Chapter 5
"Papa Meri baat toh suno, abse esa kabhi nai hoga, I'm really sorry papa, Aap usse yahan Bhej do, I won't let you down again, Mennu maaf kardo. Kasam se Aaj ke bad me usse esa koi bhi rishta nai rakhungi" she said
... Speaker said something
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"I'm sorry, Mujhe maaf kardo, Me shayad ab tumse kabhi nai mil paungi" she said her eyes streaming
"Whats wrong? hua kya?" he asked
"________________" she narrated the incident "I'm really sorry" she continued and left her wiping off her non-stop tears.
"I can not Lose Kriya" he yelled to himself "I Love you kriya" he hushed to himself ...
New twists, New charachters, New suspense, New secrets.. all comming up...
Bole toh likhne me bada maza aane vala ha.. Yupieee!!
Ab isse pehle ki mujhe jutte maro me bhaging...
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Comments (49)
read it in one gooo... awsumm...
11 years ago
Wow that was a lovely update Please please update soon:)
11 years ago
thriller is quite interesting...waiting for update...
11 years ago
chapter 4...amazing...kriyaansh part was superb...swaron first part was so cute bt later...poor sw...th nx for pm...
11 years ago
chapter 3amazing...loved kriyam...aww rey jealous frm sw...loved it...bt poor rey...thnx for pm n sorry for late comment... kriyansh_Alisha2013-04-19 11:59:00
11 years ago
You couldve scraped atleast!cant i expect this much?
11 years ago
What? you wont come OL? and is this the time to be told a thing like THIS? you couldve told me before, but NO! you did NOT!! 😡 😡
11 years ago
well, ever since my school has started i have not been on n i have told dis to ppl yesterday only. n i didnt found u on then!
11 years ago
its ok k...No probs
11 years ago
how could u man? this is not a thing to be told in a time like this? it is so unfair! you could've told me before right? But NO! you Did NOT!
11 years ago