: auntie mai Delhi ki hu,yaha par to kuch time pehle hi posting hui hai
Maa: acha or tumhare maa papa wo bhi yaha aye hai tumhare aath ya wahi hai?
Aditi: nahi papa Delhi me hi hai apne business k liye or meri mumma ki kayi saal pehle hi death ho gyi
Maa: oh sorry. Waise tumne aage ka kya socha hai?
Aditi: koi khas planning ni hai auntie bas aise hi cases solve krke promotion pana hai or ek aisa ACP banna hai jo sadu na ho
((Acha ji main sadu ruko tum ab maa k samne badi hoshyari dikha rhi ho na ek bar wapas ane do tab batata hu))
Vikrant: ha bilkul
Maa: bohot achi baat hai pr mai kaam ki ni personal life k plan k bare me puch rhi thi mtlb shadi ka...
Vikrant: maaa... Kya ap bhi shadi wadi ki baat krne lgi,chodo na
Maa: khud to shadi krta ni dusro ko bhi mat karne dena
Vikrant: Aditi kitna time jaldi khao or niklo matlab case k lie late ho rha hoga na,jaldi karo jaldi
Maa: tu usko kyu bol raha hai,khud jaldi kha or dawai kha k aram kar
Vikrant: samajh ni aa rha ghar pr hu ya training camp me
(Dinner khatam,Aditi ko chodne Vikrant darwaje par jata hai and uski maa bhi hoti hai sath)
Aditi: acha auntie mai chalti hu namste or khana bahut tasty tha,bohot time baad maa k hath ka khana khaya,thank you
Maa: are isme thank you kaisa tu bhi to meri beti jaisi hai mere vikku ko jhelti hai pura time...
Vikrant: maa yaar apni pyari pyari baate karo na mujhe kyu bich me khich rhi ho?
Maa: chup,acha Aditi abhi jab tak mai yha hu tab tak khane or nashte k liye tum yhi ana aur ispe koi behas ni
Aditi: ok auntie
((Khana? Beta Vikrant maa ne Aditi ko chun lia apni bahu k tor pe,abhi tk to maa ne sapne me shagun k kangan bhi de dia hoga usko,waise uspe ache lagenge wo kangan,bohot hi pyare,wait mai kya soch rha hu,Vikrant tu b kya vikku jaisi bate kar raha hai,hosh me aa))
Vikrant: chalo mai tumhe car tak chod du
Aditi: ok
(Vikrant ki maa k thoughts: kitni achi jodi hai dono ki ek duje k liye bane ho aisa hi lgta hai. Bhagwan mere vikku ko akal de apni feeling ko samjhne ki,in dono k alawa inke bich ka pyar sab ko dikhta hai bas jaldi se inhe bhi ehsaas ho jaye)
( Aditi & Vikrant gadi ki trf jate hue)
Aditi: tumhari maa bohot sweet hai
Vikrant: ha pata hai tabhi to mujhe lagta hai k papa or inki arrange marriage hui hai
Aditi: kya? Kaise?
Vikrant: are maa jaisi sweet si ladki papa jaise ladke ko pasand kare,na nahi ho skta. Papa mera senior version hai.
Aditi: nahi aisa nahi hai kabhi-2 sweet & caring ladki ko sadu & PJ marne wale ladke bhi pasand aa jate hai
Vikrant: acha? Waise tum b sweet and caring ho toh kya tumhe pasand ayega koi sadu?
Aditi: pata ni dekhte hai. Anyways ab mai chalti hu,you take care. Bye.
Vikrant: bye and tum bhibapna dhyan rakhna kisi musibat me mat padna jab tak mai wapas na au,samjhi
Aditi: yes sir.
(Aditi k jane k baad bhi Vikrant waha thodi der ruk k sochta hai:- ajib ho tum bhi Aditi ek toh mai aise hi itna confused hu aur ab tum ye baate kar k chali gyi.)
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You are amazing baby girl!! Loving this SS.. hopefully ullu be updating it 😃
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Thanks @loveinshi for your help. Waise iska ab bas ek hi part bacha hai jo mai aj hi kar dungi.
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Hi guys, ye part iss ff ka last part hai kyunki maine iss ka main theme viditi aur vikku ki maa ki pehli meeting aur viditi pr maa k reaction pr rakha tha,jo ki ho chuka hai,waise bhi mai ye proposal and love confession k mamle me badi buri hu. But yes mai ek new ss likh rhi hu usko chaho to iska second season samajh sakte ho. Anyways enjoy 😊
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(Aditi Vikrant k ghar subah subah jati hai,jinhone last part padha hai wo jante hai ki kyu. Aur ha Vikrant duty join krne wala to Aditi usko pick krne k liye bhi ayi hai)
(Doorbell baji or maa ne darwaja khola)

Aditi: good morning auntie
Maa: good morning beta aao
Aditi: hmmm...aloo paratha banaya hai apne? Khushbu bahar tak ayi
Maa: ha,pasand hai tumhe?
Aditi: ha bohot
Maa: are wah thik hai fir vikku aa jaye to lagati hu wrna bolega mere bina hi khana shuru kar dia
Aditi: ha woh toh hai waise woh hai kahan?
Maa: taiyaar ho rha hai ata hi hoga
Aditi: acha
(Andar vikku k room me)
Vikrant: Aditi aati hogi,jaldi kar Vikrant. Ye kaisa envelope hai? Ye kya nayi musibat hai,maa bhi na sudherengi ni. Duniya ki sari maa apne beto ko sudharna chahti hai mein eklota beta hoon jo apni maa k sudharne ki prathna kar raha hai. Kya hoga mera?
(Bina dhyaan diye Vikrant room se bahar ata hai)
Vikrant: maa ye kya hai? Itni sari ladkiyo ki photos, maa mai bata raha hu mai ye photo voto k through ladki ni pasand nahi karne wala aur...Aditi tum kyu ayi nahi matlb kab ayi,pata hi ni chala
Aditi: tum ladkiyo ki photos leke aye usse thida pehle hi
Vikrant: sharam nahi ati senior ki bate sunti ho
Aditi: ab senior yun jor jor se bolega to sunne me sharam kyu ayegi?
Maa: tu bhi na bas bina break ki car ki trh chala aya aur ab iss bechari ki galti nikal raha hai
Vikrant: kamal hai log subah-2 nashta karte hai or mai tana kha raha hu. Waise tano k sath thoda nashta milega to tane digest bade ache se honge. Toh jaldi nashta do waise b aap logo ki wajh se bohot der ho gyi hai
Maa & Aditi: humari wajh se??
Vikrant: ni toh kya,chalo jaldi late ho rha hai
Maa: ye ni sudhrega. Chalo Aditi baith jao mai parosti hu
Maa: waise vikku tune mera kaam kia ya nahi?
Vikrant: maa mai wo photos ni dekhunga
Maa: are nalayak mai photos ki ni ticket ki baat kar rahi hu,kal ki train ki ticket karayi ya nahi
Vikrant: ha wo mai abhi joshi ko bol dunga aur joshi matlb deepak joshi jo k aadmi hai aur shadshuda hai
Maa: nashte k sath maar khayega?
Vikrant: ni ni mai itne se hi kaam chala lunga
Aditi: auntie aap kal jaa rahi hai par kyu?
Auntie: are ab vikku ki tabiyat thik ho gyi hai toh mai bhi wapas jaa rhi hu
Aditi: auntie thode din or ruk jayiye na
Vikrant: are Aditi samjha karo yaha meri tabiyat toh thik ho gyi pr waha papa ki tabiyat maa k bina kharab ho gyi
Maa (vikku ka kaan khichte hue): chup kar wrna bohot maar khayega
(Nashta khatam aur sab chale darwaje ki trf viditi ko chauki jo jana hai)
Maa: Aditi ye tiffin tumhara or vikku dono ka,apne pass hi rakhna iss bhukkad ko mat dena warna akele hi khaa jayega
Vikrant (dramatically): maa tum badal gyi maaa...kalyug aa gya kalyug
Maa: ho gya tera chal nikal ab wrna fir bolega k meri aur Aditi ki wjh se der hui
Vikrant: koi value hi ni reh gyi meri to,shadi kar li agar to aap to mujhe bhool hi jaogi
Maa: bilkul thik kaha chal ab jaa aur apna dhyaan rakhna or Aditi beta tum bhi apna dhyaan rakhna
Aditi: ji auntie, sham ko milte hai
(Car me )
Aditi: waise auntie ki baat maan kyu ni lete ho
Vikrant: mana toh hai ticket k liye joshi ko bol dia hai,tumhare samne toh kaha
Aditi: mai ticket ki ni dusri baat kar rahi hu
Vikrant: kon si baat
Aditi: shadi ki
Vikrant: kiski?
Aditi: tumhari
Vikrant: kisse?
Aditi: mujhe kya pata
Vikrant: toh kisse pata?
Aditi: Vikrant
Vikrant: Aditi
Aditi: Vikrant
Vikrant: Aditi
Aditi: offo Vikrant...
Vikrant: acha sorry sorry,waise tumhe itna interknow
kyu hai meri shadi me,joote churane ka irada hai kya?
Aditi: mujhe ni koi interest woh toh auntie kitni chinta krti hai isi liye kaha
Vikrant: acha auntie k liye,hmmm,thik hai jab karunga tb tumhe sabse pehle bataunga taki tumhe tumhari auntie ki tension na ho
Aditi: hmmm...waise ek baat puchu tumhe auntie ki dikhayi koi ldki pasand kyu ni ayi? Aisa mai ni auntie ko janna chahti hai toh isi liye maine pucha,auntie k liye u know
Vikrant: yeah I know, to auntie bata dena k mujhe apne type ki koi mili ni
Aditi: tumhare type ki mtlb? Aisa auntie puchengi na
Vikrant: ha ha mai samajh gya,mere type ki mtlb k koi aisi jo mere jaise KHADOOS ko sambhal sake
Aditi (blushes): acha hopefully tumhe jaldi waisi ldki mile
Vikrant: tumhe hi sabse pehle usse milwaunga,taki tum auntie ko bata sako,akhir tumhe itni fikar jo hai unki
Aditi: ha wo toh hai,mai b kafi excited hu usse milne k liye,auntie ko bohot khushi hogi na.
Vikrant: ha bilkul.
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So everyone yeh ff khatam,thanks aap logo k support k liye. Waise mere agle ss me Vik ki ex problem me fasegi Viditi & ek new imaginary character uski help karenge or Aditi ko Vikrant or uski ex ki closeness se jalan hogi. Kaisa laga ye theme?
Read,Like & Comment.😊
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Hey ye update bohot achha Tha.. mein seriously ViDiti ke bich me banter miss Kar rahi hu..hope show me bhi ye log thoda lade zagde..😆
Btw envelope me Kya Tha?
Aur wo nayi SS ka plot bhi mast lag raha hai!
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Originally posted by: loveinshi

Hey ye update bohot achha Tha.. mein seriously ViDiti ke bich me banter miss Kar rahi hu..hope show me bhi ye log thoda lade zagde..😆

Btw envelope me Kya Tha?
Aur wo nayi SS ka plot bhi mast lag raha hai!

envelope me girls ki photo thi,jo vikku ki maa ne rakhi thi. Ha unki ek cute si nok jhok toh milni chahiye. Waise dusri story ka prolog maine post kar dia hai
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Originally posted by: Babygirl287

envelope me girls ki photo thi,jo vikku ki maa ne rakhi thi. Ha unki ek cute si nok jhok toh milni chahiye. Waise dusri story ka prolog maine post kar dia hai


Ohh.. mujhe laga uski maa ne subtly Aditi ki photo daal Kar de di envelope me..😆

Haan wo prolog padha meine.. bohot interesting hai👏
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